FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the nice update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

WOW Shravu MICHI on a date on Yatch.yeah

Prachi is very very impatient one.heehehheeee😆Hope they have a rommantic date yeah sure ....no one dare to distrub them.no one will i promise

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.

nice update, im looking forward to the next part to see how the date goes :D

thank you

yeah surely i will update it

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey great partthank you

Aww Michi are so sweet togetherthanksssssssssssssss😳
update soon pleaseyeah surely

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow tht date was romantic! waitin to see how the rest of the date goes..continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update.the yatch was a good choice. Please do update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kuku..

wow tht date was romantic!☺️ waitin to see how the rest of the date goes..continue soonyeah surely i will

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kaswetta

Lovely update.the yatch was a good choice.yeah thanks sooo muchPlease do update soon.

yeah surely i will

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Posted: 16 years ago
I think you'll will be forgiving me for the long and boring update.
Part-10
She slowly breaks from the hug and turn around. "Milind it's so beautiful. "Milind stood there with folded hands and was staring at her rather mused. "Milind your so romantic." "hey come on Prach, this is not it." Milind hands over the rare orchids bouquet to Prachi. "these are so lovely Milind." "Anything for you sweety." Milind goes towards the edge of the yatch and supports his hands on the railing and enjoys the atmosphere with his closed eyes. Prachi follows him, leaning on the rails facing her back to the sea. 'Milind, it's look like you like the sea much", Prachi asks him, playing with the flowers. "not more than you, Prachi. Today is the day where I never forget it in my life, will you ever Prachi." "no Milind I would forget the world but not you and this day. This my most memorable valentine's day gift I got it." "so what about inside sea diving", Prachi was startled by this. "what Milind come again." "can I have the pleasure of diving with you, underneath the sea." Milind pulls Prachi a bit closer towards him. "na Milind I'm afraid of depths and heights." Milind could see frieghtful eyes of Prachi. "ok then I'll alone go for diving." "no, Milind it's so dangerous in there." "do you trust me Prachi" "yeah", he sees her tearful eyes, places a kiss on her forhead. "wait for me, I'll be back in 15 minutes." Prachi sees Milind going for diving from the deck. She was very much frightened about Milind. She shuts her eyes tightly and prays to for for Milind's safety. Milind was so adamant for going on with diving but she was not able to stop me. Milind somehow made her convinced that nothing was going to happen to him. An hour passed by but there was no sign of him, prachi got tensed and various thoughts arised in her mind. She blamed herself for letting Milind go. "waiting for me Prachi", prachi jerked back hearing a familiar voice from the back. She turns back and finds Milind there. He wore a white shirt, two buttons were left unbuttoned and was wearing goggles. Prachi runs towards him, hugs him tightly and starts crying loudly. "Milind why did you do that. My breathe almost stopped not finding you coming up. What would happen to me if something happens to you. can't think a bit Milind." Prachi pushes him from the hug and goes down the deck and stands near edge of the yatch, tears spilling on her face. "hey Prachi I'm sorry about it", Milind followed Prachi, pulling his ears. "what's the need of saying sorry, it's your wish", Prachi turned her face away from him with tears in her eyes. "ok, then from now onwards I never evr leave you PRachi that's my promise.' He pulls her towards her and and wipes away her tears and places a sweet kiss on her cheek. Prachi retains her smile and starts staring at the sea. Milind leans on the railings and bends backwards staring at her and starts caressing her cheek, with his thumb. "Prachi, are you still angry on me." 'no Milind", she replies looking away from him. "but you don't look into my eyes and say." She looks into his eyes, "Milind……………………I'm…………………………….., I can't take this any more', she hugs me thightly. "why, prachi can't you tell me the reason", "Milind………..", "hmmmmm tell me Prachi", Milind asks her, soothing her hair. "Milind I'm hungry", replies still huggin him. "what!" , Milind was almost all jumped from the hug with a jerk. "I thought you were………..oh god Prachi you are…….." "really Milind I'm hungry, I missed my breakfast today." Prachi started making puppy faces towards Milind. Milind burst out into laugh. Few minutes later they stop at a port village and get down there for a afternoon nap for having their lunch. They spend the time in the village for few hours and then get back to the yatch. It was almost in the evening, both sat together and were watching the sun set. "milind I never seen this beauty", Milind starts gazing Prachi, "yeah Prachi, you are right I never seen this beauty anywhere", he starts caressing her cheek and places a kiss on it. "milid what are you upto", 'enjoying the beauty", Milind replied still his eyes fixed on her. Prachi turns towards and finds him gazing her. She gets up and about to leave the place. Milind stops by holding her hand and pulls her towards him making her to fall on him. Prachi lowers her gaze and brushes her hair back to the ear. Milind bends and lifts up her chin. Their both lips were touching each other. Prachi was not able to bear him proximity. Milind lifts his head, lets out a small laugh and lifts her into his arms. "Milind what are you doing" 'Prachi can I say you something, your are so impatient wait you'll get to know everything." He takes her inside the yatch and puts her down in the lounge area infront of the mirror. He slowly unclasps her platinum pendant chain from the back, Prachi was not able to take the heat anymore. "hey Prachi close your eyes for a moment, don't open till I tell you." Prachi closed her eyes, as told by Milind. He slids a gold chain with the wild pearl as a pendant. He then kisses her naked neck, making her slightly jerk. "open your eyes, my beauty", milind whispers in her ear. Prachi was astonished by seeing the wild pearl pendant. "Milind where did you get from this rare pearl." "can you guess this from where I brought this." Prachi pouts her lips and nods her head in negative. "ok I'll tell you", Milind turns Prachi towards him, and places his hands around her shoulders, he continues. "from the underneath the sea." "Milind why did you risk your life for that." Prachi was even more astonished hearing Milind. "see prachi, for seeing you happy I can do anything. One day I heard Ayesha telling that you love pearls. So anything for my love, I don't bother from where the gift is from either it is from underneath or from above, I want my love to have everything in her life. I don't want to see you, anything missing from you." he places a soft kiss on her forhead. "milind you are the limit." She playfully hits Milind chest. "come on wear this dress and come up, I'll be waiting for you up",saying milind goes up. But Prachi stops him. "Milind I want to talk to my dad. And I want you to be beside and talk with him." "yeah sure anything for you." Prachi dalled her father, Inder Shah's number, and waited for his answer. "what my little princess called me at this time, I think she is really missing me, huh." Prachi could hear the voice from the other side and she gets excited hearing the voice. "dad I'm really missing you." she spoke excitedly. "and you know dad, today I'm really really happy. And ask me why I'm happy, ask why", "why princess, tell me, I don't know." Inder asks Prachi sweetly hearing her excited voice. "I'm in love dad, you know your princess is in love with a guy. And you will also love him so much dad. If you meet him once, you never forget that person your lifetime. And your princess is really happy with him." "ok, ok princess I'm also happy that your in love. So when are you going to introduce your boyfriend to me?" making Prachi to come back to her senses. "what about now dad, he's with me at present, want to talk to im. Wait dad, sorry I forgot to mention his name, his name issss……………………..", suddenly she hears the disconnected sound from the other side. She sees her cell and finds that there was no network in that particular place. He sadly sunks down in the sofa nearby. Milind who was still there sits besides her. "Milind this stupid cell have always network problems. Can't wait till I mentioned your name to dad." Prachi says sadly. "it's ok sweety, noting is goning to happen. Now cheer up." Milind cups her face in his palms. "ok", prachi retaind her smile. "come on get ready fast and come up. I'll be waiting for you at the deck." He goes up and Prachi gets ready in the black evening gown given by Milind. Few minutes later Prachi comes up on to the deck. There she sees Milind waiting for her. Seeing her coming he goes to taowrds and gently takes her hand and kneels in front of her. He takes out a small jewel box, opens it. It was large diamond ring. Prachi could not believe her eyes. "prachi……' milind started, seeing Prachi's eyes, "Prachi, I really did not imagine how my wife should be, but when I saw you for the first time, I then started thinking of that. She should be just like, yeah just like you. will you if you have time for me, spend the rest of your life with me, only me." Both shared an eyelock between them neither of them talked. "Milind………", Prachi broke the silence between them, she continues, "Milind, I don't know whether my decision is right or not. But I'm happy that you will be there with me for rest of my life. Thank you Milind for this." Milind slowly gets up, slids the ring into her left hand finger, pulls her closer, Prachi was feeling his heat intensely. His piercing looks were making her to shiver more. not able to face his eyes she closes her eyes, breathing heavily. He lifts her chin with his finger, and bends towards her lips. His eyes waited for an acceptance. Prachi slowly opens her eyes and stares at him for sometime and blinks in acceptance. His lips slowly caught her lips, kissing her passionately. Prachi was enchanted by her first kiss of her life with a man she loved more than anyone else. Few minutes later both breaks out from the kiss, and Prachi blushing hus him thightly not wanting to leave him forever. After that they had early dinner. At the dinner either of them were not interested in eating, their hands were interlaced with each others while their legs beneath the table and their eyes locked towards each other. They slowly moved away from the deck and slept lazily on the floor of yatch both facing the night sky. Milind's one hand was behind his head and the other was on Prachi's hair soothing it, where Prachi laid her head on Milind's chest. "Milind" "hmmmmmmm" "Milind why are you so silent, what are you thinking about." "nothing, just about our future." "future…..Milind how will our future be" "Milind lowers his eyes on her, and lets out a slight relief. "very happy, Prachi. You and I make everything surrounding us perfect."he replies, soothing her lazily. "prachi, what if your father says no to our relationship." "Milind, don't ever think like that. If in any case he tells no, we'll elope from here Milind." 'what!!" Milind suddenly got up and sat,making to Prachi also sit beside him closely. "no Prachi we are not doing this." "ok, Milind it's ok. But my father never said no to his princess wishes. So he is not going say no Milind." Milind bends towards her for another kiss, but Prachi pushes him away and goes towards the edge of the yatch. "hey what happened." He smiles at PRachi blushing. "no Milind, this time I fear that would give you everything after this kiss. but I wanted to wait till our marriage is done to go beyond this." Her eyes were fixed to the floor of the yatch. "sure Prachi." He lifts up her chin and continues, "I respect you and our relation, so nothing is going to happen that would embarss you PRachi." He then hugs thightly protecting her from the whole bad world out there. It was midnight when they touched the shores of Mumbai. Milind had dropped Prachi near her house, giving her goodnight kiss he let her go inside. Once inside Prachi tiptoed into her room seeing that no one was disturbed. Once in the room she has the quick shower and changes into her night dress and falls on the bed, slids into sleep thinking and dreaming of Milind. Milind on other side reaches his place, goes into his room, have a shower and changing into nightdress he also slowly slids into sleep thinking and dreaming about Prachi. Either of them did not know the consequences that both are going to face in the near future and Milind did not had got any chance for thinking what a big mess he created around himself…..;…….


Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoy and plz do comment. I tried my best to bring out MICHI romance utmost. I think you'll will be forgiving me for the long and boring update. Hope this is not a toture from me. Hope you'll enjoy this part/



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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part, i love the michi moments. im looking forward to prachi introducing milsi to her dad.

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