FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice update shravu.. they are so in love.. waiting for them to realize abt Inder and his relation to Prachi/ rivalry to Milind.. i feel with the way Prachi reacted to her friend eloping, she might be willing to run away with Milsi, while he wud be totally against it.. just wondering😳.. continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update
Aww Michi momnets were perfect
wonder what inder's reaction will be to milsi?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

wow shrav!! that was the most romantic valentines date evaa!!! thank you very much😊m stil in a state of awe with the way milind has done all those things for her...the pearls, the ring...☺️it was just too beautiful!!!😍really
lovely part!! thank youi really dont want prachi to misunderstand milind in all this😕...there will be noo misunderstanding dear
cant wait for the next!! surely gues itl be wit alot of firworks btwn milind n inder!! yeah offcourse lot of fireworks cont soon🤗yeah surely i will

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kuku..

nice update shravu..thank you they are so in love.. 😊yeah waiting for them to realize abt Inder and his relation to Prachi/ rivalry to Milind..very soon i feel with the way Prachi reacted to her friend eloping, she might be willing to run away with Milsi, while he wud be totally against it.. just wondering😳.. this will be the total shocker and the twist continue soonyeah surely

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Great updatethanks

Aww Michi momnets were perfectthank you soooooooo much😃
wonder what inder's reaction will be to milsi?you have to wait for that

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part-11
The morning sun tried to enter the room, but was prevented by the curtains, and the window pane. The room was cosy with the A/C on.the covers are still up indicating that bed was still occupied. The clock near the bedside showed it was8'o clock in the morning. The room was calm, until the cell rang loudly. A lazy hand from the cover was shown up searching for the cell. At last it felt the cell, picked it up and again goes inside the covers. A lazy voice now can be heard clearly. "Milind let me sleep for sometime." She paused "what"she jumped from the sleeping position sitting on the bed with the cover covering her half face. She just pushes away the covers which were irritating her till now. "Milind this is not fair." "you promised Prachi, that your going to spend every minute of these three days with you only. Now what happened to you." came Milind's voice from the other end. "Milind I'm dreaming about you and you disturbed my dream."she lazily yawns. "when I'm ready to spend the whole life with you then what's the need of dreaming about me." Milind teased her. "Milind you are too much." "I'm too much. Now get up baby and get ready within half-n-hour time. I'll be coming to pick you up." "Milind what to wear" "anything goes with you. now hurry up" he disconnects the phone. Prachi rushes to the washroom and gets freshed up. After few minutes she comes out with the bathrobe and opens her wadrobe. She tries each and every dress but seems not be satisfied. At last she takes out a light sky colour kurti and jeans and wears it. She sees herself in the mirror. "looking like a fatty." She teases herself and removes it and tries another kurti. This time she wears a light orange and green mixed, little tightly exposing her thin figure. "this is looking perfect" she blews a a flying kiss to the mirror, ties a pony and brushing up with light makeup and started dumping some of her colthes and some of her accessories in her college bag. She picks it up takes a deep sigh and rushes downstairs. Downstairs, she was stopped by her mother, she looked questioningly towards Prachi. "mom, I'm going to Ayesha's place for combine studies so I won't be coming for three days." She was about to go away but her mother stops her. "did your father called you and said when he's going to be back." "mom, actually I called him, but didn't say about this anything. But now let me go, I'm in a hurry. Bye." She runs away before her mother could stop her again. "like father, like daughter." She murmured under her breathe, seeing Prachi running fast.

She reaches the main gate of their house, sees to left and right and runs towards Milind, where he was leaning on the bike. Seeing her coming towards him, he takes his position and waits for her to get o the back of the bike. They sped away from the house and heads towards the beach house. "Milind you told we'll be meeting at Ayesha's house, but why did we stop here at the beach house." Seeing Milind parking the bike at the beach house. "actually, we have to change the plan at last minute. Do you have any problem." Prachi nods her head, indicating she doesn't have any problem. Both go inside, they see Neev sitting in one corner and Ayesha in another corner, facing their backs to each other and their heads buried in their books. Ayesha, who lifted the head on hearing the noise of the steps gets delighted to find Prachi there and comes running and hugs her. "Prachi how was your date with Milind yesterday." Ayesha asks after breaking away from the hug. "you know one thing,"Prachi pauses, "Milind proposed me." Replies showing the diamong ring to Ayesha. "wow so sweet, Prachi, it's sooooooooo beautiful." "if Milind gives it won't it be beautiful., what Milind", Prachi turns towards Milind who stood there staring at them, with his hands in the pocket and enjoying it. "yeah sure." Neev silently sat in his place and watched everything that was going on. He saw how Prachi and Milind were both happy with each other. But suddenly, instead of being happy, he became gloomly when he suddenly started remembering that day. He started thinking deeply, whether to tell them the truth or not. "come on Milind we'll sit outside and do our work." she drags Milind towards the gazebo which was situated outside the house.

"should I tell me or not." Neev utters in a loud whisper, which Ayesha hears him. "what do you want to tell him, and what you are not going to tell him." Ayesha asked Neev looking at him suspiciously. "it's none of your business." "what is my business what not you need not explain me Neev. But atleast can you tell me what's worrying you." Ayesha replies. "but I can't trust you." was the reply that came back instantly from Neev. "it was not my fault, Neev."Ayesha threws her book on the floor, angrily.

Milind and Prachi sat together, Prachi leaning on Milind and preparing for her exams and Milind was busily doing his work on the laptop. Prachi closes her book, and sits straight, "Milind" "yeah Prachi what's the matter. She clutes his arm with her arms and leans on his shoulder, "is it necessary for you to go to Londaon day after tomorrow. Why can't you stay back." "nah PRachi. First I thought staying back. but now I should go there and settle suruthi's and Saket's matter and also our both matter also." "will they like me Milind", Prachi asks him lazily. "actually they'll adore you. but what about your parents Prachi." "it just depends on my dad. Mom just follows his decision. But Milind I don't want you to go back alone. Something is going to be wrong." "What Prachi." Milind closes his laptop and and pulls Prachi more closely towards him makes her lean on his chest, "nothing will happen Prachi. It's matter of two months and I will back here just to take you along with me. I promise." "I have an idea for this Milind. I'll tell my dad, that I need a long holiday and I'll come with you to London." "what about your exams Prachi, whose going to write, huh." "they are not so important than you, Milind." "no you are going to take the exams before our marriage ok. Do you understand." Milind says, soothing her hair.

'then whose fault is that. Can't handle anything properly." "why do you misunderstand me Neev." Ayesha shouts back angrily at Neev. "what an idiot I am trusting something in someone like you." "yeah, Neev you were right, then why did you loved me." "yeah I loved you so I'm regretting it now."

"Milind, what about my dad. Will he say yes to the our relation." "don't know Prachi. But one thing is sure. We are not eloping. We are going to face whatever the consequences are." "yes Milind, as you say. I have an better idea for this. We'll say that we both were having affair with each other. I mean ONS ka" "Prachi you have gone crazy." Prachi sits up straight and hugs him tightly, "yeah gone crazy over you, Milind." "are you sure that he's going to believe in this crap." Milind asks Prachi soothing her hair. "I'll tell I'm pregnant with your baby and show him the fake reports to him." Milind immediately pushes her and he also moves back shocked. He composes himself and turns towards Prachi. He cups her face in his palms. "see Prachi, there will be fair dealing regarding this matter." "Yeah Milind", she frees are face from his palms "we will have fair dealings with dad. But Milind, everything is fair in love and war na. then everthing goes now." She makes a bunny face, raising her eyebrows. "PRachi your are too much. Now listen to me Prachi, till I come back to India your not going to think about this matter. After I come back again I will talk to your dad, ok." "ok", Prachi hugs him tightly. "Milind I will miss so much." "I too sweety.' "how can we live without seeing eachother, Milind." "we'll have video conferencing what say Prachi." "yeah that a nice idea." Both faces each, comes very closely, their lips brushing each other. "you're not going to do it Milind." Prachi asks Milind after see finds Milind had not proceeded to kiss her. "Nahhhh", Prachi immediately stands up and starts going towards the house. "why are you going inside." Milind asks Prachi relaxing a bit. "I'm going to ask Neev, whether, he is going to give me that you just now stopped it." "what"milind jumps from the bench from where he was sitting and runs towards Prachi and pulls her towards him, giving a possessive kiss to Prachi.

"what did I do Neev, so you are regretting loving me." "I told you to tell the truth to her when she is composed. Not when she is very happy or very sad. And becoz you didn't heard me, you are responsible for that." "Yeah Neev I'm responsible for the thing I never done." She paused in the middle. "I never told her the truth and how can I responsible for that." "what'" Neev was shocked and hi lower jaw dropped opened hearing this.

Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoy and plz do comment.




Edited by shravu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update
loved michi scenes
hope neesha problem will solve in next part
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

great updatetanku very much😃
loved michi scenes😆😆
hope neesha problem will solve in next partyeah yeah
continue soonyeah surely

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update.
MICHI...they r so cute...Prachi want to say they have ONS....did she watching more BT serials..kya????
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part, prachi thinking all sorts just to stay with milsi lol

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