FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: y_tanuja

great update loved the michi talking about their heights😉.pls cont soon.

tahnk you. yeah i will surely.

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Posted: 16 years ago
hehehe the height part was very cute😆😆😆... now wht r those papers?😕
waitin to read abt their date😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
very sweet part
Michi are so sweet in this
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kuku..

hehehe the height part was very cute😆😆😆... now wht r those papers?😕
waitin to read abt their date😳

heehehehe

papers are not concrend abt property and all

no need of waiting i'll update it soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

very sweet part

Michi are so sweet in this
cant wait for the next part

thank you very much

i'll update the next part very soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
I'm thinking to stop of my FF in middle, i don't want to dare to write the FF with only few people responding.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part-9
"hey Prachi I'm sorry. Really really sorry, sweety. I promise you that I will be taking you for a date. But don't ask when and where it's a big surprise. I promise that whole day, there will be no one to disturb us, just you and me. Ok" "Milind, I can't wait to meet you. I feeling all empty around me. I'm feeling so lonely Milind without you. It have been 15 days since we met in the party after that we are just talking in the phone. See if you break your promise I will never ever speak to you." "don't be soooooo angry my Ice-princess, you may burn up. My dear, come on cheer up. I promise. At any time I will just screw up Neev in my work as he screwed me up in his business and spend time with you. I'm also dying to meet you cutey" he hears Prachi's laughing on the other side. "uff at last I could hear someone laughing after a very very long time." Milind teased Prachi. "ok then see you soon Prachi", "you too Milind." Both disconnects their respective phones thinking about each other. Milind takes out some registration papers, goes out of the building and gives instructions to the driver, while getting inside. He opens his laptop but leaves it untouched for few minutes. A flash of smile appears on his face, seeing the screen savers of Prachi's pics which he had secretly taken in the party, without her knowledge. After some distance he asks the driver to stop the car and goes inside the mall. After a few minutes he comes back with few packets in his hand. He reaches the desired destination, after some time. He exchanges a few words with the persons over there and hands over the papers he got and gets a key and some other receipts from them. He makes his way back to the office. While in the car,he kept on thinking about Prachi. He takes out his cell and starts dailling her number. "hey Prachi why can't we meet now." "Milind are you free now." "yeah PRachi, only for you." "so'''''where do we meet" "hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.errrrrrrrr in the beach. Is it ok for you?" "anywhere and anytime with you is ok, Milind." "ok then I'll wait for you, bye" "bye, I'll be there in a few minutes." Both disconeects the phone and feel excited meeting each other. Few minutes later. Prachi arrives at the beach, finds him sitting lazily and staring the sea. "waiting for me for a long time." "na I just arrived." Milind replied still staring the sea. Prachi settles beside him. "where are we going for a date,Milind." Milind just looks at her, lets out a small laugh, "I think you are impatient", "no Milind I'm very excited''." "it's a surprise, so you should wait." "ok then, but can't wait for l;onger time." Milind wraps his hand around her shoulder and pulls her bit closer. "you know one thing Prachi, it like when I'm with you, the whole world looks beautiful for me." "me too, Milind" Milind looks at Prachi, a small smile that was playing on her lips mused him a lot. "don't stare at me like that, your looks are piercing, I can't take it." Milind turns away his head with a smile on his face. "come on Prachi lets have a small walk." Milind stands up, dusting his back. Prachi streches her hand lazily towards Milind. He holds her hand and pulls her up. "you look so lazy today?" "not really." Both of them walks lazily, with their hands wrapping around each other.

"ok, then the work should complete by today evening at any cost." Neev saw Milind a bit restless that day. "Milind never seen you being so tensed" "I'm afraid how my date is going to be with Prachi." "cool down Milind, your gifts have been reached to Prachi." Neev immediately stands up to leave. "hey Neev what happened to you suddenly. I need you here for checking the file." "I'll''''.. I'll '.be back soon." Milind could see paleness in Ayesha's face and understood the reason. "Neev, now you are not going any where." Neev sat down gloomily. "now you both are helping me out with my dress for tomorrow." Hem saw both sitting there gloomily. "why you both are sitting like that. Come on speak. I don't both of you'll sit like that. Even Prachi is worried with your behaviour. I don't want MY Prachi, to worry on something like this." "yeah, Milind im sorry, I should not be sitting gloomily. Now tell me where are you planning to take Prachi for a date tomorrow. Actually she's so excited when she received your gifts." Ayesha changed the topic, cheering herself. Milind simply sat they, and went into deep thoughts. "ahem", Milind jerked when he hears the noise. "are you in this world." A small smile payed on his lips. "come on Neev, we'll do a bit of shopping and I'm not going to wake up till late night." Milind dragged Neev forcefully with him, as he saw him lazily sitting on the chair and playing with the paper weight.

Prachi was excited about her date with Milind. The before day Milind had rang her and informed about the date but she was still impatient to know where they were going as Milind still kept that one as secret. She stood in front of the mirror, seeing at dress she wore. It was a white sleeveless top with a knee length frilled cut at the bottom. It was the dress that Milind had sent it with the Ayesha. A small curve of smile appears on her face. She picks up the chain with platinum pendant, this was also was sent by him. She wears it around her neck and ear tops and stares at the mirror. She comes back to senses hearing her mobile ringing. "hello, yeah ok bas 5mintues, I'll be there bye", she disconnects the phone. She takes a hair into a pony. She looks at the mirror and nods her head smiling and leaves the hair, gives a slight brush over the hair, and gives a final touch up of her makeup and sprays a mild perfume. She sees at the mirror turns left and right and back making sure that everything is perfect. She blews a flying kisses to the mirror and grabbing her cell, she makes her way to the mansion entrance where Milind promised. She sees him that he was waiting for her. She runs towards him and hugs him. He was wearing white suit with white shirt and the top two buttons unbuttoned. He leds her into the car and the driver makes the way to the destination. Prachi could not make out where he was taking her. After sometime, Milind takes out a cloth and blindfolds Prachi. "Milind what are you up to." "hey wait for a few minutes sweety, you'll get to know everything." He places a sweet kiss on her forhead. The car stops, Milind cautiously makes Prachi to come out of the car by holding her hands. "Milind where are you taking me" "have patience Prachi, few minutes after you will get to know everything." He takes her along with her at a certaing point and stops infront of the yatch where it was standing. Milind just smiles and lifts up Prachi into his arms and carries her into the yatch. A miles after the yatch had gone, nearly in the middle, Milind opens the blindfolds of Prachi's eyes. Prachi looks around shocked and excited, hugs Milind tightly.

Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoy and plz do comment.




Edited by shravu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

😊 nice part ... plz cont soon

Edited by dangerrose - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow Prachi and Milind on a date, Nice update continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dangerrose

😊nice part ... plz cont soon

thanku very much

yeah surely i will

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