FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
oh no!! wat had milind done?!but in a way m glad he did that cuz inder had no right in bringing personal matters into buisness... and neev...poor him..he knws everythin and yet he cant tell it to milind nt wanting to hurt him or prachi...i hope both and neev and ayesha comes up wit some great plans to make up wit milind and inder😃
fab one...cont soon🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
thanks for the nice update trouble is coming michi way thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
nice update
not so sure what will happen to michi due to millind's temper
neesha continue to intrigue me
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Nice to see Milsi win the tendre, but I have a feeling that Inder will not let this go easily.regarding this I don't think he would create some problems in Milind's business.I see trouble comming for MICHI....just as Neev suspects too.but not so soon, I think so. Please continue!surely.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

oh no!! wat had milind done?!but in a way m glad he did that cuz inder had no right in bringing personal matters into buisness..by the way he sould have heard Neev's warning he was givig from time to time. and neev...poor him..he knws everythin and yet he cant tell it to milind nt wanting to hurt him or prachi...i hope both and neev and ayesha comes up wit some great plans to make up wit milind and inder😃but for this they should make with each other na.

fab one...thanks cont soon🤗surely

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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: rosie111

thanks for the nice update trouble is coming michi way thanks

not so soon, after sometime later

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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: AH01

nice update

not so sure what will happen to michi due to millind's temper
neesha continue to intrigue me

nothing will happen to MICHI. thanks

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
man Inder is rude! why does he have to pick a fight with milsi like tht?
hmm waitin to see how it affects michi relation
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Part-7

After the lunch, all of them went into the mall for shopping. As soon as they entered Prachi and Milind became busy in shopping. Neev slowly strolled inside and was lazily seeing the things over there not interested in the shopping.


"what happened, Neev you look so sad. You should be happy that your cousin had got the deal." He jerked his head when heard Ayesha's voice from behind.

But he ignores her and moves forward. Ayesha runs behind him. She stops him. "neev come on, once you look at them", she points at MICHI. "do you look like a very happening couple na. they look cho chwet." She playfully puts her arm on his shoulder admiring both of them.

Neev not able to control the anger, he holds Ayesha's arm that was on his shoulder, and pushes her forcefully away from him. "what the hell are you woman, how many times I should tell don't follow me and irritate me." "but'''''Neev". "just leave me alone and finish your shopping." Ayesha gaped at Neev. She knows that he hates her. But it was not the thing that was worrying but someother one was making more irritated and he was taking all of his frustration on her.

She moves towards were both were shopping. "Milind this is not nice, I like this" , Prachi picks up a pink colour skirt. "hey this a common colour. I see every girl wearing this colour. Why don't you try this." He picks up a short skirt for her. "do you like this?" Prachi rolls her eyes. "Neevu told that you don't like this type of dresses." "ya but, if it for my girlfriend it's ok, you look so'.." "shut up, Milind,don't be naughty this a mall", Prachi cuts of in between. "hey what are you both doing here. Come on Prachi, we need to buy a gift for Sadna's birthday." Ayesha pulls her away. Milind stands and stares at PRachi. In the gift section, Ayesha and Prachi were trying to select a gift. Prachi's eyes fell on the mannequins but she keeps it back after seeing the price.

Milind sees everything from far and moves towards the section, picks up the mannequin and goes from there. After few minutes they all come out of the mall, goes near the car and starts keeping their things in the car. "hey Prachi what about a small walk, want to talk to you for sometime." Milind stood their waiting for her answer. Prachi looks at Neev and Ayesha, Milind understands. "Neev, a small favour from you. Why don't you and Ayesha go to PRachi's house and put her bags in her house and you'll go to your houses I'll be back after sometime. "but Milind, we have some work na", "Neev, plz I'm not in the mood to do it now." Prachi looks with a pleasing face towards Neev and Ayesha. "ok, Milind, I'll drop her things in her house."

They both stood till the car zoomed away from there. They also leave the place. Neev was driving the car and Ayesha was sitting beside him and was watching him silently. She didn't understand why he was behaving like that instead being happy about the deal. Is it becoz of me being with him, she thought. No it cannot be, something other might worrying im. "Neev'''''.", he ignored her. "Neev, what's the matter. Why you don't want to share it with me. Is everything ok." Neev angrily gazed at her and turns away his head from her. "I don't want to share anything with you. It will be the worst mistake that I don't want to repeat it again by sharing this with you." "Neev you misunderstood me", "no Ayesha I never misunderstood you, but actually understood what type of girl you are. And one more thing, please don't act infront of Prachi as a friend of hers, ok, I know your intentions clearly. But keep away from her." "Neev you misunderstood me. I'm ready to explain what happened that day. I'm also ready to say sorry for that. I don't have any connections with that incident actually." "but you were there at that spot." "it was a coincident." "see I don't want any explanations from you Ayesha, what ever matters to me is you are the culprit and I don't want the history to be repeated again. And for godsake please leave me alone for sometime." He increases the volume of the radio. Ayesha wipes her eyes and looks out of the window.
Just then they become alert hearing a caller talking to the RJ in the radio.
(Red for RJ and blue for the caller.)
Hai, whose this calling
It's Raghav from Banglore calling.
What's up dude, want to share something or want to pass any message for you girlfriend as Valentine's Day is ahead
Yeah, this for my girlfriend Riya. Actually she misunderstood me for some reason.
Oh''so sad,
I want to pass a sweet message for her.
Ok
Riya, I'm sorry. Actually I should have told you before'.errrrrrrr'''..no problem, but I promise you in the future that I won't give you a chance for misunderstanding me. Please forgive and forget. Will you be my Valentine.

Neev lets out a soft laugh and nods his head, "silly", he utters. Ayesha looks at him, "sorry", he turns at her. "sorry, for what. Sorries told when they do wrong unintentionly. But what you have done was intentional." "Neev. Butttttttttttttt", Ayesha stopped in the midway, thinking it was no use at that particular point.

So, Raghav I hope your girlfriend , forgives you. Have a nice Valentine's day . A sweet song dedicated to the chweet couple.

Song do pal ruke starts, Neev tries to reduce the volume but Ayesha stops him. Both take away their glances from each other.

Do, pal ruka, khwaabon ka kaarvaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan

Tum the ke thi koyi ujli kiran
Tum the ya koyi kali muskaayi thi
Tum the ya tha sapnon ka tha saawan
Tum the ke khushiyon ki ghata chhaayi thi
Tum the ke tha koyi phool khila
Tum the ya mila tha mujhe naya jahaan
Do pal ruka khwaabon ka kaarvaan
Aur phir chal diye tum kahaan ham kahaan
Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan

(Pink for Ayesha and green for Neev)
Why doesn't he forgive me or understands me. How could I convince him that I'm not wrong.
What you did cannot be forgiven Ayesha. What is happening also I cannot share it with you. You have a done big mistake four years back. Now we are in the same situation and I don't want to you repeat the same mistake.
Ayesha takes a quick glance of Neev. He was thinking about something. Neev stops the car suddenly, with a sudden break. Ayesha seriously gazes at him. "why are you gazing me like that go inside and put Prachi's things in her house. Make it soon." Ayesha angrily stares at him and goes inside.

Neev leans to the car. His head raised up to the evening skies. What would happen now. What happens to Milind and Prachi. No I'm going to tell the truth to Milind. No, how I can he loves Prachi. He will be broken if he knew this. Shall I tell to Ayesha about this. No I don't want to take any risk this time. I don't want to loose, PRachi, she is my best friend. Its better to tell Prachi rather to tell milind. What if she misunderstands me. He lets sigh, na she never misunderstands me. Whatever it is I should act fast, before Milind confesses his love to her. No what if starts hating her. Ok I'll tell them after they both confess their love. What if they break down after hearing this truth. How should I .

Neev's head starts spinning. He slids down, still leaning to the car. Where this is going to led everyone. Neev cursed their fate. He never expected this. "Neev are you playing hide-n-seek with me." He hears Ayesha's voice. He gets up there and gets into the driver's seat and sits quietly. Ayesha gets into the passengers seat. Neev starts the car, goes past to the main road. "is uncle at home', she could clearly hear seriousness in his voice. "no, he went off to Paris itseems." Neev heaved a sigh. Till they reached Ayesha's apartment neither talked. Neev stops near Ayesha's apartment, she gets of and takes her things, and goes to the side were Neev was sitting, "plz, Neev forgive me", but Neev ignores are drives away from there without replying her.


Sorry for the mistakes. Plz do comment

sorry for short MICHI moments. i promise you'll to more of them in next update.




Edited by shravu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
ME FIRST
just read your FF 😳
it's very nice😳
love prachi😆
Edited by may268 - 16 years ago

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