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Posted: 19 years ago

Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm finally reading your fan-fic, i made myself click on the fan fic and decided i have to read it now!

Havn't heard from you in some time. I just read the first two parts, must say lovely job! I will read a few parts day by day!

You write great, i know you asked me to tell you if you needed to improve, to be honest you write MUCH better than i do!

Keep up the good work.

Neha 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm finally reading your fan-fic, i made myself click on the fan fic and decided i have to read it now!

Havn't heard from you in some time. I just read the first two parts, must say lovely job! I will read a few parts day by day!

You write great, i know you asked me to tell you if you needed to improve, to be honest you write MUCH better than i do!

Keep up the good work.

Neha 😛

First of all thank u for taking out sometime out of your busy schedule to read my fan-fic. It was sooo sweet of you.

And yea it's been long..I've been sick, then busy with school, and my mum had surgery.... This month has been awfully bzy for me.

And lastly, you are wayyy better right righter than me...I try but I am not as good as you are...I hope to get to you level soon😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

First of all thank u for taking out sometime out of your busy schedule to read my fan-fic. It was sooo sweet of you.

And yea it's been long..I've been sick, then busy with school, and my mum had surgery.... This month has been awfully bzy for me.

And lastly, you are wayyy better right righter than me...I try but I am not as good as you are...I hope to get to you level soon😊

Aww, thanks! Anytime. I can understand! Hope your mom is doing fine now! Lol! You will soon for you, but i think you are already there.

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice fan-fic. 👏 it is really interesting. continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue pls. nice story . 😛 too much suspenses. I think aryan is angad/zaib. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: salmalabi

continue pls. nice story . 😛 too much suspenses. I think aryan is angad/zaib. 😛

The time will surely tell😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry 😳 will continue tonight 😛 ...i will probably continue everyday from now since I am absolutely free..unless something comes up.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

sorry 😳 will continue tonight 😛 ...i will probably continue everyday from now since I am absolutely free..unless something comes up.

pls cont tonight 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi19

pls cont tonight 😉

Ji I am continuing..the next part is coming soon😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

PART-14

"I'll try and do something about this," Karthik spoke giving the matter some thought.

"Oh great, thank you yaar," Angad's face lightened up.

"Itna kush matt ho, I'll try but I am not sure whether something can be done or no."

"I am sure you will think of something, well see you," Angad left Karthik in downright confusion and went to his room.

Karthik had to do something now but what that was the question. He shoved his hand in his black winter jacket and took out his cell. He dialed a number and drifted into deep conversation with the person the other end.

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The night turned out be a gloomy one, the "Red Manor" looked extremely dull. No light shone in the whole palace except the low fire that burnt in large fireplace.

Kripa was sitting in a maroon armchair, thinking about the time she had spent with Angad, and linking him to her past and/or to Zaib. She knew that she had met him somewhere, yea somewhere before but where was that where. (Huh! too many "where")

"Ring Ring," the bell of Kripa's cell brought her to reality.

"Hello," Kripa's lips slowly parted.

"Kripa Sharma?" a firm voice spoke on the other end.

"Yes, speaking."

"Ms. Sharma, this is 'Dr. Cortez'.

"Oh hello sir, what is the problem you sound tensed?"

Ms. Sharma I am afraid the problem is for you not me. You are urgently needed in London for a bypass heart surgery It is to be performed on '……………..' and you know it must only be you who do this. (The ID of the patient will be revealed later)

Without giving it a single thought Kripa agreed, "Yes sir, when do I have to leave?"

"Tomorrow morning, your flight is tomorrow morning 10:45 sharp."

"Alright."

The dial tone resumed and Kripa stood their like a mummy for a while. What was she to do with Angad's car? He was supposed to pick it up tomorrow and nobody would be here to recive him.

Next: Was Karthik successful in delaying the flight? Will Angad and Kripa meet? And who is it that Kripa is supposed to operate

I hope you enjoyed this part. I'll try and post another part tonight, if not then tomorrow😊.

Edited by jjknrokz - 19 years ago

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