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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jjknrokz

I am really sorry for not continuing for such a long while..There have been so much going on..with my mum having a surgery and me being sick consistently for the past few weeks. I am so sorry for not continuing. I promise I will continue as soon as I possibly can.



AwW RaV!!!.....
ItS OkAy!!!!
We All UndErStAnD!!..
HoPe ur MoM aNd U fEeL BeTtEr!!!...
cOnTiNuE wHeN U CaN...ThErE iS No RuSh WhEn Ur NoT FeElInG WeLl!!
We AlL LoVe N MiSs U!!..So GeT WeLL sOon!!!....😃

LoVe AlWaYs,
dEePa
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 12

"Well Kripa it's time for me to go and for the last time thanks for everything" he said with almost a broken heart. "Angad I don't think I need to tell you to not to say thanks again but phir bhi no thanks please. I made a good friend what else can I ask for" Kripa finished.

A silver Mercedes parked on the somewhat clear road, just in front of the Red Manor. It was Karthik and some unknown driver, they were here to pick Angad up. Not wanting to get out and go through the deep snow, the driver just simply buzzed the horn, telling Angad that his ride was here.

Angad was now dressed fully for the weather outside thanks to Kripa. She had some spare jackets, mitts and what not, which belonged to a friend of hers (who😉). She didn't want Angad to get sick again.

A-Kripa ab mein chaloon.

K-meri permission ki zaroorat (she joked)

A-ji doctor saahiba aapne patient ko dischagre kiya ke nahin

K- ji kiya, aap ja sakte hain (a lilttle bit dissapointed)

A-Mein apni car ko pick karne zaroor aaonga, kal yah parson tak.

K-okay I'll wait (she smiled😳)

Angad made is way to the exit of the house and Kripa followed him. Kripa wanted to see him off from outside but Angad stopped her from doing so, as he didn't want Kripa to go through the trouble of going through all the snow. Kripa tried to argue but she lost in the end. "Okay," she said "See you soon.".....

Next: will they see each other soon?? Angad realizes he doesn't has the phone # of Kripa (what a silly guy).....Will they ever really meet again.

Note: Sorry guys I know I haven continued for ages and this was an extremly small part. I will post a bigger part later tonight or soon....please bear with me.

Edited by jjknrokz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job rav...im so sorry to hear about ur sickness and ur mom's surgery....i think we did put a lot of pressure on u to continue...im so sorry....i hope u are feeling better now....great job...plz plz cont soon!!

luv alwayz,
pooja
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Posted: 19 years ago
itz absolutely alright..I am better and mum is doing okay too... 😊thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey plz cont.....that was an awesome part..i just love this fanfic....its so different....eager to read more 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 13

Karthik gave Angad a little hug as he took his seet beside him. He had an funny look on his face... he had seen Kripa seeing off Angad in the doorway and knew something was brewing.

The driver pulls away the car from the entrance of the red manor and Kripa watches it disapper...

A- What??

Ka- Nahin kuch nahin Zaib sahaab...kya haal hain aapke.

A-I am first class and ek dum mast.

Ka- *mutters*- woh to deekh hi raha hai.

A-Kuch Kaha Tumne

Ka *changing the topic*- nahin bas itna hi ki agle (next) hafte tumhara Vancouver mein show hai, phir thode dino ke baad Calgary mein, Washington.......aur tumhara last show jo ki April mein hog woh Toronto "Rogers Centre" mein hoga...baaki sab details mein tumhe hotel chal kar doonga.

A-Theek hai...We are going to be here for while...

Ka-Haan...in 3-4 maheenon ke baad we will be back in Mumbai...aur hum tumhareliye nayii partner bhi toh dhoodni hai.

A-yaar can we I just relax now..I've heard enough about this.

Ka-Ji Janaab kyun nahin, par ek aur baat hai kal meri Josh se baat hui thi, woh bhi tumhare saah states mein perform karega.

A-WHAT!!! Fantastic...

There was no end to Angad's happiness, he totally forgot about Kripa at this time. Josh was Angad's childhood best friend, who had moved to the states at the age of 15. He just like Angad became a super famous rock star. His music rocked the world (no duh! ). "Oh my god! Josh," he gushed in happiness.

Ka-I thought tum thake hue the

A-Mein wo…..

Ka-Tum wo….acha chalo choddo, hotel aa gaya hai, tum jaa kar araam karo.

A-Theek hai wo details hum kal discuss kar lenge

Ka-yea okay! aur main tumhein bataana bhool gaya ki hum kal Vancouver ke liye nikal rahein hain…

A-What??? Yaar wo meri car Kripa ke ghar pe hai... use kaun lekar aayega

Ka-Fikar Matt Karo mein kisi ko uske lekar aane ke liye arrange karloonga.

A- Par….

Ka-Par what Zaib?

A- Meine Kripa ko promise kiya tha ki mein lene aaoonga.

Ka*sarcastically* toh kya hua use phone kar ke keh dena ki tum nahin aa sakte

A-Yaar I promised her.

Ka- Zaib tumhe patta hai ki yeh show kitna important hai. We have to leave tomorrow.

Realizing the importance of the situation he was about to agree to leave for Vancouver, but the realization of a certain fact stopped him cold "Damn it, I don't have her number" Angad screamed. He spent almost 3 days at Kripa's house and never bothered to ask her phone number. He didn't know her house's number or cells. Analyzing Zaib/Angad's behavior, Karthik knew it was important of for him to meet that "Kripa" girl.

Next: Will Angad leave for Vancouver? Will Kripa ever see him again?

I hope you guys enjoyed this part. If you have any question regarding the story or characters please feel free to ask cuz I know it's kind of gettting confusing right now, but it'll all be clear soon.

Edited by jjknrokz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part...don't pull the disappearing act again tho!!! cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part, that was really nice! 😛

Love
Soni
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Posted: 19 years ago
THT WAS A LOVELY PART!!!!...THIS IS GETTING MORE INTERSTING!!!..PLZZ CONTINUE!!...
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey...I'll continue tomorow after school. I have a huge Geo test tomorrow followed by and English presentation. I'll be relieved of a lot of stress tomorrow, plz wait until then 😊

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