Love Necessitates Itself-(RM)*complete* - Page 53

that was a fast update 😉

the way u started with , I was litle confused for a second ... i was thinking who she is talking abt and then i thought may be some spider attacked someone ....and i so wished it was sangeetpal gettingup in the middle of early morning to have an attack from cockroaches and wat not 😆
sorry my head lil stuck up at the jungle 😛

and just like rahul i was lil confused too ki it wasnt late nite it was rather early morning 4 am 😃....... and when he was waking his way up stairs i so wanted him to stumble on the steps and crash at the foot of stairs and then try to make up his way again 😆😆 haha im lil killer mood today

my fav part is the pic of adi in her wallet thats so cute😳

Muskaan Chaddha the self assumed 'Messiha' for all those kids who she had chosen to be responsible for, year after year, was at the end on her own just another individual struggling to keep order.

that is quite true ,all those who guide others they sometimes lose track of things and need a help too

I liked the bit that he realized tht he is overpowering her identity , choo shweeet of him to atleast recognize

the highlight of the update - muskan punching that sissy 😆

i cudnt stop laughing

and another high point the meher downfall 😉

star of today's update was nijal , first meher and then muskan's mom ......😃

and the confession has to be most natural one .

loved the update

ok read both in one go,m just packing now,hav 2 leav in half n hour,will comment as soon as i reah home safely...... hence reserved

ANd my mind wandered....to this when i was watching some crap on tv...and here what...

"Okay...the starting Rahul bit..where you showed the connection betwn Adi and Muskis reason for life....it was kinda stray...there was a possiblity but not a confident must there....u know!"

Think i didnt emphasis on this enough....it was a big bad miss...it would have been a classic if ud put it right....

hey nj,

Read a whole bunch of parts - beautifully written - great ending - the reactions of everybody at her house and the entire scene just perfect.

Alright, so my comments are terribly delayed, and I am so very sorry for that! I read part 17, and was about to comment when suddenly my brain was bombarded with all these things that I had to study for and were due in, that I could not put any thought into what I really wanted to say. But when I saw your PM for part 18, that's when I knew I had to do something, and get my procrastinating mind organised. So here I am commenting on both Parts 17 and 18.

Oui,oui
reserved!will take tym tho(wats new?)
bises,
anki:)ta

@CCC :D ... i still dunno if that was intentionally so! anywaz... yeh most of ur comment is an echo of ur mind, i think for once, specially coming to this last part and its inordinate nonetheless ever persistent delays i was getting pestered. Still, no excuse is enough or fair... ! the rahul-adi-realization bit was more distinct in my mind than the justice i did to it, if i hadm like u mentioned, done a better job, i believe it would have fit! just wanted A- space for rahul thinking, B- his realization of the feeling being love striking him only in an instant and not in time and C- i was most certain i wanted Adi linked into the bit and not out of parental love or the boy's concern alone... as in, not in favor of muskaan for what she could be to Adi (which had been a possibility after he saw his pic in that wallet) but as his need to have her, and hers similarly... so yeh!.. over all, there are bits of this part i would have personally liked much, elsewhere in a better overall update! haha! didn't i say, i agreed almost verbatum with ur comment? (when don't i?) so well, tout est bien qui finit bien !! (guess what!)

@prathi... the bits that were left without elaboration were partially intended yes, and i'l take that credit, not all of it though! some of it, as i said in my note was just rough finishing! ... still, on the whole, except towards the end, i enjoyed doing this fic, still strongly believe it was destined to be RM and so! i guess its my lesson on how to deal with, if ever, protagonists NON-armidz! :D thanks for the wonderful comments prathi, ur prompt replies are always a boost!

@smriti.. offense is never taken hun! i'm glad u voice what u really think, and personally i don't know how anyone could let this particular part, leave aside the fact that its the end, to this fic without pointing out the obvious flaws! yeh, grave ones in someways... i told nij too, i personally saw the parallel of adi and muskaan far more clearly than i was able to portray and i think if i'd persevered, which i didn't, i might just have managed! ... but oh well!... nijal, in name and char, fictional and real, i love! ... had to be so!.. and all those chars, mostly the neg ones, that i easily wrapped up are more the in transition guys... the fic when i had started it was meant to be short cause all i had to end with was them falling in love, realizing and confessing... as the title goes! of course, problems never end with that one fact alone right? they are only deterred or diminished or simply postponed! thanks for the wonderful feedbacks!