Love Necessitates Itself-(RM)*complete* - Page 52

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*edit* i should be thanking K for reserving the spot...but her ~R~ ticks my nerves...:S

And no...if that made you think...i am in a sucky mood and shall be giving you a worse on here...go ahead and *shake your head*

Won't say...i loved it....oh kill me ....but i didn't! :D

Few pointers..
laughter contrel arrest...DIE away....Rahuls *bloody* awesome timing to laugh at her confession....that was a first....and a long due home run..(though the arrival of a suggestion was so predictable)

SP...that sissy..and the closest to his name he was...was good...the way he raised n lowered his own bars...!!

Meher...:P helluva thing u did...putting her in that spot....

Muski-Parents...care much bit...somtimes its lack of realization....and others its sense of not being bothered to correct the mess...nicely put!

Nijal :) (luv that name...wherever u heard from LOL) ....was good...watever bit you made her do...i think 2nd best in this one i say....her liner to aunty....classic....."far more than wat tey realize" ...it made me think.....her own thoughts...how sure she was....of him to be the one....its a strange unkown belief of knowing....and trusting..what could equally result in one of the biggest blunder...but true to its assumption...only some get it ...and only for those few! (its a wonder...*hugs*)

Okay...the starting Rahul bit..where you showed the connection betwn Adi and Muskis reason for life....it was kinda stray...there was a possiblity but not a confident must there....u know!

Rahul-Muski...what can i saw....are who there are...and couldnt be anyone else...their car convo(bfr paath) was a lil low for their level...while the latter...i had issues cuz you did the same...in the same part..ruined the depth of the scene...sorta...! (and ntn to do with this...but yur AR have ter spots carved on scenes where others need double the effort to cross over :P)

Thanks jauz..for this one...as i said in my first post...cant miss it for anything...while this one....had a motive of its own...it had its ups n downs....with some definite thoughts and unknowns that have settled in their respectives parts of ma body....till whenever..=) ..lovya the same! ;)

classic critic chic' 😆

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Hey NJ!!!!!

You know I realized that the USP of all your fan fictions for me is the effort you put in to articulate the minutest of details. Your fictions don't just state the situations, emotions and reactions to be; instead you make them real for the readers just by the way you pen down a scene. Be it the description of dawn in Adolescence of Love or that of our body's reaction to waking up from deep slumber (read Rahul in this part) everything put together adds to making it real and uniquely 'you'. 👏

Coming to the update there's just one part of it that I wasn't very impressed with.

Somehow the parallel drawn between Aditya and Muskaan didn't go down too well with me. I understand that sometimes it takes a third person's behavior to understand in context that of another but even then something was amiss. Maybe I didn't like the way Rahul finally understood Muskaan; guess it had to do with my expectation from you to come up with something better. Not that this one wasn't good by itself but with you I had hoped for better. No offence meant at all, just being honest about it.

Quite liked the exchange between Nijal and Meher; Nijal as usual rightly played the role of being the best friend. Don't recall saying this before but I absolutely love her role. That's just the way best friends are and don't know if I have come across a fan fic where this bond has been as beautifully portrayed except Maslow's.

As for Muskaan's mother, it never is too late to realize one's faults and take a step towards amends but like Nijal my heart doesn't really go out to her.

Sangeet Pal always reminds me of the many self-obsessesed people that I have come across and every time I wonder at how an individual can be so full of himself? I almost feel sorry for their incorrect egoistic self-assurance. Muskaan's punch was a treat! I actually yelled a 'Way to go girl!'.

The whole car scene was nicely done! I had always envisioned their confession to be a blend of seriousness and humor and you didn't disappoint me here at all. Wonderful way of putting forward the whole thing not to forget a special mention for the cop, which was a cherry on the cake! :)

Overall a great update and ending to a beautiful fan fiction. This one surely goes down in my list of favorites! :)⭐️

Love

Smriti

Okay so after 3 breaks and a 40 minute sehri session, I'm back and fully charged to comment! So without further ado...

gfrt part really good plss continue soon

tune ni kiya reserve par le mai kar deti hoo

will read soon

Oh hell!!! That was my first reaction after reading… and I must say I did some long and hard thinking before coming back to reply…. What can I say… such a roller coaster this one has been… from the beginning of the part with them coming to terms with each other's presence in their lives to sangeet pal's idiotic and childish drama to the much awaited realization and confession, it was all I could do to keep myself on my chair and not fall… man you can make my head spin…

Anyways coming to the part… I must say now finally I understand Muskaan's rebellion and her predicament regarding her family and their so called 'society'. I mean she is surrounded by narcissist sadists starting from her parents to meher to sangeet pal and not to mention the people judging her and rahul when they don't know the anything….. but they cant be blamed they are people and this is what makes them exactly that 'people'.. right?!! But the picture her parents portrayed in today's part I felt nauseated… how can they think that they knw best when their so called best choice for perspective groom sold them and their daughter out to the unforgiving claws of the society and not bothering to think of anything rationally… on the other hand, Rahul being the man he is stood up for what the truth is unfazed and accepted everything with conviction… And God meher don't evn get me started on her… I wonder how can a person be so cunning conniving and still have a good will after her? And man I didn't laugh out loud, I must admit, but I rejoiced silently when Muskaan punched that sadistic idiot with no sense of adulthood in him… seriously, how dumb can a person get? I seriously think the man needs a shrink on him 24/7…

Aahh…last but not the least… the confession… although I must admit I found the realization that he loves her quite abrupt but a nice one nonetheless… although I'm still thinking and trying to figure what exactly made him realize this all of a sudden when it had not dawned on him after thinking about the events for almost all of night… but the confession and what followed it was awesome… Rahul's playfulness and Muskaan's embarrassment and especially the cop was hilarious… I'm pretty sure Adi will have no problem in accepting Muskaan as his mom….

And about the RM being different protagonists then AR then if any consolation after reading your note today I tried picturing AR in similar situations and couldn't.. So believe me when I say this, this story could only be RM's and none other…. I guess that should be enough rambling for now.. thanx for the pm and do pm me if you write an epilogue… take care

Sonia😊

Over-Whelmed AND Over-joyed with this update!
Brilliance is PERSONIFIED...
TALENT so empowering that my mind is still numb with it's INTELLIGENCE ....
Amazing execution of the finale....One heck of a roller coaster ride that i always look forward to...ALWAYS..
starting from Rahul's realization and restlessness about his own feelings for the FIRST TIME seemed so natural...Adi's presence while sleeping fell in perfectly in the storyline although i was hoping for the little man to pop up and say something to RAHUL...but that's just me...lol Could never really get enough of ADI-RAHUL chemistry as perfect dad and son pair....JUST AMAZINGLY CARRIED OUT...
UMMM....then comes our very own MADDY'S craziness...
And i must say I LOVED IT TO THE CORE...
So like Muskaan... her character fits like no other...
SPS finally getting the much derserved and long awaited PUNCH!
it was great...
And then the confession.....
OFCOURSE the whipping cream on this sundae....
Rahul's wittyness was seen through this serious thing as well but then again it's RAHUL...what can one say...
SO SIMPLE, SO ELEQUENT, SO PERFERCT, SO RM STYLE...
Seriously it couldn't have been written any better than this...

Anyhow i am just here to THANK YOU so VERY much for giving us such and INCREDIBLE story to read...seriously nothing could beat this....LOVED IT...and i am so glad you ended up using that VM i made for this STORY...I really felt it belong with your creation and it felt perfect to watch it after the long read....

I COMMEND YOU ON YOUR GREAT AND INSPIRING WORK!

P.S: if this isn't a burden or trouble for you could you please continue with another GREAT story with RM as central characters...IDK why but i am addicted to your writing...take you time and always know that whatever you decide we'll always COMPLY...

LOVE---
Imane...

get well soon di and happy moving. rofl!