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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: hiri
that was out standing madhu dear it was doooooo desciptive loved it plz go ahead...

esha

awwie esha di..love ya babes..was waitin for u'r comment..lolzzz

thanx yaar..thank u so so much..

wud surely cont now...

Love ya loads sweetzie....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😆😆😆...

grrrr.. seriously me going to throw u tomatoes for making us more and more anxious day by day wid ur "sweet" suspense and "lovely" descriptions 😡 aww me takin that as a compli haan..tamatar bhi pehko gi aur sweet n lovely bhi kahogi..kya baat hai archu ji...

wat the.. omg! kher u know that once one starts to read ur writting cant stop.. 😛 awww now tis made my day..thanx yaar..well I guess u the few who say that..

ok, to the intro:

beautiful era certainly, and perfectly matching description, except for the chauvinism things, all that u have written is true 😊 yes dear..tis was true in thirteenth century..n sumtimes now too...

agh lol.. but u wrote it really good although.. uf.. so good that one can feel bad for women. oye hoyyeee..now tis seriously made my day..gosh thats what i wanted...wohooo..thank god for tis..like u liked it n pitied women of those times

btw, so finally, uve expressed openly ur thoughts right? umm..well who knows tis better than u deary...😛 nice way, through a love story, and that too of veer-shera.hmm..so u liked it..now don't tink I tink so bad of evry male..buh its true if u go bac to study the 13th century..at that time women were treated like tis only..

so, according to ur fic, and if im not wrong, shera has left veer..wohoo..Bingo buddy ahm.. interesting.. and she is the one destined to change the women condition... really interesting. Bingo...well u right..can't say mre than tthat..even though my stomach hurts coz i can't tell ya mre

lovely intro 👏thanxie love...

waiting for ur next part honey, write soon, atleast one of ur stories 😛😆 😛

umm..yes..yes..will cont both sn..atleast tis one will be continued sn...abhi one prt on the way to be completed...

Love ya loads my sweet archu.....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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neha mehra

@rinku4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

well madhu!!! its fantabulous!!!!

but why stopped!!!??

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priya

@-.Priya.-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

wow madhu its just amazing

wow

plz cont dear

its fabulous

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nehamehra
well madhu!!! its fantabulous!!!!
but why stopped!!!??

aww thanx sweety..I thought u weren't onl9 much after DV ended..coz didn't see ya much On DV Forums..buh still I appreciate it a lot that u gav u'r precious time to me n my fic..thank u so much di..U made mah day...

Love ya loads.....t.cccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ektay11
wow madhu its just amazing
wow

plz cont dear

its fabulous

awww thank u ekta di..thank ya so sooooooo muchh.hpe u keep likin it dear...

Love ya loads......t.ccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

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well, the 1st part seemed long, but after reading it, it became like a short text 😛

well.. so veer is painfully suffering for his wife.. 😛 that thing is amazingly expressed, i mean, the whole, saying that he deserves it, and hurting himself, and illusions and anger and all.. lol... he is really in a pityful state.

nice interactions between him and sia, so cute! well... its cute their relationship, now, the dias werent cute, they were sour.. coz they are talking about a sad thing na?.. anyways, keeping back my non sense, the dias between him, sia, and dharam were nice, i liked the way that bhabhi was caring for her devarji. 👏 😊

in next parts, u can add something more of dharam and veer, u know, they are brothers na?.. so some fraternal talk between two boys wud look suitable in this situation too. 😛

aaand... well, the nivritti part was.. omg.. dramatic, but i liked it, i mean, its true na?, after marriage, the mother cares more for her bahu that for her son, and after all, he has done something bad, so nivis situation is understable.

and wwoooow! the song was just too appropriate for the whole scene! 😃 👏

and the video! wow, according perfectly wid the 1st part. ⭐️😃 good choice Madhu.

i liked a lot the 1st part, but.. i had a question in my mind whil every second reading the update, wat has veer done? gosh.. 😆 wat happened sooo serious that she has dissapeared for 6 months! 😕

anyways, thanks for updating dear, great part. 😃 👏

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asrasrasr

@asrasrasr

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hi madhu story started in a complete different fashion than other DV ffs. Liked it very much. Hope veer and shera are united soon.

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

that was fantabulous maddy it was soooo heart wrencing loved veer's dialouges they were simply amazing honestly amazing maddy.

esha

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aashni

@ashah03

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

wow.... it was amazing, midblowing, outstandingly brilliant and allllll the other good words u can think of..... PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS update soon......

love ya... keep up the fantastic work...