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MOORTI MADE 22.3
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PYAR ka ZEHAR 23.3
Ranveer and Deepika spotted at a restaurant today
Originally posted by: me and just me
great part 👏 👏 👏 waiting for the next part 😛 continue soon
aww Thanks, I am glad u liked it.
Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
gr8 part!!!! 👏 like always, continue soon!!!! 😊 and PLEASE continue 'the Chase' 222!!!!! PLEASE!!!! 😊
p.s. i totally LOVE the movie dhoom2!!!!! it was the best!!! 😊
thanks btw I have updated THE CHASE. I haven't seen it 😳 😆 but everyone has been telling me it's really good. I might watch it during Chrsitmas Break 😃
Originally posted by: IndianCutie13
great part
Thanks, will u elaborate more as in what did u liked it in the part.
To All readers who say "Continue soo, goood or fab part or other similar things.." It would be really helpful to elaborate more saying what do you like in that part as it would help to see what do you like to see in comming parts.
Continued…
Tears streamed down her face as she stood their shocked and traumatized, she knew it all way along but it was her heart who was stopping maybe she was wrong. Angad stood beside her with shock yet feeling sad to see her apart, he once again tried to go further she stopped him and nodded "no."
If Angad wanted he could have beaten him to death but he stopped because he was once his friend and it was because of Kripa he stopped.
There was sudden silence in the room. Kripa looked at them disgusted and said, "I'll wait for you two in the living room and slammed the door with Angad following her.
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As Amber and Neal came out dressed, they were holding hands. Kripa looked at them heart broken yet angry and mad. She walked up to Amber and gave her tight slap. All three were shocked yet Angad was expecting it to be Neal.
"Kripa! Don't you touch her?" Neal said.
Kripa looked up at with teary eyes, "you don't get it do you, that ***** has used me to get you. She's using you…"
Before she can say anything Neal slapped her, Amber was crying. Kripa looked at him shocked. "You slapped me for her!" she cried. And then she looked at Amber with hatred "congratulation you have succeeded in your tramp!"
"Kripa, Don't blame her" Neal said.
Kripa looked at him, "Who should I blame, you or her, How long has it been going on for?"
Neal looked down and avoided the tear that was coming. "TELL ME, damn it, will you?" Kripa screamed at him.
Her eyes widened in shock, "Was it her from the start?"
Neal nodded in shame. It was time for her to slap him "you cheated me for one month that too because of her? Why did you that? What did I lack that you went to her? Tell me!' she grabbed him from his collar and shook him. "You knew I loved you yet you used me"
Angad grabbed her from her arm, "There's no use of wasting your tears on someone else that isn't worth it" he said angrily, looking at him. Kripa freed her self from Angad and looked at Neal right in the eye, "I am not leaving until I get answers"
"It's not him fault Kripa" Amber said speaking for the first time. Kripa looked angrily at her, Neal her best friend, her love, defended her in front her, he slapped her. She went up to her and grabbed her hair and pulled it down. "I am not going to leave you, tramp. You played with me!"
"Leave her, Kripa" Neal shouted at her. He went up to them and pulled them apart. Amber was still crying, holding her head.
"I don't deserve you Kripa because you are not my type. What the hell I know about you. You might been sleeping with other men behind my back"
Angad slapped him hard and punched him hard on the stomach. He stared right into his eyes, "Don't you dare say about that to her". Neal freed himself from her, "What's the matter, can't you see your love getting hurt. I knew it all way long that you both have been doing things behind my back."
Kripa was crying silently, she is stunned in a bad way to hear these things from her. She went up to him, "What did you say?"
"You two are having affair behind my back?" Kripa slapped him twice and again.
"You deserved it. I wish you were dead for me and I haven't known you all along!"
"KRIPA!" Amber shouted angry at her. "Do you know what you're saying?" Neal looked at Amber with fear in his eyes and silently prayed she won't let anything out. Amber looked at Neal sadly, "What kind of girlfriend are you, to give them death wish?"
"Who are you to say that Tramp, if you play any more games with me I swear I'll kill you!"
Angad went up to Kripa. He first of all gave a slap to Amber that made her cheeks red. Kripa looked at him shocked. He looked at her, "That's for making my friend sad" and took Kripa away.
As soon the door slammed, Neal fell on floor crying. "I've lost her, Amber, I've lost her forever" Amber went up to him and helped him to sofa. "Don't you say that, we'll go to the doctors and get all the treatments? You should have told her!"
Neal looked at her. "You should've saying bad things to her as what she did to you not defending her!"
Amber looked at him, "I deserved it for playing stupid game with you. She's real nice girl but have a bad temper"
Neal laughed and cried at same time. "Sure she does, you don't want to know how bad temper she has and angry she gets. I have hurt her so much and I have lost her1" he hugged her at last.
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Kripa entered the college noticing the people's stares at her. Just then a guy came up to her, "Is it true that Neal dumped you for Amber?"
Kripa looked at him furious, "Get lost!"
The poor guys hurriedly went away as if he was scared of her. Kripa didn't like being called "dumped that too for Amber". She wanted to show Neal what he has lost. Just then to her trouble, Misty showed up walking towards her way, grinning inwardly yet putting a sympathetic face.
"Hey Kripa, I am sorry about what happened earlier. I already warned you but too bad you didn't hear me out"
"Misty, too bad, you didn't get him as you wanted. Don't feel sorry for me, I am O.K."
"What do you mean that I wanted him" Misty asked annoyed at her super confidence.
To her relief Angad showed up at right time. His face turned into frown when he saw Misty. "Hey Angad" she greeted him happily yet flirtation manner. Angad smiled and greeted her but then took Kripa away soon.
Angad smiled at her when there were alone. He held her by shoulders, "I am glad you took my advice yesterday besides I want my Kripa always to be like this"
Kripa smiled at him. "You'll always find me as Kripa Sharma."
Angad kissed her cheeks, "you better be there, otherwise who'll take care of me"
Kripa grinned, "Misty"
And they both burst into laughter, far away Neal watches her, he smiled sadly as his mission was accomplished but he needs to do more. Amber came beside and put a hand on his shoulder, Neal smiled at her, "See I told you, she'll always have someone but right now I want something else"
"I want to see Kripa being married last wish before I die". Amber quickly hugged him and cried, "Don't ever talk like that, we'll go to specialist Doctor today"
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After one week:
The canteen was full of chaos. Suddenly lights went black and a spot light hit Kripa who looked shocked yet surprised. And another spotlight hit Angad who just entered the canteen, wearing ripped Armani jeans and tight t-shirt that revealed his body figure. He was simply looking hot.
He checked the microphone that was attached to his ears. Everyone was silent, they know what they are going to expect but wanted to see in front of their eyes.
"Kripa" Angad spoke in his headphone as he walked up to her. "How do you do this?"
"Do what" Kripa whispered, who was completely shocked didn't know what to expect.
"You are asking me that? You spelled a magic on me since the day we met. I remember our first meeting in airport where you thought I was a taxi driver (he chuckles and laughter are heard) I hated you since that day. But then when I came to know the real you as how we get along, you amazed me, I realized you were the woman who, I, Angad Khanna have been looking for..."
"Don't do this" Kripa whispered who knew what was coming along. She felt weak.
"Don't do what? I was very mad at myself what I did to you that day, it made me angry and guilty, nothing can be done to make it wrong and sorry won't bring time back. And then when we saw each other after our first break-up in the concert, you amazed me more, you're the lady I always wanted to be. I at that moment was top of the world when I found out"
And as he stood next to her and looked at her eyes, who was shining yet showed nervousness, it was a mixture of emotions. "I realized I was in love with you along yet I kept it to myself. It was hard for me to see the love of my life with some yet I wanted to see you happy. But Now I don't want you to go be away from me, I love you" "I love you" he said again, his voice echoing through in canteen. He bent down in his knees, "I, Angad Khanna ask you Kripa Sharma, and will you marry me?"
She felt her knees weaken, "what are you doing Angad, are you drunk?" she whispered
"No I am not drunk, is it that hard for you to believe me. Let me rephrase it for you, "Will you Kripa Sharma marry me, Will you do the honour of bringing colour in to my life, I want to see you every day beside me, I want to see you as soon I open my eyes the first thing in morning, Will you marry me?"
Everyone was quiet and all eyes were on her, waiting for her to speak. It was as if they are not going to breathe when they won't hear the answer.
Neal and Amber were shocked. Neal was shocked, sad yet happy at the same time. Amber looked at him to see tears running down his face; it's time she has to tell her even it means in front of everyone.
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I don't have to say much. How did you like it? PLEASE POST COMMENTS. Is it what were you thinking?
WILL KRIPA SAY YES? OR WILL AMBER TELL THEM EVERYTHING
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Sanya
| Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate language. |
I repeat :To All readers who say "Continue soon, goood or fab part or other similar things.." It would be really helpful to elaborate more saying what do you like in that part as it would help to see what do you like to see in comming parts.