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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_51_girl

hey, u keep so many secrets........ at d end of every part....... i hate u for ths 😉 n love ur fanfics for that 😛 😆 👏 gr8 part as usual!!!

LOL 😆 Thanks 4 loveing me for my FF and hating me 4 secrets! u see I love putting cliff hangers 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
the last part was great...i feel bad for neal 😭 ..thats soo sad....and i think the killer dude is prithvi... 😡 ...adn u are so good at the end of the parts with ur cliffhangers...leav us hangin and wondering 😳 ....cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

the last part was great...i feel bad for neal 😭 ..thats soo sad....and i think the killer dude is prithvi... 😡 ...adn u are so good at the end of the parts with ur cliffhangers...leav us hangin and wondering 😳 ....cont soon 👏

Thanks I ilove cliff hangrs 😆 😉. Nice guess abt prithvi. Even I hate Prithvi in KYPH.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Continued…..

Neal smiled as he saw Angad and Kripa enter the cinema, he looked at Amber and put his arms around her. Amber looked at him and followed his gaze and nodded. "I hate you for what you are doing" she whispered.

"Aww Thanks Amby but you know I love you!"

"Don't call me Amby, it's Amber and what are we watching?"

"Dhoom2!"

Kripa looked around as they were in queue for tickets. She looked around to see whether Neal is here but then her eyes stopped when she saw him. He had his arms around her. Before she can make Neal realize she was looking at him she looked away. Kripa nudges the man next to him,

"Angad, they are here!"

Angad followed her gaze and stopped at them. What was he doing? He hands turned into fist when he saw his arms around her but relaxed when he realized they are only friends. "Kripa, they are only friends, look even we do that!"

"But that's different" she protested

And it was their turn. They purchased two tickets for dhoom2 and made their way to them. Neal saw them making their way to them, he quickly hugged Amber.

Kripa put her arms around his and held him tightly. Angad didn't mind as he knew what she was going through!

"Hey Man" he said giving a hi5 to Neal and looked at Amber

Neal put his arm around her, "Angad meet Amber my friend and Amber this is Angad my buddy" They said their usual hi's. Neal then looked at Kripa who was being ignored yet felt tempered.

"Kripa" Amber said going towards her, "you're here finally, what are you watching?"

"Actually I was bored so I decided to ask Angad and we are watching Dhoom2" she said ignoring Neal.

"So are we" Neal said. He looked at Kripa and felt hurt when he realized she was ignoring him. This is what he wanted.

They made their way to the cinema and sat as Amber, Neal, Kripa and Angad. The film soon started. In most of the part, her mind was some where else. Kripa then looked turned her face to see his hand resting on Amber. She felt heart-broken. Angad was so much in the movie that he was starring at Ashwarya and Bipasha costumes and body. Kripa looked at him and nodded his head, smiling. She leaned into him and rested her head on his shoulders.

Neal on the other hand was watching Kripa all along, he loved her so much that he wanted to see her in front of him every time but it's not what destiny wanted. He saw her react when she saw their hands together, it felt good and loved. He was not going to break her away; he was helping her to get over with him.

The movie soon finished and they walked in the park. The night was slow, warm with Moon shining over them.

"You two are so gross!" Amber complained while Kripa giggled

"What did we do? They both asked at same time.

"You are asking me, you too were so in the movie when Ash and Hrithik were kissing, you boys are so gross?

"What about girls?" Angad asked giving a side glance to Kripa.

"We girls do not gawk at these types of scenes!"

"Oh yeah, you're wrong Miss Amber, it's only you!"

"Not only me, Kripa what do you say?"

Kripa blushed and hid her face in Angad's chest. Amber looked at Kripa surprised while the two were laughing. "Oh my god Kripa don't tell me"

Kripa was back in her position, standing between Angad and Neal, "what's wrong with it Amber, I mean what am I supposed to do, close me eyes? I am not a kid anymore and I am so hungry we didn't even have popcorns?"

"Kripa, I thought you were better than Josh but you eat like him!" Neal said

"I do not" she said

"You do"

"I don't!" Kripa said making faces at him.

"Fine what ever you want, you'll never agree!"

"That I am" Kripa said proudly

For a minute they thought they were back in their old days but when Neal put his arm around her Amber, her smile turned into frown. Angad saw this and was confused. He wanted to clear the misunderstanding.

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"Where's Neal" Kripa asked Angad as she walked up to him in college.

"I just saw him Leaving with a new girl, what's her name Am—'" Prithvi spoke

Kripa looked at him and ran to her car. Angad followed her and was worried. He didn't know what to think. Kripa sped her car when she saw Angad following her through the mirror. She stopped her car in front of Neal's apartment.

"Kripa stop" Angad called after

Kripa saw him panting and stopped. "What are you doing Kripa? It's not right, you should trust him"

"Trust him?" Kripa yelled at him. "You don't know how hard it's for me. I have seen the changes in him as I have known him for a long time, remember how he was close to her in cinema last week and he didn't even had time to see me. It was her all the time, what do you expect me to do ignore it? Not this time Angad I am going to see him and you can't stop me"

"What if I am right?"

"I wish you are but let me see"

Angad nodded. Kripa took his hands, "Please come with me" she asked with so much innocence that he can't deny. Angad and Kripa knocked on the door to see the door was open; they looked at each other and went.

Kripa froze in her tracks when she saw Neal lying on top of Amber wrapped in silky bed sheets, she stepped back in shock and knocked a vase down. Amber and Neal saw them and looked at each other and then back. Angad was hurt to see her in this condition and looked at Neal in disgust, he was about to go forward and when Kripa held his hands.

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Coming up: Confrontation between them that ends up in SHOCK!

You can get one more part if I think there are enough comments from you. The quicker you are the faster you'll get another part.

What do you think will happen next? Gun shots... No more teasers 4 u 😆 😉

Love

sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 👏 👏 👏 waiting for the next part 😛 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part!!!! 👏 like always, continue soon!!!! 😊 and PLEASE continue 'the Chase' 222!!!!! PLEASE!!!! 😊


p.s. i totally LOVE the movie dhoom2!!!!! it was the best!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol gun shots!! r u kidding me i was thinking of bom blasts lol!!
that was awesom!!
and come guyes comment fast soo u we can read abother part 😃


luts of luv and sugar
Hina
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Posted: 19 years ago
o god(repeat 3x)

woww!! they arent really.. he just is making it look like just like in that drama thats over, naam gum jayega....

but wats the shock. will krpa find out the truth or does she "go" to angad.

continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn
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Posted: 19 years ago

i think neals too nice😭 cuz hes just doing this cuz hes sick and he wants kripa to get over him...so now wouldnt it be really sad if angad and kripa were in love but then neal survived😕(*hint**hint*please dont do that😉😆)jk..cant wait to see wht happens next..cont soon

himani

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Posted: 19 years ago
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