Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 31

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Hey Guys,

I just came back from London and yes I logged on to IF yesterday from my cousin for few minutes to get the updates! 😆

I am suffering from very bad flu right now 😭 and It's impossible for me to continue today.Anyways I will try my best or if not the part will be in by wednesday or earlier. Thank You for your lovely comments and I promise you for the big part. Leave all that to me.

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Continued:

The flames are burning high yet creating a sky filled with black smoke. It has now burned down the all area of Hotel that has turned into disaster. The screaming of people can be still heard as they continue to run with a look of panic and fear on their face.

The two people continued hugging each other tightly lying their on each other arms, sleeping peacefully on the bed that was surrounded by the flames. The room was located at one corner of the Hotel that was left spare for them. The light red romantic walls that showed it's colour in a way of love has burnt down leaving black powder.

She felt something different; hot, heavy and occupied. She had the urge to free herself and let alone be in the cool water that'll wipe away all sweat. She had an urge to go and throw herself in the calm ocean. The panic raised in her in her as she smelt something burning, the smell of fire. She opened her eyes to find herself looking at the fair handsome person who was looking so cute while he was sleeping. He had arms around her and so does. The look of horror flashed over her face as it dawns upon her; 'It's Angad Khanna!, It couldn't be!' Then it all comes to her what happened yesterday and she was relieved. Her eyes then caught the fire that was all around them'

She screamed as high she could that made him awake as well. He looked at her confused and angry as why the hell did she waked him so early?

She watched the emotions played on his faced, she giggled quietly but from the corner of her eye she gestured him to look around. He did

'Oh shit'

She raised her eye brow and nodded, 'Men's!' she sighed

'Oh yes' she replied

The fire was getting closer and closer and they both were standing in the middle of bed beside each other. They cannot escape or jump as the flames were too high!

They cried for help but no response. They waited for few minutes but still no answer. She was afraid and scared now, tears softly rolled down her cheeks. He noticed it too.

'Kripa…we'll be alright'

'How' she asked letting herself cry a little.

'Do you trust me?' he turned her around and let her face him.

She nodded, 'yes'

With that she hugged him tightly and he embraced her back.

'Help' he screamed louder. He waited for some minutes but still no reply! Her grip was getting tightened that showed she was getting more scared, in order to comfort he let her sink into his body.

'Angad... Why isn't anyone coming? She asked silently

His grip tightened around her more even he was scared to answer it. It took him few more seconds to realize that they were on their own. He hasn't been that scared in his life and never came across this situation; he was glad that he was not on his own.

'Kripa' he pulled away from her and held her.

She looked back to him. He cupped her delicate face into his strong hands;' No one is going to come unless we help ourselves'

She closed her eyes tight and tears once again streamed down her face,' are we going to die?'

'No' he answered back sternly. He was going to make sure that they won't die; they'll be safe and live their life happily. He wasn't going to risk anyone's life in his hands.

'Look someone's crying like a baby!' He tried to cheer in. Kripa noticed that he was scared as well but can see he was strong enough to fight back his tears.

'Well someone is scared' she replied back in the same tone eyeing Angad.

They both looked at each other and knew what they both were trying to do, they embraced each other tightly! They let the emotions came over them and talk to each other.

'Kripa I think I am going to die' he said in a naughtiest tone

'What rubbish' she snapped back

'If you are going to continue holding me like that… I will die'

'Oh err sorry' she backed off but still they were close.

'I know'

'You know what?'

'That I am unable to resist!'

She gives him the weak smile that soon vanishes away as tears are back in her eyes. He sighs.

'I have one idea'

She looked up at him with a gaze of hope, amazement as her eyes dances with the sparkle. He was taken back by that yet he was feeling happy that someone cares for him. It meant something to him but he couldn't figure it out what it was.

It was trust that she herself didn't why she relied on him that much. The matter of one day that she trusted him more like hell meant something deep for him. It would hurt him a lot if he did something that'll destroy his trust.

Without saying anything, he tells Kripa to give her duppatta to him. With out saying anything she hands him her Duppatta that shocks her. It is as if she knows what he is going to do, not exactly but still have that faith on him. Happily he takes it, tells her cling on him. Angad holds her in a position that looks like she is hugging him, with her legs crossing around Angad's hip. He took the duppatta wrapped it around both but mostly covered Kripa so that she can't feel or see anything.

'Angad... what are you doing?'

'How are we getting out like this' she demanded

'You wait and see baby'

'What....' she replied back confused and suddenly horror flashed on her face when she realizes what Angad was going to do.

He looked at the fire for the one last time and quickly with a run, he whispered; 'here we go Angad'. With that he ran through the fire, tightly holding Kripa, with his face pressed on her duppatta. Indeed he heard Kripa screaming but there was no other way. As he came out of the room, to his horror he saw the whole hotel burnt down but there were still little flames left. He continued to go through the fire until he comes out of the hotel.

Finally he stops and lets kripa down. She removes the blanket from her face and is shocked as she sees Angad's hand bleeding. He is black all, covered in the flames.

She quickly gets up and takes her duppatta torn it half and wrap it one arm and the other on other.

K crying; what was needed to do that?

A: Was there any other way?

K: There could be? It'd be better than going through so much pain!

A(serious look): I have been through hell.

She was surprised why he said that as she has not seen this side of him. She looked at his eyes and saw his brown eyes looking back at him on another way. It was showing his sadness, loneliness as if he is hunger of something! She took her eyes away and looked back at his arm, with tearful eyes.

He sighs!

A: Gosh, You girls!

K: What… Are you saying it's girls fault!

A; nods yes, honestly… you girls are so emotional that you cry over little things!

She pretends to be mad and hits him playfully.

A: Ouuch!

K: sorry… dard howa?

A: nods yes

She hugs him.

K: ab?

A: Nahin!

She is waiting outside the Nurse room as she waits for Angad to be bandaged all. They were soon taken in the hospital by the Fire Ambulance. And now it had been nearly half an hour as she is waiting for Angad to come outside. Suddenly she sees the nurse coming outside, she quickly goes up to her,

K: Nurse wooh Angad, Is he alright?

Nurse with a serious expression on her face, I am sorry but He is injured very heavily that has an big affect on his brain will lead to causing Brain tumour.

K shocked, Brain Tumour?

N: Nods quietly!

With out saying anything she runs inside and saw a body laid on the stretcher covered in white blanket. Slowly she moves towards the body and removes the cover. She sees Angad laying there with his eyes closes, head bandages and his arms. Tears fall from her eyes that kiss Angad's face.

Suddenly she jumps, out of the blue Angad screams at her; Boooh!

K mad; Angad

A:what

K: Was that all true?

A:Arre I was only kidding!

Relief takes on her face, as she playfully hits him and hugs him tightly. Confused Angad hugs her back.

A: Ouuch you are hurting me

K: Atleast you are alive!

A:Very mean Kripa! Kisse sikha hai?

K naughtily wispers in his ear; tumse!

Previews: Insult! Kripa faints…. Why?? (I'll let you know that soon) Entry of her boyfriend and her secret comes out! This is all I promise will be in next part. Yes the next coming part and it may take some time.

Luv

Sanya.

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I know this part is quite boring but I promise that next part will be quite long and interesting.

Thank You for your comments as they are inspiring me to continue to more. I love you lot 😛 I am getting better. I need some time for the next part as I need to think and to make t interesting. It can't be today as I am going to movies to watch Rang de Basanti. Has anyone seen it, is it good? I don't want to know what happens as it will destroy the suspense, over all is it good or not.

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Posted: 20 years ago

hey.......thnx for the update it was gr8....im sure i can wait a while for the next bit..... lolz...enjoy u'r movie..

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