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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luved d part......
best of luck for ur exams!!!
continue wen ur free...no pressure....so chillax...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Steff yuw rule .. ha-ha Armaan was so shocked he couldn't even understnad anyfin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

hey steffi...awesome n romantic part yaar👏

wowww...ridz seducing armaan😉😉😉
thx for pming me
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Recap

Armaan with great difficulty managed to do so since he was still blindfolded. Then they walked a little distance what was hard road and then something soft touched his feet.

Armaan: Riddhima ab hum Kahan hai?

Riddhima: haan ek minute ruko.

She made him walk a little further. And then removed the blindfold. His eyes took a little time to adjust to the light. What he saw was beyond description.

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In front of him was a huge Shamiyana, like a nice hut that was open on all the four sides. The bamboo sticks that held the shamiyaana were all covered with decorations that made it look prettier. It stood on the sand firmly even though the waves came and hit it.

In the centre there was a big triple decor cake with one candle that was lit.

Riddhima: Armaan, you like it?

Armaan: Riddhima, I love it. That's so sweet of you. Chalo cake katein?

Riddhima: haan chalo.

They walked closer to the shamiyaana; once they had reached under the shamiyaana the waves came and hit their legs. It didn't come above their ankle.

Riddhima: take the knife Na.

Armaan: haan

Taking the knife in his hand he stood on Riddhima's right and took her right hand; they both held the knife together blew the candle and cut the cake. Riddhima slowly reached up and pulled a string, a round piece of thermacol came down along with the string and along with that came thousands of white confetti's fell over them onto the cake. Armaan looked up at the sudden shower of the confetti's and got a whole lot of them on his hair face and one stood on his nose that made Riddhima laugh all she could.

Finally the cake was cut. Armaan held a piece and held it forward for Riddhima to eat. She took a bite and then gave a piece to Armaan. There was no noise except the waves hitting the shore.

Armaan: Riddhima? Tumhe yaad hai? College main hum sab cake fight kiya karte Te?

Riddhima: (remembering what used to happen in the college days and smiling to herself)

Haan. Kitna mazaa aata tha Na?

Armaan: aata tha? Abhi tumhe woh mazaa chahiye?

And without even waiting for her reply he took a piece of cake and smothered it all on Riddhima's face. He had done it quite gently, like a gesture of love.

Riddhima whose face was covered with cake and confetti's and a thoroughly exasperated look on her face, dipped both hands in the cake took handfuls of it and buried Armaan's face with it. Satisfied with what she had done she pointed at him and laughed a loud.

Armaan who didn't expect this behavior wiped off the cake from his eyes, and once again dipped his hand into the cake. This time Riddhima was ready, she gave a squeal and ran away from him as fast as she could in the water against the waves. They had come waist deep into the water by which time all the cake had disappeared from Armaan's hands. Laughing and playing about like children in the water, they splashed water on each other fell in the water rolled on each other, and finally when they felt that they could no longer play like that slowly hand in hand walked towards the shore.

Coming back under the shamiyaana now giggling and with the water now somewhere around the middle of the knee and ankle.

They both loosened their hand. Armaan shook his head a little and ran his fingers through his hair when a sudden splash of water fell onto his face and eye. He almost thought that Riddhima had started all over again when he found out he was wrong. Riddhima had started patting the water away from the hair, bent a little, her head tilted to one side and her legs buried under the water she patted the water hair from her long hair.

Even today when he looked at her a sudden rush of love would come into his heart. His heart would skip a beat even now as he saw her looking down with a small smile on her face. He walked closer to her and by the time he had reached her she had straightened up and was looking at him with a perplexed expression as to why he looked at her so affectionately. He came closer and took her hand in his.

He didn't say anything. There was nothing to say. They had known each other so well that even without words they understood everything perfectly. Slipping his hand around her waist he slowly pulled her close "Riddhima when I got married to you, I promised one thing to myself, that I would never want to see tears in your eyes, especially if the reason or cause was me. Maine tumhe bahut rulaaya hai, hai Na? main jaanta hoon" Lekin main ek aur baat jaanta hoon, ki jab we had decided to take up the challenge and fight our problems to become one and when we had each other because of which we succeeded, I decided to keep you happy us happy and our children happy from the day we became one. I had promised your mother Riddhima. I hope I have kept up to it.

We are one soul Riddhima in two bodies, half in yours half in mine, yours is hurt and it causes immense pain to me. "If you don't believe anything then believe this," he said as he brought his lips to hers.

She rested her one hand on his shoulder and one on his chest and surrendered to the kiss. They bodies fitted together like perfectly matched pieces of puzzle. All this was so familiar that she felt as if she had been where she belonged to, whom she belonged to; they were made for each other all along. She felt so comforted by his strong arms right around her waist where it always had been. She gathered in all the sensations? the taste of him, the scent, the feel? All this made her feel like she was home.

The waves went on hitting their legs. And suddenly the world was far away. All they knew was they were with each other. Where they were didn't matter, even if it meant to be in a world totally parallel to them.

heyy Guys ...

1st i want to thank all those to read..😊

2nd a big hug to all who commented..hope all of u liked it😃

3rd i was planning that the next part i am gonna start with the flashback,after how dey met after the mall incident.

plz do let me know if i shud go ahead with it.

rmbr it is u guys who will help me and motivate me to write further.

i hope all the silent readers also like my story.😊

i kno very few ppl read my FF and even fewer comment... ho sakhe toh plzzz apne doston keh dena ki mere FF ko pade..

lastly i am sorry for posting this small part.😭

but i hope its a good part.

will update when i get free...

thank u soooo much...😊

Next Part 5: Armaan Riddhima meeting after the mall incident.😊

Edited by Steff - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
hey dear.. that was such a lovely part... the freshness in their relationship still remains even after so long time... its so good.. plz continue further... would love to know and read more...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That is great! Thanks for the pm Steff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sweeeeety dnt be sorry yaar its kkkkk but it ws jbeautifull update seriously all decorations her surprise jst superb brilliant jst lvd it specially those lines wch ar said 2 her their immense luv for ech othr cnt wait fr d nxt prt nd really enjoydit cake fight hehehehe...........
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
CONTINUE SOON..
GREAT PART...
THANKS FOR THE PM :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Thanks for the PM yaar

it was really nice
Continue sooon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
hey steffi dear....lovely part yaar👏
their luv is so everlasting n remains forever...
wa8 for flashback part
cont soon

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