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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Shaunaki ur such a brilliant writer yaa...👍🏼👍🏼Too good dear Keep it up!! Loved the part 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
interesting................
very nice ff
thanx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
do continue soon sounds really interestin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
hey intersting very nice update soon and plzzz pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
thanks a lot for all ur comments... thanks for encouraging me... this really means a lot 2 me.. i had no plans 2 conttinue it but becoz all u guys have requsted i've written next part..
so herez d next part...


7pm in the evening

Armaan and Riddhima reach gupta house

Padma opens d door

Padma (in surprise)- arre waah tum dono??? Shayad aaj suraj pachchim se nikla hai..

both of them hugs padma together while hugging armaan catch riddhima's hand behind padma's back riddhima pushes his hand away'

Padma- tum dono thak gaye honge mein kuch khane ke liye lati hun' batao kya khaoge tum dono???

(Riddhima n Armaan both were quiet 2day, she was wondering how to disclose the news regarding her pregnancy to her mom and armaan was excited n was waiting 2 disclose d news)

Padma- ab kya hua??? Chup chap kyun baithe ho tum dono??

(nani enters d house she had gone 2 attend some programme in temple)

Nani- arre Armaan Riddhima.. tum log kab aaye???

(both of them cums n hugs her)

Riddhima- bas nani thodi der ho gayi.. aap kaisi ho???

Nani- hamesha ki tarah ekdum fit.. ab aaye hi ho to khana khake jana' tumhe ghar jake banane ki jarurat nahi padegi'

Padma- aur bahot dino se saath mein khana nahi khaya hum sabne..

Maa, aap fresh ho kar aayiye' (handing a glass of water to her)

Tum dono bhi fresh ho kar aa jao thak gaye honge'

In riddhima's room

Riddhima- armaan, kaise batao mom ko??? Kuch help karo naa

Armaan- ab mein kya bataon?? Tumhe jo sahi lagta hai woh karo'

Riddhima- wat do u mean by that???

Armaan- main bataon kya??

Jus den Padma enters

Padma- kisko kya batana hai???

Armaan n riddhima both becomes conscious

Armaan- ma woh riddhima ko aapse baat karni hai' main chalta hun.. aap dono baat kijiye

(Padma makes riddhima sit on her bed n cups her face)

Padma- kya hua beta??? Sab thik toh hai naa??? Kya baat hai??

Riddhima- woh maa..

She hands over her reports to Padma

Padma- tumhara report???

Riddhima nods

Padma jumps in joy

Padma- riddhima'.

(She was actually speechless n puts her hands on her mouth.. she was feeling like as if she was d happiest being on planet earth tears starts rolling)

Padma- meri beti badi ho gayi' waqt kitne jaldi gujar jata hai.. kal to tum itni sit hi aur aaj tum maa ban ne wali ho' riddhima tum andaaza bhi nahi laga sakti ki mujhe tumne kitni badi khushi di hai..

N Kisses her forehead

From hallway to riddhima's room nani comes talking

Nani- arre tum log kitni der laga rahe ho

Jus den she enters riddhima's room n sees Padma crying

Nani- kya hua??? Tum ro kyun rahi ho

Den she notices tears in riddhima's eyes also

Nani- kya hua?? Koi batayega mujhe???

Padma- maa aap phir se par nani (I hope I got dat right its actually gr8 grand mom) ban ne wali ho riddhima..

(anjali also had 1 yr old son who was sleepin cozily inside she drops him in d morning n picks up at night while goin home)

Nani cuts her between

Nani- riddhima?? Tum?? Meri bachchi itni badi ho gayi.. cups her face n kisses her forehead..

to be continued....

Will do it soon...

I knw dis part is very boring.. no AR romance'

Sorry.. but have 2 include' a Family convo'

(guys one more qustion--- m endin this in next part.. so temme wat u guys wanna read next.. rahul-muskaan's love story how he proposed 2 her n how she agreed or armaan- riddhima's pre-marraige romance n yeah their marraige also will be included)
Edited by sim20 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Armaan Riddhiam parts plz!
Dunt show that yet cont woth marriage life for a bit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar it ws superb yaar hm ofcourse arridz prts plz dnt show it nw plzzzzzz waitng fr nxt cont soooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Armaan Riddhiam parts plz!

Dunt show that yet cont woth marriage life for a bit


no i'll continue vd dis part on monday... but my ff contains short stories.. so dis part is ended.. i want 2 knw wat u guys wanna read.. i'll definately write incidents 4rm armaan-riddhima's lives after marraige too... by monday do tell me wat should i write 1st AR pre-marraige romance o rahul-muskaan's love story...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wondeerful part plz do continue and do pm me wen u are done updating

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sim 🤗🤗 1st sorry for late comments getting too busy these days just landed in ur ff ar its absolutely marvellous loved the conversation b/w arthat was really a sweet one
awesummmmmmm start u great very nicely dear
thats another talent now i'm seeing in u
just great effort
luking forward 2 ur ff
i'm will addicted 2 ur ff
👏
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