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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
heyy.....great FF....plz cont it soon and can u pm me wen u cont plz?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: loving_bird

hey sim 🤗🤗 1st sorry for late comments getting too busy these days just landed in ur ff ar its absolutely marvellous loved the conversation b/w arthat was really a sweet one

awesummmmmmm start u great very nicely dear
thats another talent now i'm seeing in u
just great effort
luking forward 2 ur ff
i'm will addicted 2 ur ff
👏
👏


thank u so much tanu...😳😳😳🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
thank u so much guys 4 commenting... herz d last part of this ff...

Part 3

Jus den anjali enters d room

Anjali- ridzissss congratssssss

N hugs her

Riddhima- thank u di… par aapko kaise pata??

nani and Padma leaves d room so that dey can prepare d dinner coz now both the daughters n their husbands were der 4 dinner (in case u r wondering whos anjali's husband its none other den atul if I pair her vd nebody else u all will kill me.. waise I was thinkin 2 pair her with abhi i.e. abhimanyu modi)

Anjali- tumhe kya lagta hai tum nahi bataogi to mujhe pata nahi chalega???

Riddhima- aisi baat nahi hai di.. par yeh baat to kisiko nahi pata…

Anjali- armaan ko to pata hai naa???

Riddhima- apko usne bataya???

(Anjali had called up armaan 2 speak to riddhima and her cell phone was switched off.. so dat time armaan tol her d report n also tol her dat dey r goin 2 gupta house so dats how anjie n atul were here)

Anjali- haan kyun nahi batana chahiye tha? Waise stupid test karne se pehle mujhe bata kar gayi thi.. report aane ke baad mujhe bhul gayi?

Riddhima- di woh main aapko dhund rahi thi sanjeevani mein aap OT mein thi to maine disturb nahi kiya

Anjali- oh ridz m so very happy for u..

Hugs her again

Anjali- papa ko bataya???

Riddhima- nahi, socha ki idhar hi bataungi..

While 2 sisters were chatting inside padma n nani reaches hallway…

Atul comes n hugs both of dem

Padma- armaaaannn… tumse yeh ummid nahi thi…

Armaan (gets worried)- kya hua?? Maine kuch gadbad ki hai kya??

Nani- haan aisa hi samjho…

(both in a serious tone bechare armaan ko dara rahe the n woh dar raha tha hehehee)

Armaan stands up 4rm d couch n comes toward dem

Armaan- kya hua??

Jus den Padma catches his ear

Padma- bachchu…

Nani starts laughing hard

Padma- maa aap bhi naa

Nani- arre baba sorry… maaf karo.. main itni khush hun ki mujhse sambhal nahi ja raha hai

Nani hugs armaan n he takes ashirwad 4rm her n Padma

Padma- tum bachchone tumne duniya ki sabse badi khushi di hai…

Nani- thank u so much.. tum bachchon ne mujhe itni choti umar mein par nani bananaya hai (gr8 grand mum) says in cheeky tone… while moving her hand on her hair…

Armaan, Padma n atul starts laughing

Jus den shashank enters

Riddhima n anjali come out 4rm their room

Shashank- yeh kya?? Tum sab log yaahan… puri mehfil jam gayi hai lagta hai..

Nani- arre shashank.. nana banane ke baad to tum bilkul hi satak gaye ho…

Padma- maa.. aap kya bol rahi hai…

Anajli- satak papa nahi aap gaye ho.. nani control ur emotions…

Nani- main tum jaisi dr nahi hun jo mujhe emotions control karne padte ho..

Shashank tum phirse ek baar nana banane wale ho…

Shashank's mouth was wide open.. he could believe his lil angel riddhima was soon 2 b a mother…

Riddhima n armaan cums n takes d ashirwad shashank holds dem n hugs both…

Shashank- mujhe to vishwas hi nahi ho raha hai.. ki meri riddhima ke god mein aur ek chotisi riddhima hogi..

While riddhima n armaan were huggin shashank anjali holds nani n wipes her Khushi ke aansu n atul holds Padma..

Dis moment was indeed 2 remember…

Den it was followed by dinner

N later anjali n atul vd their kid (I cant get appropriate name for their son) and armaan- riddhima left gupta house…

Sorry sorry.. dis is very boring I knw.. but had 2 include dis… a family convo.. no AR romance 2day…

As I had planned 2 write short stories based on incients in their lives but due 2 u peoples request I continued vd this part… m planning 2 include armaan-riddhima's pre-marriage in my next part…

Hope u guys enjoy dis…


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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
oh dear.. it was such a cute family get together enjoying all the way.. love the way u write so simply and easily... plz do not forget to PM me for ur next update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey wow yaar so sweeeet yaar it ws such a cute nd happy family heheheh ar dar gaya heheeh lvd angie nd ridz sis tlks cho cute cont soooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
heyy......that was very sweet and cute!!! great part!! plzz cont soon!!! <3333
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

aww da FF was well sweet n loved da family bond

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

🤗Heya Sim..!!!🤗

Firstly, I am realli sorry for the late comment🤔..I had gone out of town so couldnt read ur FF update...anyways thanks a tonn for the PM...😳

Now regarding ur update😉😆...U have done a fabulous job👏👏...ur update was totally amazing...love the way u rite..and all the three updated were too gud😍..!!!..No one can tell that it was ur first update😎...u are getting towards prefection sweety...AMAZINGG..!!!👍🏼

Totally loved ur update, do update more soon and do PM me..😃😛
Love,
Riddhima..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
hey sim when u r updating it

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