ff.. stort stories of dmg.. (part 3 on pg 5)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is my very 1st attempt to write FF.... I was gettn bored without dmg so made up my own story.. I hope u'll will like it.. it's a short scene after Armaan and riddhima are married'

Conversation between Armaan-Riddhima

In sanjeevani-

Riddhima is not able 2 concentrate on patients and is constantly paying a visit to path lab. During her one visit she meets Armaan there who had come 2 collect his patients report.

Riddhima- sister mera report hua kya???

Just den Armaan comes, who overhears her

Armaan- riddhima tumhara kounsa report?? (getting worried)

Riddhima- woh um ah

Armaan- sab think toh hai naa???

Riddhima- haan Armaan who aaj naya patient aaya hai naa uska report collect karna tha so that I can start the medications.

Armaan- haan woh.. mujhe laga

Jus den sisters voice inturrepts dem

Sister1- dr. riddhima aapka report ready hai mein abhi'

Riddhima interrupts her

Riddhima- aap pehle inke patients ka report dijiye mera baad mein diya toh chalega.

Armaan half smiles

Sister hands over him d report of his patient just den he notices a report vd Dr. Riddhima Malik name on it. He was about to ask but hears d announcement where his patient was serious n he was being called.

Riddhima sighs a relief.

Sister1 hands over her the report

Riddhima opens and reads d report n jumps in excitement d report was about her pregnancy which had cum positive. She couldn't believe her eyes.

Riddhima- sister agar dr. Armaan is report ke bare mein kuch bhi puchte hai toh mat batana.. plz'

After 3 hours

Armaan rushes to the pathlab as soon as his surgery is done.. it was of his patients who was serious 3 hrs ago.

Armaan- sister who dr. riddhima ka report hai kya?

sister 2- nahi doctor, dr. riddima toh report lekar chali gayi

Armaan- kounsa report tha? Kya test kiya tha?

Sister2- sorry doctor, yeh to mujhe nahi pata dusri nurse thi.

Armaan leaves

In armaans cabin riddhima is waiting for him while Armaan is searching for her everywhere.. i.e. canteen, wards, locker room, fire escape but he neva realized that he should check his own cabin.

In sheer disappointment he opens d door of his cabin only 2 find riddhima inside..

Armaan- tum idhar ho??? Maine tumhe kahaan kahaan nahi dhunda'

Riddhima- main to kabse idhar hi hun' wardboy ne bola operation aadhe ghante pehle khatam hua.. to mein yahaan par tumhara wait kar rahi thi aur tumhara koi ata-pata hi nahi hai.

Armaan- sorry baba' riddhima woh report?

Riddhima- kounsa report? Kis patient ka?

Armaan- tumhara.. mujhse chupane ki koshish mat karo kyunki maine tumhara report lab mein dekha tha. Aur mujhe pata hai ki who tumhare paas hai

Riddhima- haan woh' uske hi bare mein mujhe batana tha.. woh Armaan'

Armaan- bolo riddhima kya hua??? Report mein kya likha hai??

Riddhima- ab tum mujhe bolne doge?? Pehle shanti se baitho makes him sit on his chair

(she puts her hand around him while sitting on hand rester)

Armaan- riddhima kya tum mujhe bataogi ki baat kya hai.. plz..

Riddhima- Armaan ab mein sanjeevani mein bas kuch hi mahino ke liye hun

(Armaan was getin tensed while riddhima was fiddling with armaan's collar)

Armaan- kya matlab?? kya hua??? Riddhima tum thik to ho naa???

Riddhima- woh hamare ghar mein ek mehmaan aanewala hai

(shyness could be seen in her eyes)

Armaan- koun?? Aur uske liye tumhe ghar pe rukne ki kya jarurat hai?? Mein tumhe report ka puch raha hun aur tum mujhe kuch aur bata rahi ho

(he was scared, tensed he din know wat to think.. because of his mixed reactions he din even understand riddhima's indication and she frowns and stands in front of him)

Riddhima- Armaan tum itne stupid kaise ho sakte ho?? Puri sanjeevani tumhare taarifon ke phool bandhti hai aur tum ho ki..

(Armaan re thinks wateva she said)

Armaan- riddhima u mean kuch mahinoke baad koi aanewala hai par iska tumhare report ke saat kya connection hai? Wait a sec u mean' u mean u r

Riddhima nods

Armaan jumps from his chair n hugs her tight..

Armaan- tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya?? Oh m so happy' mujhe lag raha hai ki mein satve aasman par hun.

Kisses her forehead she hands over him d report n he reads it and is delighted with joy'

Riddhima- thank u Armaan..

Armaan- thank u toh mujhe tumse kehna chahiye' aaj tumhare vajah se mujhe itni badi khushi mili hai

He makes her sit on d couch in his cabin

And he sits on his knees with her hands in his hands.. he kisses her hands jus den tear falls on armaan's hand

Armaan- hey basket tum ro rahi ho?? Isme rone ki kya baat hai?? Log kuch nahi kahenge.. legally tum meri patni ho

(says in his naughty tone)

Riddhima- pushes his hands away.. Armaan tum bhi naa?? Yeh toh khushi ke aansu hai..

Armaan- accha ab yeh rona-dhona bandh karo (Wiping her tears) yeh baat kisi aur ko pata hai kya?

Riddhima- nahi.. sabse pehle tumhe hi bataya.. di ko test ka pata tha par report ka nahi pata

Armaan-toh aaj hospital se direct tumhare ghar chalte hai.. sabko yeh khush khabar sunate hai.. mamma aur nani bahot hongi..

Riddhima- tum hamesha papa ko kyun bhul jate ho?

(Stands up n frowns)

Armaan folds his hands and bends down

Armaan- sorry ma'am galti ho gayi.. who actually sasurji ka khayal aate hi mere dimag mein bhuchal aata hai. Chalo tum 5 minutes mein sab kaam khatm kar ke yaahan aao.. hum abhi nikal rahe hai

Riddhima- thik hai..

(hugs him kisses him on his forehead while he he gives a peck on her lips n leaves)

waiting for ur comments

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yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar really really superb yaar wow thre r sooo mny ff abt rtheir marriages wow yaar i wnt 2 read mre nd mre cnt control it hehehhe wow ridz pregnant wow nd ar how stupid he ws hahahaha fnnnnnnny plzzzz cont sooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@yachna- thank u soo much.. well dis is a small scene... a kind of short story.. well i dunno whethr i'll b able 2 continue o not... but i'll write short short parts i.e. various incidents..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhhhhhhk like tht hmmmmm waitng fr tht 1 also do cont sooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!!

that was really very sweet...
Armaan: legally tum meri patni ho, log kuch nai kaheinge...heheee.,..naughty Armaan!!
Do continue asap!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u.. karanShilpa:)
@yachna- will definately do it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~!~!~!~!~excellent work hun 👍🏼~!~!~!~!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏awesome shaunaki
i loved it
pls continue soon

neha.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aaaaaaaaahaaaaa shona such a brilliant FF.......👏
i really luvd the scenes n convo😳its sooooooooo beautiful.
really a sweet update😃
thnxxxxxxxxxx a lot for sharing it.
do post more soon.......
will b waiting....
Luv Raee🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i lov it....soo GOOOD....wow...plz continue...just love...it..

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