'Desires' AR ff-Part 6(pg 19)July 5 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey Kanu!!!

sorry for commenting so late... just missed this one somehow...
why cant they sit in front of each other and sort out their issues.. everything will be setlled then... this is how ego clashes come in between couples... hoping that everything will be fine soon...thanks for the PM and please continue soon this time....
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hey amazing ff..plzz add me 2 ur PM list..
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grt part really good pls continue soon
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Hey Kanu... Finally u updated..Thank u very very much for the pm. very emotional part. Do pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks guys for appreciating the effort despite of the fact that i was unable to reply each of you individually .

i have a day off on wednesday so most probably do it on wednesday .

thanks suvrati for keeping on track with my updates 😃

love you all guys

-kanu

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Hey!!...just caught up with your fanfic!..it's awesome!!!
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Hello ji, Kanu ji!! lolz...

kaha gayee?????
itne dino se kahe nahi dekha!!!!
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hey kanu, sorry for the super delay, wasnt very active here from a long time, read the part....u r handling it very well, how would they make up now? poor babies, both r hurt....plz write nxt part soon, will be waiting

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 5

Recap :

Feeling the duvet cover his body a tear escaped his eye. He felt like hugging her and forget everything that happened. But when he turned his back, he found her with her back turned back to him. Once again dejected he tossed over to look for some sleep.

She knew he turned for a bit but something stopped her to turn to him and she tucked her hands under her pillow after feeling a tear on her pillow.

Now:

Once again that was a lonely night for them , thats how their life was now . they were together yet not with each other.

Next few days went into silence, they would do their routine work, having breakfast with each other without a word, sitting with each other in cafe for lunch but without a word, coming home together yet without a word, only words they talked to each other were the necessity of the situation. Every night armaan would go to bed early to avoid any confrontations and make situation worse than it was.

Everyone at sanjeevani also noticed the change in behaviour and started asking them if everything alrite between the two. They tried to avoid all the questions, but when one comes up ,they would just say "no everything fine".

It was Sunday again, a week without talking to each other, well in real sense. Armaan was on duty, he was working overtime to kill his time . While ridhima was in kitchen preparing dinner.

Feeling lonely even though it wasn't the first time she was alone at home and armaan working, she turned on the radio. Paying a little attention to what was playing, she resumed her cooking.

On the other hand, armaan came back to his office after a complicated surgery which went on for 3 hrs. All he needed was some pleasant music to relax his muscles. Today he was alone to take care of his stress which earlier Ridhima used to take care of . Whenever he would have a long surgery ,ridhima would come to his office and would talk with him while massaging his neck little, relieving him from all his stresses. But today she wasn't there to help him out.

He looked around for few minutes before his eyes caught a radio sitting near the file rack. With an idea to relax for a bit he turned on the radio wishing that they play some pleasant songs .

Ridhima was almost done with her cooking and was about to turn off the radio when a soothing and energetic voice caught her attention.

"Suno Sunao , life banao , Big FM par aap sab ko mera yaani ki aapki host Nupur ka pyaar bhara namaskar"

This girl had some charm in her voice which made stooped ridhima's moving steps towards the bedroom .

"har sham ki tarah , aj phir hum koshish kareinge dilon ko milaane ki , pyaar se anjaane dilon ko milaane ki , kuch roothon ko manaane ki , kuch apno ko paas bulaane ki . ayiye shuru karte hamaari aj ki yeh koshih."

The word roothon ko manaane ki made her feel like going to armaan rite away and hug him tightly to mark an end to their silence .

Nupur :"Line 1 , kya naam hai aapka"

Caller: "aap mujhe dil jaani bula sakte hai"

"lovely name, hum kaise aapki madad kar sakte hai"

Caller: "mera pyaar mujh se khafa hai , kuch usse gila hai , kuch shikayat hai"

The statement by an unknown caller with a familiar voice on the radio made her breathes go faster, she sighed thinking someone is hurt " I wish un dono ke beech jo bhi misunderstanding hai khatam ho jaye"

Nupur:"oh... kya aap unke liye koi song dedicate karna chahte hai ?"

Caller: " I don't want you to play any song, I want to sing for her, shayad she could feel my feelings"

Nupur: "Sure ..and we pray for you"

Caller : " Thanks Miss Nupur"

And caller starts singing

"Ranjish hi sahi

Dil hi dukhane ke liye aa

Aa phir se mujhe chod ke jaane ke liye aa

Ranjish hi sahi

Dil hi dukhaane ke liye aaa

Kis kis ko bataayeinge judaii ka sabab hum

Tu mujh se khafa hai toh zamaane ke liye aa

Ranjish hi sahi

Dil hi dukhane ke liye aa"

Please jaan, come back to me, I cant see you living in silence, I cant see that glow missing from your face, I m missing your smile.I will answer all your questions, whatever you ask me, par please jaan ,please come back to me. Please jaan"

Nupur: "We hope she comes back to you again, if you don't mind may we ask kya woh aapse dur chali gayi hai ?"

Caller : " Nahi , woh paas hokar bhi dur hai"

As he finished with his message he started sobbing over the phone and hung up .

How couldn't ridhima recognize the voice , the pain in the words, the yearning in the message?

"Armaan....." and the slender figure of ridhima gave up making her fall on the couch. "why do you love me so much armaan..why ....."

To be cont.....


P.S. Im really sorry about a month late update 😔


Edited by KehanT - 16 years ago

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