'Desires' AR ff-Part 6(pg 19)July 5

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Kanu What should i say.A realistic part or a heart wrenching .

What ever---------------------.Heart broken & shattered in to pieces.💔

wish them a good luck to over come from this situation soon.

In my heart...sweet devotion
In my heart...deep emotion
In my heart...lies true bliss
In my heart...your warm, last kiss
In my heart...a burning fire
In my heart...endless desire
In my heart...our love was built
In my heart...I hide no guilt
In my heart...memories of our love
In my heart...I keep your last hug
In my heart...Memories of this war
In my heart...I don't want them anymore.

thanx 4rpm

take care

ritu

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vanita

@suvrati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

thnx fr dedicating the prt to me
its the first time any 1 has ever dedicated to me any thind even if it a ff
i am honoured so much 🤗

will read as quickly as possible

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hi i am back

so abt the prt........... it was ............awesome.....................they love each other so much...bt then why ridz is doubting armaan n why he is nt making her doubts clear.....hes just escaping the situation n feeling bad perhaps..

hey continue soon or i willl again have to bug u wid my pmz..........lol

bye tc.😊

Edited by suvrati - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

hey kanu nice ff i just read it can u add me to your pm list please ? 😊

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Ayeeee madam ji that was such a sad one yaar!!

Beautifully portrayed though....miscommunication and lack of trust can really ruin an ever lasting relationship!! The emotions specially from Armaan's side were brilliantly written!!

Really waiting for them to patch up yaar, cant bear my couples being torn apart :( Fab update Kanu ji...... kudos!!

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Hey Kanu,
The part was fabulous.
I agree with Jia, there is some misunderstanding, which I hope they'll sort out soon, otherwise they will create nothing but a big mess.
Continue soon.

Kashish

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

ohh kehu this is so sad...their marriage is falling apart due to mistrust :(
so glad you updated after so long, i know how busy you are with uni, so i understand!
really good part, looking forward to more. hope you can update soon!

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Aishwarya

@Aishwarya..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

hi!!
after a veryyyyyyyy long time
finally u updated
the story is sad, they r finding it difficult to place the very much reqd trust in each other which is a requisite for a happy marriage or any other relationship
sad to see it happening
anyways happy to see u r back in IF!!!

thanks for the pm!

love:
aishwarya