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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was a nice one.....ye Yash ko needles se itna darr kyun lagta hai...hehe. Poor Chah got scolded....but I hate that senior doc....Yash k kehne k bawjud Chah ko danta....stupid kahin ka....huh!!! W8ing to c how Yash got her frndship. Pls continue soon.

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part !

Thoda fast forward karo na story ko....i want them together soon!!

Luv,

Vandu

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

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Originally posted by: spvd

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hey dear very nice part...............yash is really very very very ziddi and behaves like a kid.....................god how much he was arguing with angad to get discharged from the hospital...................just coz chah didnt come and check his condition and he got angry on kripa for no reason.............and angad and kripa they are like tom and jerry.................wothout arguing with each other their day never goes................and yash is missing chah and wants to be friends with her................chah is controlling her feelings and distractions coz of yash but she cant stop herself from thinking about him continously...............poor chah coz of yash who is scared of injections and doesnt want anyone else to inject him chah ko daantt padi...............the lst part was so sweet................chah feels yash's pain and seeing her expression yash smiles though its paining for him.....................cant wait how they get friends and how yash falls in love with her......cont soon dear.....................

Originally posted by: pinky901

hi dear nice part

but mein kuch confess karna chahti hoon

mera interest kho raha hai is fic se shayad isliye ki "kafi late updates hai and abhi tak story apni track par nahi hai" .mera matlab abhi flashback aur dono ka alag hona hi hai ,abhi tak koi chance hi nahi hai ek dusre ko manane ka.so islye comment nahi kiya.par mujhe is baat ki bhi surity hai ki jaldi mera interest wapas lag jayega is fic mein as aap sab dhik kardoge jaldi

sorry i knw it will upset u a little but i jus wanna share my view wit u.

bye tc

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i really liked the first scene were u showed how chah and yash were both confused regarding their feelings and how they didn't know what was happening to them but they were still thinking about each other.I really liked the way u showed angad and kripa arguing on small things the scenes between them are really intresting,but i felt bad 4 chah cause she had to deal with angad and kripa's fights but it seems after she shouted at them they started behaving like good kids.Cant wait 2 read how yash will get chah to become his friend.All the scenes between chah and yash were beautifully potrayed cant wait 2 read the next part.