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ravikaran2009

@ravikaran2009

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Posted: 15 years ago

#511

kya likhti hain aap...amazing..seriously maza aa gya...plz..plz..continue soon na..i am really eager to read the next part...plz update it..n thanx 4 continuing..its a brilliant story......

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: ravikaran2009
kya likhti hain aap...amazing..seriously maza aa gya...plz..plz..continue soon na..i am really eager to read the next part...plz update it..n thanx 4 continuing..its a brilliant story......

thanku so much...i'am glad that you like my fanfic.. i hope u like the ff as it proceeds too.. i'll surely try & continue soon...😊 can i know your name..😊

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ravikaran2009

@ravikaran2009

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Posted: 15 years ago

#513

ofcourse..its Ravi Karan ..plz do continue

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: ravikaran2009
ofcourse..its Ravi Karan ..plz do continue

i'll surely try & continue soon...😊

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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#515

on demand.. jaldi se update karo madam.. i read the whole 13 parts u gave me in 3 hours!! tu thoda jaldi likha kar... ya mujhe apne padhne ki speed kamm karni padegi.. (jo main nahin karna chahti hun..kissi bhi keemat par :P)
love ...manu

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puuuja

@puuuja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#516

Hi Surya

Gr8 ud after such a long time! Mujhe bich me laga k u hav stopped writing but thank god aisa nahi hua...Yash and Chah make a beautiful couple...flashback kafi interesting tha...Yash was sooo happy at being suspended! ye hota hai attitude! aur Swayam ki to bezzati ho gai! Mujhe to principle ki bewakufi pe vishwas nahi ho raha k bhala Yash usey match jeetne par kyu marega? Neways acha hua jo usne suspend kia Yash ko so that he cud meet Chah...

No need 2 say k Lalit shud b admitted in mental hospital and Swayam shud be sent 2 Africa..Lol

Aur ye Yash itne nakhre kyu dikha raha h stiches lagwane me? Lets c aage kya hota hai...

Waiting really eagerly fr nxt ud

congo fr ur cousin's engagement

love

puja

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#517

Nice part !!

Commented late coz I was in Mumbia for my Study tour !!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: togepe30
Nice part !!
Commented late coz I was in Mumbia for my Study tour !!

thanku so much...😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: rmanu7382
on demand.. jaldi se update karo madam.. i read the whole 13 parts u gave me in 3 hours!! tu thoda jaldi likha kar... ya mujhe apne padhne ki speed kamm karni padegi.. (jo main nahin karna chahti hun..kissi bhi keemat par :P)
love ...manu

manu dear no thankooo.. tera comment dekh kar dil khush hogaya... 🤗 hehehe.. writing speed increase karoon.. itna lamba part likhthi hoon issi liye i update dus din ko ek baar ya 2 weeks ko ek haar... i'll try kii ab se harr hafte ek update post karoon... waise tum tho jaantho ho na kii next part kab aane waala hai... hehehe.. no thankooo...😳😳😳

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: puuuja
Hi Surya
Gr8 ud after such a long time! Mujhe bich me laga k u hav stopped writing but thank god aisa nahi hua...Yash and Chah make a beautiful couple...flashback kafi interesting tha...Yash was sooo happy at being suspended! ye hota hai attitude! aur Swayam ki to bezzati ho gai! Mujhe to principle ki bewakufi pe vishwas nahi ho raha k bhala Yash usey match jeetne par kyu marega? Neways acha hua jo usne suspend kia Yash ko so that he cud meet Chah...

No need 2 say k Lalit shud b admitted in mental hospital and Swayam shud be sent 2 Africa..Lol

Aur ye Yash itne nakhre kyu dikha raha h stiches lagwane me? Lets c aage kya hota hai...

Waiting really eagerly fr nxt ud

congo fr ur cousin's engagement

love

puja

puuja dear thanku so much.. i'am glad you liked the part... dear don't worry i won't stop writing.. i like writing... kuch bhi ho, chahe kitna bhi delay kyun na ho but i'll not stop writing... even i liked yash's attitude... swayam tho anyway is a loser... sahii place bataya tumne swayam aur lalit ke liye they deserve it.. & yash itna bhaav kyun kha raha hai woh tho tumhe next part mein patah chal hii jayega... thanks once again.. i'll continue soon..😊