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Posted: 15 years ago
grt prt
dear
thanks 4 continue
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear.............finally u updated...................firstly wish ur cousin for the engagement....................n thanks for the lengthy part.......................

finally chah accepted she loves yash but she still thinks love is not for her................she will is sooner time........yash will not leave any stone unturned...............

the flashback was superb...............i hate swayam n also lalit...............but however swayam try hard to make yash wrong he will never be able to.............the way yash took the suspension as chutti shows his positive attitude n also a biggggggggggg slap on swayam's face..................

the preview i couldnt stop myself from smiling.................the convo is so challenging but how dod yash fall in love with chah cant wait more..............so dear update this pretty fast...................cont soon dear...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
re......................will comment later
maybe after exams
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww diii..!! atlasttt yu updated n dat too wid a supercool part..!! yash iss sooo bindasss na..!! Great part..!! loved yash one's as usual..!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😉 😆 😉 😆

n yaaa diii pleeeeeeeej nxt time update sooonnn..!! warna.... 😡 😡 😆 😆 😡
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteplz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

"Ye pal fir se laut ke na aayenge,
Unke Khyaal toh hume har pal satayenge,
Yaad bankar toh woh dil mein reh jayenge,
Aur phool bankar woh dil ko mehkayenge."

"Hoontho se nikle alfaz toh bahaar ban jate hai,
Palko se nikle nazar toh woh deedaar ban jate hai,
Saanso mein base toh woh khumaar ban jate hai,
Aur dil mein utar jaye toh woh pyaar ban jate hai."






Nidha



nidha thanku so much.. & as always i really like the lines which you write......😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

reserved Thank you very much dear for this part ...

I like flash back . yash behaving like jerk...

Thanks a lot for pm and this long part.



thanku monika... i'am glad you liked the part... yash character was meant to be different... i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

comments will follow later. superb.



thanks golu.. will wait for your detailed comments....😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm...I luved the flashbak. Yash jo jawab deta hai na Swayam ko....its terrific. And yaha to achha hi hua....Yash ko 2 weeks ki chhutti mili aur iss chhutti me usse Chah bhi mili....guess for the first n of course last tym Swayam ne kuch achha kar diya.😆😆

May be I dont need to say I hate Lalit.....koi apne ek bete se pyar aur dusre se itni nafrat kaise kar sakta hai.....mujhe to wo insaan hi nahi lagta. 😡😡😡

Btw, pata nahi kab Chah madam apni soch par phirse gaur karengi.....but I luved her convos wid Kajal n Sneha. Sneha ka Sonu wala dialogue achha tha.😆😆

Precap was nice. Pls continue soon.



thanku so much dear... don't worry agge chalkar swayam ko yash se bohat saare jawaab aur jhatke milne waale hai..... haan swayam ne joh kiya it proved achcha for yash... hehehe.... even i hate lalit yaar... & he will surely repent for his sins... i'll surely try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i really liked the way u showed how the mehra family were enjoying themselves after chah returned.The way u potrayed prernas love towards armaan was really amazing i really liked the way u showed how chah was supporting armaan,and finally chah admitted that she loved yash that scene was one of the best scenes in the part.The scene between the three sisters was described beautifully.Finally the flashback started it seems that swayam still has not changed even after three years it seems he really loves gettting into fights with yash.Yash is 2 good i really liked the way u showed how happy yash was after getting suspended.Cant wait 2 read the next part to see what happened to yash and angad.
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thanku so much dear....don't worry ek din aisa bhi aayega jab chah kudh yash se kahegi kii she loves him.. haan shayad uske liye thoda waqt tho lagega but woh din zaroor aayega..;) i'll surely continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww diii..!! atlasttt yu updated n dat too wid a supercool part..!! yash iss sooo bindasss na..!! Great part..!! loved yash one's as usual..!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😉 😆 😉 😆

n yaaa diii pleeeeeeeej nxt time update sooonnn..!! warna.... 😡 😡 😆 😆 😡



nehuu.. yup yash is fulltoo bindaas.. & i feel ek insaan ko aise hii rehna chahiye.. he should always face the difficulties head on.. aur isse mushkhil durr ho jaathi hai.... even me too loved yash.... aur dear i'll surely try & continue soon.. pukka..😊

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