Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabbat(AR)...Part 17 utd @ pg 73

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i just finished reading your 5 promos & there great

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ive jus finished reading all ur 5 promo n dey r excellent. cant wait 4 ur ff to kick in

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hahhaa jus realised i spelt my name rong its iram by da way

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Dear Sriiiiiiiiiii................. AWESOME!! Story Writer in our team.............. 😉

With Love,

Prathima..

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Posted: 16 years ago

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interesting yaar.............

very nice.............

plz continue soon...........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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I din't liked ur promos...............

but loved a lot!!!!!!!

hurryyyyyyyyyyyy tomorrow we can read ur actual stuff
rather than this small promos!!!!!!!!

try 2 make big parts as u r going 2 update only once a week!!!!!!!!!!

promos r simply awesome n fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!

u r writing in such a cute way that i am eagerly waiting 4 ur actual story!!!!!!

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I am posting my first part buddies........... at last my Fan fic is going live........yuppie......I happy, scared............. its totally a mixed feeling......I wish you all will enjoy this part......here it goes..........

@ Nimisha: Hey ...hi dear your comments really gives me boosters to write...thanks a lot....................ya my real name is Sridevi.......

@Bhanu rekha: thanks a lot sweety...for the lovely comments......

PART 1

Its a big Mansion............. a beautiful place to live in with all the possible ammneties to lead life with.........we see a handsome guy excersising in his mini gym.....He looked like a god of beauty with each and every part in perfect shape............He was running on his machine..........It was a feast to watch him...............by then.....

Arc: Ammy .................ammy...........dekho beta nikhil aya hai.........

Arm: Aaya Mom............

He just takes the towel and wiped out his sweat.............and started coming down with his tracks and vest looking hot...........any girl would fall for him..............

Arm: Baito Nikhil......kya baath hai??????

Nik: Sir wo.............. us Millania project ki tender submit karne ki liye kal last date hai....

Arm: Kya aur aap muje ab batha rahe hai??????😡

Nik: Sir wo actually last date prepo*ned hogaya........atu Atul Sir bhi nahi hai.....isiliye ghar aana pada.......😕

Arm: oh ok......Aap chaliye mein ek ghante me office aajaoonga........😲

Nik: teek hai sir mein chaltha hoon.....

Now Ammy got ready and on the way to office...........he is on the call...........

Arm: Hello ............... Atul.... kaha hai yaar tu??????? Come to office right now.....😔

Atu: Hey Armaan mein office ke liye nikal chuka hoon........ baat kya hai...????????😕

Arm: Aake bathaoonga.....😔

Atu: ok I will be waiting😔

Armaan reached office ...He as usual looked stuning in his business formals...... Atul was already waiting in ammy's cabin................ as soon as he come inside .............

Arm: Suna tune Millenia project ke baare mein??????/

Atu: Haan abhi abhi pata chala...............jaldi decision lena padega.........

Arm: Is baar Guptas bhi bid kar rahe haina?????????

Atu: Ofcource itni badi project aur wo bid na kare???????? its not possible......

Arm: Tho phir hume yeh project haasil karni hi hai......Urgent meeting ke liye bulao sab ko.....fast...Muje kuch instructions deni hai.........

Atu: Armaan suno tho.......

By then Armaan was out of the cabin............

Atu: hey bhagwaan ....kya hoga iska......

Scene shifts to Conference room Armaan is talking in the conference room to his managers regarding Millenia tender, everyone is seriously concentrating on the stratergy explained by him.

Arm: kaise bhi karke humhe eh contract jeethni hai Guptha's se???. iss baar mein koi kadar nahi chodna chata hoon?. Got it ?..

All: Yes sir?.

Arm: You may all leave now??..

Everybody leaves except Atul??.

Atu: Kya ho gaya hai Armaan tume aur kya karne par tule ho tum??itna junoon teek nahi hai??'

Suddenly Sunil (ammy's father) enters:

Sun: Ammy kya hai yeh sab beta??business me competition honi chaiye rivalry nahi?.kab sudroge tum?..

Atu: Dekha uncle bhi yahi keh rahe hai?..'

Arm: Lekin papa?.

Sun: kya lekin??????? Humari company abhi apna shikar par pohoonch rahi hai aur Gupta group of industries humari pahoonch bahoot aage hai beta?.kyon nahi samj rahe ho tum??

Arm: Papa baat pahoonch ki nahi?.baath issat ki hai?.jab meine apni MBA ki project unke company me karni chahi to kitni beissati hui thi meri?.......................itne acchi percentage hone ke bavajood muje select nahi kiya tha?sari college has rahi thi mujpe??us din ko mein abhi tak boola nahi papa? a small tear of pain escape from his eyes?

Sunil dint have any answer for ammy's questions but somehow he did not like his son to burn in this anger. He was helpless!!!!
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Armaan leaves the room.............

Sun: Atul use sirf tum hi samal sakthe ho jao beta.

Atul is out of the cabin and comes near a bench in the garden in front of the office.....

Arm: Tum yahan kyon aaye.......

Atu: Apne bacchon se milne anur tujse bachane....(He is massaging a small plant)

Arm: kya???????

Atu: tu tho frustration se yaha aya tha na...agar tu un Gupta's ki saari gussa in pe nikal de tho.........(makes a puppy face)

Arm: Atul ..............😆

Atu: Chill yaar Armaan....... itna gussa kiya mat kar......chal abhi tere ghar chalte hai breakfast ke liye...aunty ka phone aya tha....meine bhi kuch nahi kaya hai tere is Millenia ke chakkar me......😉

Arm: Chalo......min gaadi nikal tha hoon.....

Atu: Tu chal apni gaadi me... Mein apne Cycle pe aaoonga.............

Arm: yaar tu Mallik enterprises ka MD hai........

Atu: Tho kya huva??? muje pollution nahi karni.......

Arm: Champ tu sudrega nahi na??????? Jaisi tumari marzi.......

They both leave... on the way back to home......Atul was riding the cycle behind ammy's bike.....Suddenly a car came from the wrong side and ammy had to gave a sudden break to his bike which made the bike skid, Ammy fell down and got injured on his left arm....... and due to dis Atul also had to stop the vehicle suddenly, but he coudnt balance him self and fell on the ground... and also became unconcious...Armaan turned back.... Seeing Atul on the ground........😭

Arm: Champ........... (comes near atul and takes him on his lap) Champ...(he is tensed and started thinking in his mind) Are yeh to behosh hai mein kya karoon....)...😭

Ammy somehow brings Atul to one of the best Hospitals in Bangalore.....Sanjeevini.......He admits atul...Doctor check him up and he is put in the general ward.....by this time Armaan fineshes all the formalities and he really get furious on Atul being put into genaral ward and starts shouting at the nurse who was taking care of Atul at the top of his Voice witot realising where he was😡 😡.....By then the duty doctor came in She couldn see Ammys face as she came from the other side and she also faced her back towards Ammy inorder to check Atul's pulses and started speaking.

Rid : Dekhiye eh ek hospital hai aur hum doctors................ so i think we know better wht to do and what not.(the dialog was more like an arguement)😡

Armaan had fire in his eyes it was his champ Atul on the bed and how can anyone talk like that to him ???????.......he was in ful anger and wanted slap the lady who was turning her back towards him and telling all these dialogs thinking this he just moved front and suddenly she turns around bumping into his chest losing her balance......Armaan just held her tight by her waist... her loose hair fell all over her face so he was not able to see her face..but his heart felt something strange ...he wanted this moment to freeze...for the first time he felt for a girl......once Ridhima regained her balance she moved back and arranged her hair.....my god ...thought Armaan...She is so beautiful......he dint feel this even once when he worked with the best models of the country......😳

Rid : Thank you Mr...... (Armaan was lost in his thoughts) hello......(she waved in front of him but no use she just patted him and asked) aapka naam??😕

Armaan was mesmerised..but he some how spoke.........

Arm : Armaan.......

Rid : Achha ...dekhiye armaan eh ek maamuli si chot hai aur patient ghabrane ki waje se behosh hai ...so no need to worry...ICU ki koi jaroorath nahi hai .....Shaam thak ine hosh aajayegi.....hum inki dek bal karenge so u can come in the evening .........mai chalthi hoon....

But before leaving she notices Armaan's wound on the left upper arm...She just comes near him, holds his hand and drags him to dressing room........Armaan felt thousand volts of current inside him......all the way towards the room she was scolding him for being so careless....Armaan dint care about all this he was lost in her touch.......They came into the room...She made him sit on the bed....Now she just released his hand feeling little shy and also to collect the bandage....😳

Rid: Agar is gaon ko aise hi todi dher aur kula chod dethe to ICU mein aapke friend ko nahi aapko ko kudh rehna padtha.....😡

He was staring at her.......she was not able to resist it.....acting as though she dint notice it she continues.....

Rid: Sun rahe hai aap.....chaliye shirt utariye....

(As the wound was on the upper arm had to remove his shirt..........as he undid his shirt he was only with his black body tight vest..... Ridhima was feeling shy to see a guy half naked😳..but truly seeing his well buit structure ahe was falling for him....oh my god whts happening she though in her mind.....her hands were trembling while she was dressing his wound😳....finally she was done with it....😳

Rid: Hogaya...aapka dressing..ab aap ja sakthe hai....(writingdome tablets to him)..yeh davai lijiyega....gaon bharne me madad hoga aur dard bhi kum ho jayega......😊

Arm : Thank you doctor.......he could hardly speak.......😳

Rid : Ridhima........ ek aur baat ...aapko gussa boht jaldi aatha hai...saihath ke liye acchi baat nahi hai.....control karne ki koshish kijiyega.......bye...😉

Arm : Bye.....

She leaves...............Armaan just closes his eyes......and a song from background

Asmaani rang ho...pyaar ki....... after the song ends ...... he just smiles naughtily and leaves to office😳............but on the way back he gets the call from his Mom.

Arm: Boliye mom

Arc: Kaha ho tum ammy.... kabse tumari anu atul ki wait kar rahi hoon mein...kab aarahe ho tum log.....aur us nalayak ka phone band kyon hai???????😡

Armaan preffered to explain everything face to face as his mom would get tensed if speakd anything about what had happened......He decided to go home as the situation demanded it

Arm: Mein aa raha hoon mom ghar aake baat karoonga......he cuts the call..

Arc: ammy......che yeh ladka bhi na.......aane do use......

So this is my first part guys...hope it was worth waiting..........hmmmmmmmmm so need ur feedbacks to continue...........

Waiting for your replies...............

Edited by Miss Wow - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

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wow very nice yaar.............

loved it

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Posted: 16 years ago

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yaar!
mujhe koi toh chance de dia karo first comment ke liye??
😔
chalo koi ni!
😊
sri {can i call u dat??}
u hv a fabulous FF in ur hand!!
gr8 FIRST PART!
OMG!
IT WAS THE FIRST PART!!!
AAAAA!!!!!
um gonna faint!
i was soooooooooo excited!
n um damn happy 4 u....
its rockin so far!!!
n i my comments boost u up??
really?
aww....thanks a ton doll!
upd8 soon hun!
n plz add me 2 ur PM list!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

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shalini jain

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey ur prt ws superb yaar lvd it 1st prt itna acha to baki wow cnt imagine dyng 2 read ar ws lost in her hahahha nt fst time he alwys hehehe how sweeeeet yaar nd whn he cme 2 know tht sheis riddhima gupta wch he ws against guptas wow intrestng cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooon
luv yachna

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