Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabbat(AR)...Part 17 utd @ pg 73 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
written very well reaching all the expectations!!!!!!!

loved it !! its tooo nice!!!!!!
AR scenes r cuteee

their meeting was nice!!!!!

loved this part a lot

can't wait 2 read the other parT!!!!!!!

make it soooooon!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh👍🏼 its really a nice⭐️ and sweet one😊😉 superb😛 so armaan meet ridhima😉 and fall in love with her❤️ at first sight mind blowing😍 plz continue it soon😊

"pahonch hai humari chand tak,
ye taare bhi salam kiya karte hai ,
ye aasma bhi jhuk jata hai….
jab hum aapko yaad kiya karte hain."


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey.....I dint expect such good replies😛......................😊........thanks to every one....................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss Wow

Hey.....I dint expect such good replies😛......................😊........thanks to every one....................😊



if u give sweet update den u get sweet replies dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss Wow

Hey.....I dint expect such good replies😛......................😊........thanks to every one....................😊



awww gal!...ur FF is rocking....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No replies??????????????😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz update it soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys...... I am updating the next part today only as i wrote it............😉........so here it goes.....................

PART 2

Armaan came to his house…….Archana starts screaming ……..

Arc: Agaye ????????? kaha wo…? tumara jan jigri dost????????😡

Seeing Ammy's face she cooled down……

Arc: Kya huva ammy??????? Itne chup chup se kyon ho….??? Atul tha na tumare saat kaha hai wo???????

Arm: Mom…….wo……He puts his face down …….

Arc: Bataoge bi ki nahi…….she holds him…ammy dekho muje……..bathao kya bath hai??????

Arm: Mom Atul hospital mein hai……

Arc: (with anxiety) Hospital par kyon????????

When she hold his upper arm firmly….he cries out with pain….

Arm: Ouch…..Ek mamuli sa accident tha mom…..

Arc: Tume bhi lagi hai na?????? dikao muje

Arm: Kuch nahi mom ….

Arc: muje kuch nahi suni hai ammy…………shirt ……

Ammy dint have any choice…….Seeing the bandage …she feels better….

Arc: Shukar hai bhagwan ka ki itne me hi dal gaya…..aur Atul use kya huva…..chot bohot aayi hai kya??????

Ammy: Use kuch nahi huva hai mom….bas thodi si karochon ke liye behosh pada hai……

Arc: Tum jante ho use……..Bechara…….gabragaya hoga……

Ammy: Accha mom aap kuch kane ke liye pack karke deejiye……mein hospital le jatha hoon….aur muje kana laga di jiye…bohot book lagi hai……

Arc: Teek…..tum fresh hoke aao mein lagathi hoon….

Armaan comes back to the dining table after freshening…….Seeing Gajar ka halwa…he is surprised……

Arm: Mom aaj kya kaas baath hai….Gajar ka halwa and all……

Arc: Atul ne….farmaish kee thi...meine uska khana pack kardi hai……

Arm: thanks mom…

Arc: Thanks ke bacche gadi dek kar nahi chala nahi sakthe…kuch na kuch hota hi rehta hai tume….Papa ko bataya tumne…..

Arm: Nahi mom….tum hona batane ke liye…he winks…..

Arc: haan haan tumari aur tumare baap ki PA jo hoon….

By now he finished eating…….gets up and takes the packed food kept on the dining table….

Arm: (Laughing) Bye Mom……. Dad ko batana mat booliyega……

He goes……..

Arc: Ruko tum….doosra haat bhi tod daloongi…..

Scene shifts to Sanjeevini Hospital.

Ridhima is checking Atul in his unconscious state but he start getting the conscious back……….and when he is finally into his senses……and sees a girl holding his hand, he starts screaming…..

Atu : Are mein lut gaya mein barbad ho gaya…… ab meri anjali muje kabi nahi apnaye gi…..koun hai tu churail….. muje choone ki himmat kaisi huyi tumari…..

Saying this he pushes her and at the same time Armaan enters the ward and saves Ridhima from falling (Asual DMG style ha ha…..) leaving her aside he is walking towads Atul

Arm : Champ yeh kya kar raha hai tu..????? tameez nahi tume ki kiske saat kaisi behave karni hai kya???????

Atu : Armaan mere bhai mera dost…is ladki ne choo liya yaar….ab mein kya karoon anjali ko pata chale ga to who muje naraz nahi hogi kya ………agar who naraz hogayi……to mein apne chote chote bacchon ko mummy ka pyar kaise dilaoonga????

Arm : Champ tu itna socha na kar…… anjie kaise naraz ho sakthi hai tumse….. yeh to tumari doctor hai …agar tumhe chooyegi nahi to ilaj kaise karegi????? Aur maafi mang unse…..

Atu : tu sahi keh raha hai yaar….agar tu nahi hota to mera kya hota??????? (turns to Ridhima ) Sorry mam…bahoot zoor se lagi kya aapko????

Rid : Nahi aisi koi baat nahi….thats ok…..Armaan aap mere saat aayiye thodi si formalities hai aur uske baad aap le ja sakte hai inhe…..

Arm : Haan teek aap chaliye mai aatha hoon…

Ridhima leaves…..

Arm: Champ…….kitna dara diya bechari ladki ko tum…..aisa kya kiya usne…haat hi tho pakda tha na……

Atu: Muje Anjali ke siva koi aur ladki chooye ……ise mein bardasht nahi kar saktha…..

Arm: Doonga ek……usne tume treat nahi kiya hota to kabhi anjali nahi dek pata tu…..(yeh shyad zyyada hogaya…phir bhi chalega….)

Atu: Teek hai baba choodona us bath ko…..zor se book lagi hai…..kuch laya tumne….????????

Arm: Haan mom ne tumare liye kana beja hai…… eh lo kalo….Mein aata hoon….he gets up

Atu: Mom ka haath ka kana…….wow….thanks armaan

Armaan smiles….and pats his sholder as atul starts opening the box to eat. Now Armaan comes to Nurse station to enquire about Ridhima's chamber….she was already there…looking at some case files……

Arm: Ridhima…..

She lifts her head…….

Rid: Mr Mallik…..aayiye…aapika wait kar rahi thi mein…..Atul ab normal hai……aap chahe tho….abhi discharge karake le ja sakthe hai…..

Arm: Thank you doctor Ridhima….aur aap muje Armaan bula sakthe hai…….

Rid: Smiles…..teek hai….aapka haat kaise hai……Armaan

Arm: Feeling better……

Rid: do din baad aayiyega…..dressing badalni hai…….

Arm: (Feeling exited) Jee zarror……Aur atul ka discharge paper tayar keejiye…mein use ghar le jatha hoon….

Rid: Sure just 10 min……Aap ward mein wait kijiye mein udhar hi lathi hoon….

Arm: Ok…

He leaves…….and comes to ward

Arm: hogaya tumara kana????

Atu: hmm…..Mast kana tha armaan…..

Arm: Ab kaise ho????? Ghar chale…….

Atu: Office??????

Arm: Aaj.. tum rest lelo…..meine driver ko phon kardi hai…..wo tume lejayega…..ok

Atu: ok…….

Now its night……

At Mallik Mansion ……..

Armaan is very happy…………..for the surprise he came home early……….

Arc: aaj din me Chand nikal aya hai kya?????

Arm: Ma ………he goes and hugs her… lag raha ki chand darthi pe uthar gaya hai…..

Arc: oh oh……..bade romantic mood mein ho….tume aisi bathein karthe huve pehli baar dekh rahi hoon…….finally mera beta normally ek nau jawan ki tarah baat karne laga…Chandu aaj kuch meeta bane de……(She just pulls ammy and makeshim sit on the sofa) …..Mein bahooth kush hoon tumare liye…..are Sunil…..kahan hai aap……neeche aaiye ….dekhiye tho zara….mera beta….

Sun: Kya huva Archana…poore ghar ko apne sir pe kyon utake rakha hai tune???????

Aru: Sunil dekhiye ammy ko….kuch badla badla sa lag raha hai….. haina????

Sun: kya huva ammy????? Tabiyat teek hai na tumari….aaj office se itni jaldi kaise????

Arc: Itna hi nahi…..keh raha hai…Chand darthi pe aagaya hai….. muje tho lagtha hai…..zaroor koi ladki ki baath kar raha hai……

(She just pinches his ears….. Armaan is full red with shy now…….)

Arm: Ma………..he smiles…….aap bhi na… (makes a puupy face scarching his head)

Sun: Ammy beta…tu aa tho zara (he takes him aside…..)….kaisi hai wo??? zyada bolthi nahi haina tumari ma ki tarah??????..(Archana is right behind them)

Arc: Suneeeel……mein zyzda bothi hoon????? Aaj tum bahar sohoge…….

Sun: Archana suno tho…….

Arc: kuch nahi sun ni hai muje…bahar tho bahar…and that's it……

Sun: turns to Armaan) ammy tumhe tip deni ki chakkar mein…meri biwi mujse naaraz hogayi….bahoot bura hai tu beta…..

Arm: Meine kya ki papa…. Aapne tho kaho sab kuch…

Sun: Chup…………anyway congrats beta……all the best……..ab muje lag raha hai ki mein ek jawan bte ka baap hoon…..Chalo…..kana ka ke so jao…..teri ma ko convince kartha hoon…

Arm: teek hai papa…. All the best……(he is just thinking about Dr Ridhima……suddenly he gets a call breaking his thoughts)….Hello …

Voice: Hello Sir mein Nikhil.

Arm: Bolo Nikhil

Nik: Wo Mr Gupta ki beti aayi huvi hai shehar mein….

Arm: Kyaaaa??????? Accha….uski saari details chahiye muje…kal tak…….thx Nikhil…

Nik: Teek hai Sir…Mein rak tha hoon …bye good night…

Arm: Good night…take care …….

In Ridhima's Room

Ridhima is holding the family photo and thinks about her parents and how she left to Bangalore from Mumbai….a week ago to work with Keerthi in order to expertise in cardiology……..Flash back comes to her mind………

Rid : Papa 2 saal ki tho baath hai…….aap itne udaas honge tho mein jaa nahi paaoongi……….chaliye hasiye……

Sha : Ridhima beta…….tum hume chod ke kabhi bahar nahi gayi aur achanak se yeh decision…… soch lo beta……Anjan shehar Anjan log…….kya tum sach much akeli reh paoogi??

Pad: haan beta…….ek baar phir sooch lo……..

Anj: Dad mom aap ise himmat dene ki bejai dara kyon rahe hai????? (turns towards Ridhima)…. Ridzy… tu ja……I know u can do it…….aur apni goal ko pane ke liye mushkilon ka samna karni padthi hai……but I miss u………(they both hug)..

Rid: Miss u too di……..

Anj: Enough ab tum niklo warna…. Yeh dono tume phirse emotionally blackmail karma shuru kardenge…….hai na papa……

Shashank and Padma make sad faces. Rahul enters the house.

Rah: Namaste Uncle, Namaste Aunty…… Hai Anjiee….(they both hug) …. Hello Ridzy…tayyar ho…chale….. Seeing at her parents…… Uncle muje pata hai aapki dar kya hai lekin aap phikar mat kijiye…..hamari ridzy bahoot samjdar hai…..yeh uski career ka sawal hai….aur waise bhi…mein ja raha hoon na Bangalore 6 mahene baad tho use join karne…..

Sha: Teek hai beta agar yeh baat hai tho muje koi problem nahi ……

Pad: Muje bhi…..

Anj: Dekha ridzy inhe apni betiyon se zyada ispe viswas hai…..

Rah: Ridzy tume kuch jalne ki boo nahi aa rahi?????

Anj: Shut up Rahul…..chalo …..lets go……Bye Mom…Bye Dad….

Rid: Chalti hoon ma….. Bye papa…

She takes aashirwad from them and they all leave to airport. Ridhima came back to reality once her phone started ringing…..She had tears in her eyes…...wiping the tears she picks the call…..

The scene fades away…..

Its Morning………..

Ammy's Bed Room…….

He gets up from the bed and he seems to be very happy…….he had dreamt about Ridhima whole night…….he gets the call from Nikhil…..suddenly his expressions seems to fade as he receives the call……

I want many replies............to continue..................Please do reply.............................😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
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*reserved*

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yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally me first!!!!
he he he...
oh man!
ridz in armaan's arms!!
😳 😍
how cute...
n Armaan will srsly get a shock when he cums 2 noe that ridz is shashank's daughter....
😒
uff!
nice part!
upd8 soon!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha



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Edited by dmglovernimisha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dear lovely update... Atul's action was hilarious..... PLzz continue soon.. very excited to knw abt the next part..........😊

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