Manzil (AR FF) Discontinued!

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Hima

@k_anjali12

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#351

hai dear😊

really a very nice part yaar😊continue sooon😍

Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago

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Julie

@JULIEL

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#352

Love this FF. Please do continue soon

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#353

OMG sim i cant belive my eyes u updated

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

what a part i loved it sooooooooooooo much

u know i have never waited for anyone like i wait for ur ff updates

this one was just soooooooooooo gr8 finaly her hade is clear n at less for some time armaan is there for her

n finaly she meat with his family

wow wow keys to his aparatment what a shok is that i thought he wanted to clear that this relationship does not have any future but the keys that is something

but it was gr8 updat and gr8 surpries to all

luv u for this

nruti

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srihari_phoenix

@srihari_phoenix

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#354

loved the part.....
yeah..u r true......
we do live in an age of darkness...where trust is the least xpected 4m the others......
u xplained the fact and i loved it....
plzz continue sooooooooooon....
waiting 4 the nxt part.....
thnxxx......

Edited by srihari214 - 16 years ago

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#355

true to the word sim, this was NOT expected, and so, hugs for the surprise!! :)

now the part... i know you bailed yourself with that ps note about the ridhima sapna conversation, but im still going to say... it didn't go down with me as i would have wanted it to go... ridhima's guilt and sapna's reasoning, both in their place.... yeh... i think its exactly your reason i have to disagree with it... my opinion :D which i assure you, has nothing to do with being guilty for a society... only her justification and the premise of offering it to ridhima was just... something... im going to try find a word for it :D

other than that... AR, him calling her, her easy consent... his self talk and inevitable protective streak nonetheless... even ridhima's ease in talking to her friends and sharing/gossiping... all of that i liked! :) in general i like the AR in your fic here, they are stron willed and are also very human.. i like the combination, tons!

so i guess, i zero to a 50-50 grade :D (if i sound like a mean prof, its genetic, blame my folks!) but yes, i think it was the spot where AR intimicacy could be skipped, and of course, ill be more than looking forward to the next whenever it comes!

ps: thanks again for the wonderful surprise!... i actually called nij to tell her you posted since she left her system only 5 minutes before i saw you had! :)

hugs,
nj

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#356

reserved :) be back in a while!

*edit*

okeyzz.....did you really now...have to do that now..end it right wen i was sinkin in...!! ahha but naa it was NOT expected and gracias for it sim!

the whole sapna-ridz talk was heavy but in more terms than i an deny so me :D ..its my life....woohooo!! AR were nice..but yeh over wit too soon eh! also....armaan stammerin....ohh i like 😉

ciao!

nij

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#357

woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ mind blowing one😍 so Armaan's Dadi & Mom like Ridhima cool😉 plz next time more AR romance part😳 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Meri chahat ka hisab jo lagao gay,
To meri chahat ko bayhisab pao gay,
Meri chahat hay pani k bulbulay jesi,
Zara sa thukrao gy to dhondtay reh jao ge..."

"The Dream is not what you see in sleep..,
Dream is the thing which does not let you sleep."

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With Luv: ~

Nidha🤗

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@ammy-ridz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#358

hey,

Wow man u updated.Great part.

I Luved UR views n U R sooooo very Right.I Totally Agree with U.

OMG!! keys to her apartment.that was a twist in tale after Armaan's thoughts to Resist d growing Closeness.

hey will be watin 4 UR next update.

Thanxx 4 updating.

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#359

hey!! gr8 part!!

your such a good writer..im always waiting for you to update..and im so glad you finally did. that was a really good part even though there wasnt much romance.

i like/hate how you ended it cuz it was so abrupt and sudden..and i just wanted to keep on reading..lol

cont soon :)