Manzil (AR FF) Discontinued! - Page 34

Originally posted by: janu1610

Sim, first one wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 👏
I don't know how i appreciate u .
U left me speechless
A part full of emotions..
I think it was most awaited part for me .I wanna ans. why he left her? And i got it .
Now from Mr Malik to Armaan ---------------love this
U justify Armaan very well dear.Song was appropriate to situation.
I hope this sexy story soon turns to a romantic one.
Ridz found her love ,She was not alone .She had him.

lots of love
ritu

Originally posted by: suvi_rox1

hi sim i am suvrati u can call me suvi i am new to ur ff bt i must tell u i am highly impressed loveed ur bold choice of concept n subject its been terrific journey frm the beginning uptill the the 9th prt....srsly its awesome bt i hope their sex occupied story will soon turn out to be a romantic lovestory yas ya sometimes love happens after sex i have heard it somewhere n its proving to be correct in this story atleast...plz add me to ur pm list if u have any i mean if u do send pmz to......otherwise i will check on never mind....will wait fr post updates
continue soon..
dying to read what riiddhima reacts to armaans sudden disappearance n ya i have notice they dont talk yaar n they dont even call each other by their names n mention like miss gupta n mr mallik n all .....that too is interesting lol waiting when armaan will call her ridz..

Originally posted by: ridzie4u2nv

finally u posted a part fab romantic and i truely luved it continue soon

Thank you!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: missypatel

Your work is always a piece of simple classic to me....coz each time without fail...it touches my heart.....!! How do you do it? I actually don't want to know...honestly i wouldn't care...coz you know it and you use it to give us..all of it...!! Okay i loved the update was what i meant

I read that para about 'him loving her under him..'... three times...cuz every time i would get lost in their world!!

Kudos..luv and thanks!

nij

Awww Niju you are too adorable!!! Such sweet words I am really touched. Aaye haye you read that part thrice glad my work has paid off..hehe..

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

Enough romance!?...Ufff! I can't get enough of em ><

So glad you finally got a chance to update! The expressions were beautifully writtn simran! And the romance....

So......Armaan did stay for the night.....my heart beat is plusing fast......

Fanatastic update!

Natasha xo.

Awww Natasha how sweet! And I know what you bout the romance, I feel the same when I am reading other AR ff's

And yes Armi finally stayed for the night. I felt bad the last time when he left and of course everyone had the same question, why did he leave?? I hope I answered that now.

Originally posted by: teju22

Hey real nice part

and the way that they feel about each other how you show it is really great

plz do cont soon

Thank you Teju for the wonderful comment!!

Originally posted by: spln

simran....

i dont think im going to leave an essay... mostly because... no not that i dont know what to say, i just dont know if i can say it right.... anyways... the whole flow of emotions... the existence of distinct and different turmoils in each of heir lives... and yet not.... the smooth trying to occupy herself for ridhima..... the smooth get drunk and wake up ti a 'shitty' day for armaan... the lonliness yet undefined in certain ways.... i love the flow, the order of events... and the uniqueness of their bond... yes indeed... i think what i like most, after the fact that you seem to know PRECISELY when to converse, when to describe, when to narrate... i love the fact that each of the armidz you deal with in your fics... are so different not only from one another... but from any iv read.... you deal with them in such a complete way... its outstanding!!!

basically sim, loved the part... and even if not my longest... i fear this has turned out to be an essay when i claimed it wouldnt be :D

cheers,

nj

NJ your small essay was a delight to read. I absolutely devoured your encouraging compliments, thank you.

Originally posted by: sweetdamage

Hey!...great and a long part!...lol, thanks for answering our questions, I was dying to know....but I am afraid of what you have planned for us...si it going to be that Armaan is going to say, that he doesn't want a relationship, or is it going to be that he has a relationship with her, but ends up being unfaithful?

Lol, I know you already have it planned, but I think it might be a bit spicier, if he says no relationship?...lol, it's up to you though....loved the part....there were butterflies in my stomach when he kissed her...hope you can continue soon!

Thanks for the marvelous update! :D

OMG I love you!! You are the first to say that this was a long part, usually I have to hear truck load of gali' s about the shortness of the part so THANK YOU! I am glad I was able to answer your questions hopefully it makes sense now. As for the future well you would have to wait and find out.

Thanks for commenting and please do keep reading!!

Originally posted by: aravi

aww sim finally u updated definitely u aced it totaly!! the originality of emotions n the depth of the chars that u have weaved together is beautiful !!!! first the loneliness occupying the both of them ... armaan with his dad n attitude towards life .. riddhima remembering her parents n finally he knows her past yet will keep it to himself n then there coming together..... his much needed reassurance n riddhima breaking down it was all beautiful but i hate to even think to wait this very long for another update frm u but then ur work load seems immense sooo let me jus keep my fingers crossed "wink-wink"!!!!

love

Rv

Aravi you kill me but you have the right. I know I take ages to update. I am so shameless that I won't even apologize for it anymore. It has taken me a month just to reply to all the comments so I have no idea when the next part will come. I was telling Hina that I might work on something over the weekend but unfortunately I had no time L

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really awesome one superb dear so touching one so its Armaan nows about her past and also about Vivek and its really sweet he come to meet when she need someone i must say ur awesome writer plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"A Rose's Tears
When a rose's tears may shed they almost seem internal.
They go on and on until they finally love.
They will cry until they have someone.
They will cry, they will sob but
they will always hold grace, beauty, and peace."

Thank you nidha for the wonderful comments and yes Armaan finally knows about her past and it's about time don't you think?

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow back with a bang sim! i seriously loved it! its such a nice progression!
it was really nice to see the sensitive and emotional side to armaan, so the man does have a heart! he went through so much, so the way he lives his life ss understandable. i also love how despite everything, he loves his mom and grandmother so much!

Awww don't be so hard on my Armaan Robin bechara has been through a lot at such a young age, and yes the beast does posses a heart!
and yeah, i get why he left her...but im sooo happy he didnt leave her this time!

Phew I am glad I answered everyones question as to why he left and I think everyone is happy with me for making him stay this time (pats self on back)
feel so bad for riddhima, what a tough life she has had. all she needs it someone who will love her and take care of her.
it was so great that armaan went to her when he found out the truth about her past, he was there for her when she needed someone!

and of course, making tender love...perfectly done! and the fact that he stayed the night and they both slept in each others arms had me smiling!

Yea I want their relationship to progress emotionally without leaving the making love factor out.
awesome part sim, i really hope he starts to feel something for her!
i can understand how busy u must be with work, but pleaassseee try to take some time out and give us a update...sooner :D
luv ya, robin

Thanks Robin your comments are always a delight to read and no comments on the next update he he…

Originally posted by: Kaj!

that was such a beautiful part

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: ShWeEt @nGeL 16

hey gr8 work soooooo sorry 4 lt rply/........ do cont soon & do pm me

love

diva

Thank you for commenting!!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

omg!! cute part!!!

even though you ddidnt update for the longest time..im still happy cuz that part was awesoem!!

i cant wait for the next part.

i really love your fan fic! it has a story thats acutally differnt from the other ones!

he he..I know I am terrible but I am glad you liked the part!

Originally posted by: suvi_rox1

hi simran.....i hope u remember me..i joined ur ff ...was a silent reader till prt 9..bt nt any more...was actually waiting fr ur pm fr prt 10...bt u never did...nt that i mind any ways....after reading so many wonderful ff every day i kind of forget ur concept so had to go through it once more in a glance..bt abt prt 10 it was just fabulous ..the romance made me blush while reading it..it was ummmnn...very sensuous..i loved reading it srsly...will wait fr the nxt prt...n thnx fr a long romantic prt...hugs..i hope u will pm me fr the nxt prt.

Yes I remember you suvi so glad to see you back!! Sorry dear I tried the PM thing in the beginning and found out I am terrible. I might PM once in a while but most of the time I don't have enough time to PM; hence my updates are usually delayed, but I really appreciate you reading and commenting it means a lot to me. I will try pming when I update the next part!

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Wow Sim

What a comeback, is all I can say

you explained both the sides very well

him investigating on her

& then being there for her

was so cute...

the romance, was nice too...

just right...

Thanks yaar and yea its about time Armaan knew about her past, don't you think!

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Simz *hugs*

honey this was one awesome update
infact more coz it was almost a suprise
lots dealt with,both sides and their insecurities beautifully penned
Simz u do have a magic in your writing,keeps me glued and leaves me smiling :)

glad he's there for her now,the way u describe passion is second to none trust me,i love it to the core!

take care hun
and hope everything's relaxed soon

luvya
Hina

Awww my hinu there you are (hugs) thank you for the lovely comments and now here I am a month later with no next part. I am awful I tell you, but work and school have me chained. Plus I have a trip to India coming up in July which means more work since I will be gone for 3 weeks!

Originally posted by: -harika-

nice part sim! dis is getting interesting n this part was strangely peaceful, love the way u r taking this

Thank you Harika!!

Originally posted by: kaurpj01

THIS IS SO COOL I HOPE THAT NOW THEY WOULD GET MARRIED AND WILL HAVE MORE ROMANTIC AND HOT SCENES I WANT U TO PUT VIVEK SOMEWHERE AS WELL SO ARMAAN CAN ACTUALLY BANG HIM FOR DOING THIS TO HIS RIDHIMA PLZ TELL ME IS THIS RIDHIMA SHILPA ANAND PLZ SAY YES BCOZ I REALLY LIKE HER.

Awww Kaur you are too cute. Sorry hunn they won't be getting married, well at least not yet hehee.. and don't worry we will take care of Vivek too. Also to answer your question this Riddhima can be any Riddhima Shilpa, Suku or even Jenny. Personally I like Shilpa and this FF was written with her in mind, but you are welcome to picture any Riddhima.

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

hey simran....

you always always leave such breathtaking updates.......

as usual,your writing is exceptional....

love the way this story is going

love

sumedha

Thank you so much Sumedha

QUOTE=shalika]hey nice ff do continue soon

Thank you!