AR #1-wen u luk me in d eyes(PART 38-PG 148) 17/6 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooh so sweet part plzzz continue n pm me next time to n thx 4r this time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice part dear................👏...u deserve claps......hey cont soon dear n pm me....bye take care......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was very sweet n cute part loved it very much...

continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cool update... Ridz likes Sunflowers... thts pretty unusual.......... Well fantastic part.. completely enjoyed it.. Plzz continue soon....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guyss!!! m really very thankful to neha who found me my main thread
m posting the 6th part again
n m sorry if u'll r getting irritated but now i'll pakka continue here!!!!!
love rabu
here goes the 6th part
Ridz room at 8 a.m

Ridz: di get up u r gonna be late for sanjeevani

Anji: hmmmm?.2 mins?

Ridz: diiiiiiiiiiiii??????

Anji:ok ok, m up chill

Ridz: good, dats like my di m goin down u cum soon

Ridz talking to bhagvanji

Ridz: bhagvanji aaj mera first day hai plz meri madad karna ke main apna kaam acche se kar saku.

Shashank: riddhima beta!!!!!!!!!

Ridz: ji dad aaye

Ridz: accha bhagvanji main chalti hu. thank u. bye

Ridz: ji dad aapne bulaya (sitting next to shashank for breakfast)

Shashank: beta, abhi bhi waqt hai soch lo

Ridz: dad maine soch liya hai

Shashank: beta lekin sanjeevani hone ke bawajud tum govt. ke city hospital main kyu kaam karna chahti ho?

Ridz: dad, main sirf dekhna chahti hu ke main khud kuch ban sakti hu kya. aap fikar mat kiijiye dad everything will be fine. Trust me

Shashank: ok best of luck beta

Ridz: accha dad nani kab aa rahi hai?

Shashank: who Saturday shaam tak aa jayengi

Ridz: ok

Anji: gud morning dad, gm mom, wow mom breakfast main kheer?

Padma; maine toh riddhima ke liye banai hai taaki wo???

Anji: (laughing) ohhhhhh bribe????

Padma: anjali kuch bhi bolti rehti hai, riddhima ke pehla din hai isliye yeh keer maine banai hai. Main toh bas riddhima se taste karwa rahi thi abhi...

Ridz: (takes a spoonful) wow mom bahot acchi bani hai.

Ridz: bye dad, bye mom, bye di (kisses everyon while saying bye)

Its 9 a.m now

Ridz: hello, m Dr. riddhima gupta

Person: hello Dr. gupta I am Dr. raj mehra (shaking hand)

Dr. raj: cum let me show u around

Ridz: ya sure

Raj: ????????.. (after half an hour) n this is our children?s ward

Ridz: (smiles sweetly) hmmmmm?

Raj: so.....?

Ridz: wat so? (she was getting quiet irritated by this question)

Ridz: ( why don?t ppl have anything to say other than so..,? gosh I?ll hit the next person who asks me this I swear)

Raj: I mean do u like this place?

Ridz: ya its?.its?.ok, (seeing his eyebrow raised) I mean gud

Raj: (satisfied with the comment) well den lets get to work, shall we?

Ridz had a long day n she worked with dedication on her very first day, raj was absolutely impressed by her way of working n the way patients connected to her, but the biggest problem was about to come?..

After 2 days. (Wednesday) Its 5p.m

Ridz?s cell rings

Ridz: hello

Armaan: hey riddhima its armaan

Ridz: hi armaan. Wats up? (gosh he really took my no. i thought di mazak kar rahi hai)
armaan: ntn, I was jus thinking if we could meet

Ridz: (a bit apprehensive) umm, ya sure

Armaan: ok so I?ll pick u at 7 from ur place. is it ok?

Ridz: ya dats fine, so c u at 7

Armaan: ya bye

Ridz: bye (m I doing the right thing by meeting him?lets c kya hota hai)

Armaan comes to pick ridz

Armaan: hi, come hop in

Ridz: (sitting) hi

Armaan: so??

Ridz: (I had sworn to slap the next person who asks this but how can i? he is jus so sweet) so wat?

Armaan: I mean how was ur day?

Ridz: it was good. Wat about u?

Armaan: well u know I work in delhi so practically m bekaar as of now

Ridz: (laughing at his way of talking) ok, so wen r u going back?

Armaan: m going back on Saturday morning

Ridz: hey!! den wen will u be back?

Armaan: umm perhaps they will be giving me d transfer now so it may take 2 weeks I dunno if it takes longer, so where do u wanna go?

Ridz: any place is fine wid me?

Armaan: lets go to the beach

Ridz: cool

(Armaan n ridz spend the whole evening at the beach talking about their childhood n den their teenage years n friends in short they get to know a lot about each other.)

Armaan: ?n u know mom was like totally bugged with me n rahul loitering around till 3a.m . u know once she did not let us in n we climbed in her room through the trees.

Ridz: (laughing all along) but y her room?

Armaan: unfortunately there r trees only outside her window

Ridz: jee!!! dats sad (sarcastically)

Armaan: I know, n then next time wenever she didn?t let us in, she would close all the windows of the house n den we would happily go back partying n den fish out reasons to give her as where were we?

Ridz: heyyy dats not good mr.

Armaan: ya I know den I used to feel bad n guilty, so to make it up I n rahul would buy her something

Ridz: dats sho shweet armaan

Armaan: (looking at her kiddish face n smiling) den hamari galti chupane ke liye we would say dat we were window shopping n liked dat stuff for her so we contributed to buy it

Ridz: well, as long as it makes some1 happy I think lies r good

Armaan n ridz look at each other smiling

ridz: u know wen i had been to LA i used to go out partying but to be honest i never enjoyed them much. i mean how can ppl stay up soooo late...i used to get all sleepy n keep bugging muskaan to leave

armaan: (smiling)( den?)
ridz: den wat? she used to get all pissed off n come wid me...maine usse kaha ke next time se woh chali jae akeli but she would never leave me alone...
armaan: very protective huh!!!!!
ridz: acctually armaan, every1 is protective about me...dad, mom , di, nani n muskaan...they sumtimes treat me like a small kid (making a childish face)
armaan: hmmm...i can c dat (smiling wide)
ridz: heyyyyyy
armaan: peace...peace...but acctually u r very fragile
ridz: agar main fragile hoti toh tumhe akele milne nahi aati ok? (getting irritated)
armaan: toh kya puri fauj lati? (sarcastically)
Ridz: I think we should leave its getting late

Armaan: ya sure I?ll leave u cum?

Outside her house

Ridz: thanx armaan, bye gud nite n take care

Armaan: hey don?t be so formal wid me riddhima?take care, gud nite



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Edited by rabiam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hey t ws superb yaar thy r cmng close nd tlkng hahahah vryyyyyy cute prt yaar i hope oooooon thy wll gt mre close day by day nd he is also goi fr 2weeks awwwwwwwww nd ridz hm lts see
cont soooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
hey ppl!!!!!!
m sorry for making u wait, n m also sorry if i have not been able to PM everyone... i'll do it wen i have time but as for now college has started...so sorry once again
thanx a lot 4 ur lovely comments
lemme know how this part is
love rabu!!!!!!!
PART 7
RIDZ'S ROOM

Ridz: hi muskaan

Muskaan: hey ridzie, kya kar rahi thi? ab time mila tujhe call karne ka? Pata hai main 2 din se kitni tension main thi? Pura time babaji se pray kar rahi thi ke tujhe sahi salaamat rakhe…aur ek tu hai ki mujhe ek baar bhi call nahi kiya……..(talking very fast)

Ridz: muskaan, chup ho ja, mujhe bhi kuch bolne de yaar

Muskaan: accha bol

Ridz: m sorry muskaan maine tujhe 2 din se call nahi kiya par tujhe pata hai na mere dimaag main kya kya chal raha hoga?

Muskaan: ridzie kaisa hai woh?

Ridz: kaun?

Muskaan: arre stupid woh tera dost jo tujhe dekhne aaya tha

Ridz: muskaannn…uska naam armaan hai

Muskaan: ha ha wahi, kaisa hai? (all excited)

Ridz: actually muskaan pata hai who itna bura bhi nahi hai

Muskaan: matlab? Tune ha kar di? (hyper)

Ridz: muskaannn, kaisi baatein kar rahi hai? Aur meri salamaati ke liye kyu babaji se pray kar rahi thi? Main kya jung ladne ja rahi thi kya? (irritated) wait a sec, muskaan, r u drunk rite now? Maine kaha tha tujhe aa ja wapas par meri sunni hi nahi haina tune……. (getting angry)

Muskaan: sorry ridz, who…maine…thodi si…

Ridz: muskaan u know wat? Lets talk wen u sober down

Muskaan: arre…arre ridz…sunn…dekh maine kaha na sorry…woh varun ne pila di thi. I promise main next time se nahi piyungi (sincerely)

Ridz: kapeesh? (still unsure)

Muskaan: (smiling) kapeesh!!!!! Accha toh bata na uske bare main…

Ridz: muskaan, who accha hai (nodding while saying all this) smart hai…

Muskaan: handsome hai? (very very excited)

Ridz: (laughing ) ha handsome hai, n muskaan I had an awesome time wid him 2day

Muskaan: wat? Tu uske saath gaye thi?

Ridz: ha kyu?

Muskaan: nahi aise hi poocha… usne kya kaha? Kuch kiya toh nahi na?....

Ridz: I knew this is gonna happen…muskaan main choti bacchi nahi hu yaar

Muskaan: par tu bholi hai ridz…n m always worried bout u, u know dat (seriously)

Ridz: hey muskaan, main…m sorry I know u all r protective about me but m fine. N usne aisa kuch nahi kiya…aur agar future main usne kuch kiya toh I'll surely tell u…ok meri ma?

Muskaan: (smiling) good girl!!!!! So…wats ur decision gonna be?

Ridz: I dunno, I need time muskaan, mujhe usse aur thoda janna hai. U know I take a long time to decide

Muskaan: hmmm, accha chal mujhe neend aa rahi hai main tujhse kal baat karungi. But think properly before u say anything. Ok?

Ridz: ya, bye…gud nite…opps sorry gud morning

Muskaan: kuch bhi bol merit oh abhi night hai. N e wayz gud nite. Take care

(muskaan is still in LA)

Armaan's room (Friday night)

He is packing his bag

Armaan: mom have u seen my jacket?

Keerti: (entering his room) look properly I kept all ur clothes in ur wardrobe this morning

Armaan: then y is dat m not able to find it? (angrily searching in his wardrobe actually messing his wardrobe)

Keerti: god!!! U r messing the whole thing n den u expect to find ur things in there, move aside…

Armaan moves making a cute cry baby face

Keerti: I wonder how riddhima is gonna handle u……….

Armaan: mom we had dat discussion didn't we? Stop it now its not dat I have said no. time is all m asking for n m sure my gorgeous mom can give me dat (kissing her on the cheek)

Keerti: ok, but m really sorry I forgot dat u were going to delhi for 2 weeks. Armaan: its ok mom. Love u

Keerti: love u 2.

Armaan's cell starts ringing n guess who it is……riddhima!!!!!

Armaan: mom can u plz pass me my cell…

Keerti: hmmm……….. (she smiles watching riddhima's name flashing)

Armaan: kaun hai mom?

Keerti: (picks d call n bfore she could say anything riddhima started talking)

Riddhima: armaan kabse phone kar rahi hu, sleeping or wat? U have a flight to catch remember? now say sumthing…mourn vrat hai kya?

Keerti: uhh riddhima beta main keerti bol rahi hu, ek minute main armaan ko phone deti hu

(armaan turns around as soon as he hears her name)

Riddhima: oh aunty aap, m sorry…mujhe laga ki…

Keerti: its ok just a minute

Armaan: mom?????? (making an irritated face)

Keerti: (smiling) wat? Lo baat karo. Main abhi aati hu

Armaan: (watches her leave the room) ha riddhima bolo

Riddhima: armaan…main…who…

Armaan: chill riddhima itni darri hui kyu ho, mom ne kuch nahi kaha

Riddhima: hmmmm

Armaan: accha batao kyun call kiya?

Riddhima: main toh bas bye bolne ke liye phone kiya tha aur dekho kya hogaya. I hope aunty doesn't mind

Armaan: riddhima (sweetly) chill ok? Maine bola na kuch nahin hua.n ha thanx for calling.

Riddhima: bye n take care. Sambhal ke jaana

Armaan: yes I will. Bye n u 2 take care of urself

Both smile n keep the phone n keerti enters with a satisfied smile on her face

Armaan: (getting irritated) wat?

Keerti: wat wat?

Armaan: mom….y do u have that grin on ur face?

Keerti: arre ab main khush bhi nahi reh sakti

Armaan: (totally irritated) yeah rite…

They continue packing n armaan leaves at 5 in the morning n stops his parents from coming to the airport as it is raining badly

Keerti: take care n call me wen u reach the airport n wen u r going to board the flight n wen u land n wen u reac……..

Shahsank: keerti, stop it he is not a kid…armaan take care beta jus let us know if ur flight is taking off n wen u reach der ok?

Armaan: sure dad, bye mom take care

Keerti: bye baccha m gonna miss u, is der anyway dat u can be back by next Sunday?

Armaan: momm… (Making an irritated face) bye. love u, bye dad

Hugs his dad n mom n leaves

In delhi

Rahul: come on dude I have been waiting for the past half hour for u to tell me all about her

U told me dat u would call me once u reach home, par nahi maharaja ko time nahi mila (making faces)…… for god sake its almost a week n tujhe 1 din bhi time nahi mila? I can see myself being flushed out of ur life (all dramatic)

Armaan: chill bro lemme finish with this one lap… (Armaan was playing PS3)

Rahul: whatever, m leaving.

Armaan: ok wait. I'll tell u everything on our way to sanjeevani

Rahul: u cum down m waiting in the car, n make it quick mr.

Armaan: aye aye sir!!!(saluting him)

In the car

Rahul: so u r saying dat she is gud?

Armaan: ofcourse, come on we were friends den, she has to be good coz she was ARMAAN MALLIK'S friend or….is….or… I dunno... forget it

Rahul: (laughing a bit) k so wat will u say? Is it a yes or a no?

Armaan: I dunno rahul, I have met her jus twice, I still need time …hey… u know she likes sunflowers? (Getting all excited)

Rahul: really?? dats quite unusual

Armaan: yeah I told her the same thing…

Rahul: (entering the hospital n looking at their duty charts) ok mr. so… take ur time n don't rush into things if u r not sure. But u know wat armaan?

Armaan: wat?

Rahul: I feel she is the one for u dude. I have seen u wid so many girls but I never felt dat anyone is worthy of u or u of someone!!! (winking)

Armaan: heyyyy

Rahul: (showing the peace sign) but…but…wen I saw her snap I felt dat way now its gonna be ur decision

Armaan: thanx bro (hugging) I knew u would help me see things straight.

Rahul: n dats y u didn't tell aunty anything. Rite?

Armaan: u know me yaar…hey by the way mom told padma aunty about dat wife thing

Rahul: no way!!!!!!!!

Armaan nodded

Rahul: gosh I HAVE to talk to her

Armaan: chal den my duty is in OPD, c ya later

Rahul: yup later.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey it ws superb yaar vryyyyy nice yaar heheh keerti ws teasng him nd irritatng him also nd ridz clld him nd she heard wht she ws sayng chooooo cute nd nw ar hv gone nd rahul nd ar hmmmmmmmmmm he tld him evrythng nd he ws heheh awesom........
cont sooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
hey very gud dear.................hmm nice they both r slowly liking each other............cont soon dear...n c u dint pm me wen u updated so next time pls pm me...dont forget,....bye
take care.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey great, fabulous, wondeful, part, continue soon and pls continue there, in this tread.

Kashish

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