AR #1-wen u luk me in d eyes(PART 38-PG 148) 17/6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: me_lovelygul
hey just read the whole i must say it was great.............plz continue soon ...........n i hope they both stay like this for sum more time n talk or they meet up again so tht they get to noe each other more........plz continue soon.........i just luved the way u eased their awkwardness.........
plz cont soon
natasha

hey thanx

keep reading

love rabu

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rabia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😊😉 plz continue it soon😊

"Unki nazron se door jayenge hum,
Door fizaon me kabhi kho jayenge hum,
Meri yaadon se lipat k royenge wo,
Zameen odh ke jab so Jayenge hum."

thanx a lot dear

i really enjoy reading ur shayaris n love the flowers

keep reading

love rabu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

wow yaar interesting..........

very nice ff loved it

plz do continue soon.............

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Sonia Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

i just read ur FF. it is very nice. AR conversation and this arranged marriage thing is very intresting.

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

just finished reading the ff and i love the way u took up the whole issue of arranged marriage. it was done in such a realistic way. especially loved ridz and armaan's convo, do continue soon

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rabia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey guys!!! m really very happy to know dat u guys r liking my FF thanx a lot n enjoy reading love rabu

i hope u guys remember dat in the last part armaan was in the washroom LOL!!!

part 5

ridz goes to the terrace instead

She is actually trying to sort things in her mind. Wat would she say about armaan wen her parents ask her?....does she really like him n spend her life wid him??is he really the one?...wat does he think of her?.....do they like her?....will she be able to stay away from home?.........willshe??

armaan: riddhima?

Ridz: (turns back) yes?

Ridz: oh armaan?cum in

Armaan: hmmm u have a pretty garden here

Ridz: thanx. Mom loves doing dis. She has put her life into making this beautiful. I cum here wenever I want to be alone

Armaan: m sorry?m I disturbing u?

Ridz: no no ??.no?it?s ok. acctually I was just passing so thought of waiting by. N it?s raining so?hey?how did u guys reach. My friend was gonna cum but she got stuck so she went back?I guess u all didn?t have any probs?

Armaan: (thinking about his dad?s words)??

Ridz: hellllo?. (waving her hand) armaan u ok?
armaan: oh?ya?sorry?no?no?we didn?t get stuck anywhere

Ridz smiles

Armaan: (looking around) so which is ur favourite flower?

Ridz: I love sunflowers

Armaan: that?s quite unusual

Ridz: y do u say dat?

Armaan: oh well most of the girls like roses?u know I always gave ros???.

Ridz: (giving him a i-knew-it look) hmm caught u??.(laughing)

Armaan: (embaressed at being caught) oh?sorry I meant dat?

Ridz: its ok armaan?just teasing u?I hope u don?t mind (smiling)

They stand there quietly for sumtime listening to the raindrops outside

Armaan: u love rains rite?

Ridz: (surprised) u remember!!!?u don?t like dem rite?

Armaan: ya?u remember too!!!

Anji cums der

Anji: u 2 r here! I have been looking around the whole house for u'll

Ridz: y di?

Anji: no actually uncle thought u 2 ran away

Ridz: diiiiiiiii

Anji: wat? Chill sis m kidding( smiling)

Armaan: (grinning) well we would have if u wouldn?t have disturbed us. to be honest it?s an awesome idea. Wat say riddhima?

Ridz: armaannn. Well U 2 can enjoy?plz excuse me (irritated)

Anji: ridz itna kya bhadak rahi hai. Hum toh bas mazak kar rahe the?

Ridz leaves widout lookin back

Anji n armaan continue laughing

Anji: sorry armaan if I disturbed u both

Armaan: cumon anji we were just standing here

Anji: k?so where do u work in delhi u said????

Armaan: sanjeevani

Anji: oh?so dad n mom must have met ur parents there??..now I get it

Armaan: ya they did. y?

Anji: nah I n ridz were jus thinking how cum dad n mom met keerti aunty n shubs uncle

Armaan: ok?y didn?t u like their meeting? (probing her)

Anji: no its not like dat, lets c if its gud or ???

Ridz: armaan, I guess u?ll r leaving (standing on the door)

Armaan: ya ok, n listen riddhima, m sorry... i was jus joking

ridz: its ok armaan

armaan: (smiling wide) sure?
ridz: (smiles) positive

Armaan, ridz n anji leave 2gether

Drawing room

Keerti: chalo beta, we?ll leave

Armaan: ya mom

Keerti: riddhima beta, anjali beta take care

Ridz n anji: ji aunty

Ridz: aap bhi apna khayal rakkhna

Anji: uncle, aunty plz keep comin?

Shubs: sure beta we will

Keerti: ab aap sab logo ko ek baar hamare ghar aana hoga. Promise

Shubs: better decide the date 2day itself

Shashank: let the rains stop den we?ll decide

Shubs: nahi shashank, fir toh tum kabhi nahi aa paoge

Padma: accha bhaisaab lets meet on next to next Sunday

Keerti: ya dat will be gr8

Armaan: (to himself) arre koi mujhse bhi pucho yaar. Main toh delhi jaraha hu tabhi 2 weeks ke liye?

Shashank: chalo beta. Take care. We?ll meet soon?I mean on sunday

Armaan: sure uncle do cum?uncle?actually m going 2 delhi for 2 weeks

Shashank: oh so we wont be able 2 meet. No prob we?ll meet after u cum back

Armaan: definitely

Keerti: (to herself) oh I totally forgot dat armaan is going to delhi, now if I change it wont look gud. Let it be

Keerti: bye padma, bye bhaisaab

Everyone: bye

Armaan: bye anji?bye..riddhima

Both: bye

In the car

Shubs & keerti: so??????

Armaan: so???

Shubs: cumon son say sumthing

Armaan: wat? am I supposed to?
shubs: I dunno. r we supposed to ask or consider it as a yes?

Armaan: I dunno?oh wait?I told mom I need time

Keerti: I know dat but how much time do u want?

Armaan: I dunno, I need time 2 know her mom

Keerti: how will u wen u?ll be in delhi

Armaan: did u even consider me while setting up ur dinner plan?

Keerti: m sorry, I totally forgot, d least u could have done is remind me? (a bit angry)

Armaan: (a bit angry himself) mom?plz?main kya bolta aap logo ke beech main

Keerti: look?lets sort this out wen I cool down

Armaan: sure

Ridz?s room

Anji: so...?

Ridz: wat so?

Anji: ridz, do I even need to mention it?
ridz: yes di coz I dunno wat u r hinting at

Anji: ridzieeeee, m talking about armaan

Ridz: ok, wat about him?

Anji: ridz tujhe theek se answer karna hai toh kar varna main ja rahi hu (getting up)

Ridz: diiiii, accha bolo

Anji: (smiling) do u like him?

Ridz: umm?ha?theek hai

Anji: ridz aise nahi yaar, will u say yes?

Ridz: di, I dunno. Hum abhi abhi toh mile hai give me sum time, mujhe sochne do, u know I can b so confused at times

Padma: riddhima!!!

Ridz: ji mom

Padma: so??

Ridz: oh no, not again mom (getting irritated)

Padma: kya hua (confused)

Anji: (laughing) mom main bhi kabse ridz se yahi pooch rahi thi, m sure agar dad bhi poochlenge toh ridz will start shouting

Ridz: diiii

Ridz: mom plz? (looking at her mom?s sad face) ok m sorry?its jus dat i? mom I need time (dats it ridz u just had to blurt it out dat was easy)

Padma: as u wish

Ridz: mom I said m sorry (making a puppy face)

Padma: (smiling at her kiddish beahaviour) grow up baccha, u wont be able to play dat trick at ur in-laws... (she leaves the room)

Anji: so where were we?

Ridz: di can we plzzzz stop discussing armaan now? Its like u?ll didn?t have anything to talk in life before he came?gosh u guys r unbelievable!!!!!!!

Anji: we will c. I bet wen u marry him u?ll b d one talking about him n we?ll be like stop it now? n by the way he took ur no. (smiling wickedly)

Ridz: so? Wats der to smile di? Hum friends the aur itne time ke baad mile hai toh obvious ha..?

Anji: meri bholi ridz who tujhse bhi no. maang sakta tha na?
ridz: forget it di mujhe neend aa rahi hai aur waise bhi kal mera first day hai. Gud nite

lemme know if u liked this part

i know not much of AR but will try to think of sumthin nice

till den waiting for ur comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by rabiam - 16 years ago

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Robin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

nice part, looking forward to more ar scenes!

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shalini jain

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

hey wow yaar awesom yaar ridz got irritatd hehehe nd arridz bth wre sayng s nd all also son so hahahahha wow yaar nw ar goi delhi fr weeks hmmmmmmmm lookng forward fr mre arridz scenes.........
cont soooooooon
luv yachna