AR #1-wen u luk me in d eyes(PART 38-PG 148) 17/6 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Cool update..... Muski is so protective abt Ridzi.. n Rahul is a sweet frnd.. so understanding.... hope to c more AR scenes.. Plzz continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Hey Sonia! Just read both of u parts, and it's really remarkable how u write of a simple story line that really stand out, which I'm loving at the moment!

Please do Pm next part!

Hmm a new title?....how does Mera Kya? sounds?

-Natasha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice update. muski n rahool reaally good friz yaar. muski tali ovr aq guy not worthdoing it.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol very nice part n a lil bit funny.........wife thing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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another cute part, looking forward to more ar scenes! cont soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
hey guys!!! thanx a lot for ur comments...i know u'll want more of AR but in this part there isn't much of them coz armaan is in delhi...but in the following part i have a suprise for u all... so as of now enjoy reading
love rabu
PART 8

Mumbai,

Gupta residence

Shashank: riddhima aa gaye hai kya?

Padma: nahi, I'll just call her

*Ting *tong*

Padma: it must be her (opens the door)

Padma: maa ji aap, (hugs n bends down to touch her feet) kaisi hai aap? Aapki tabiyat toh theek haina?
nani: jeeti reh padma beta, main theek hu meri tabiyat bhi theek hai bas thodi si thakan thi who tum logo ko dekhkar chali gae

Shashank: ma, (hugs her) humne aap ko bahot miss kiya

Padma: aap baithiye main abhi aaye

Nani: arre meri bacchiya kaha hai?
shashank: ma who……..

*ting*tong*

Shashank: ek minute

Opens the door

Anji: hi dad

Shahsank: hi beta

Anji: (squels) naniiiiii

Nani: anjali beta, kaisi hai tu aur yeh riddhima kaha hai?

Anji: nani who ab taka aye nahi, main uska cell try karti hu

Padma: maa yeh lijiye paani

Nani: Accha shashank tune bataya tha ki riddhima ke liye rishta aaya tha?

Shashank: ha ma main aapko batane hi wala tha ke who hamare padosi the na malliks unka beta armaan….lekin phone hi cut ho gaya tha

Nani: armaan……… (Thinking)

*FLASHBACK*

Nani running behind 2 kids

Nani: arre armaan mera chashma wapa kar de beta, arre riddhima plz beta mera chashma wapas kar de, tu meri acchi beti haina? Yeh armaan hai hi shaitaan. Iske saath rehkar tu bhi waisi ho gae hai…hey bhagvan kuch karo in shaitaano ka

Armaan n ridz r laughing while running

Nani: (stops running) accha theek hai, tum mujhe chashma nahi de rahe ho na? main who saari ice cream anjali ko de deti hu…

Ridz stops as soon as she hears *ice cream*, she snatches the specs n like an obedient child gives it to nani

Armaan: ridz tu hamesha ice cream ka naam sunke aisa karti hai, (totally irritated) tujhe jab khani hai toh mujhe bol diya kar na main tujhe khila dunga. (like a big boy)

*coming back to present*

Nani: accha woh shaitaan? Baapre riddhima aur who milke kitni masti karte the….. ab kaisa hai woh?
padma: maa ji ab who bilkul waisa nahi hai bahot hi samajhdar ho gaya hai. Woh delhi ke sanjeevani main doctor hai

Nani: yeh toh bahot acchi baat hai

Anji: nani uska cell busy aa raha hai

Nani: accha theek hai, riddhima ne kya kaha armaan ke bare main?

Anji: kaha kuch kaha nani, who toh sirf time maang rahi hai pata nahi kab jawab degi?

Nani: koi baat nahi mere bacche ab main aa gaye hu na sab kuch pata kar lenge

Shashank: accha maa shubhanker aur keerti ne ne hame dinner pe bulaya hai next Sunday ko, theek haina?
nani: ofcourse theek hai

Anji: chaliye nani aap chalke aaram kar lijiye bahot ho gae baatein, ridz ayegi toh hum khana kha lenge

Its 11 p.m n every1 is waiting for ridz at the dining table as she said that she will be back in an hour

Ridz opens the door with her keys thinking dat every1 must be asleep but to her surprise every1 is waiting for her bcoz of her work at the hospital she totally forgot dat nani was going to come as soon as she entered she saw nani n ran to her

Ridz: naniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Nani: aagaye meri bacchi, dekh kitni thaki hui lag rahi hai chal haath dho kar aa aur khana kha le

Ridz: nahi nani mujhe bahot neend aa rahi hai, mujhe khana nahi chahiye main sone ja rahi hu

Padma: riddhima, nani kabse ruki hai tumhare liye ke tum aaogi toh hum sab khana khayengi

Ridz: really nani? But aapko apni dawaiyan khani hoti hai toh aap mere liye kyu wait kar rahi hu? Accha chalo theek hai main haath dhokar aati hu

Nani: meri acchi bacchi

Ridz: (taking a seat next to nani) nani mujhe promise karo ke next time se mujhe late hua toh aap mere liye nahi rukengi. kapeesh? (holding her palm out like a small kid)

Nani: kapeesh (giving her hand)

They eat n talk n ridz soon retires to her room for her sleep

She is about to go to sleep wen her cell rings

Ridz: oh god!!! itni raat ko kaunsa ullu phone kar raha hai? Ohhh armaan

Ridz picks up………hello?

Armaan: hi
ridz: hi
armaan: kya kar rahi thi?

Ridz:(why the hell is he calling me so late? he could have called in the morning or mayb……..

Armaan: hello? U der?

Ridz: huh? Oh ya … ya tell me armaan. Wat made u call so late?
Armaan: is it? Its only 12.30

Ridz: armaannnn shareef log sleep at this time if u dunno…….

Armaan: oh m sorry (sincerely)

Ridz: (she could sense the sincerity in his voice) its ok armaan tell me

Armaan: no actually I just called up to say hi

Ridz: (this guy is kidding me) oh but I guess u should be saying good nite (sarcastically)

Armaan: ok den gudnite (sadly)

Ridz: no armaan I was jus joking. Ok tell me y did u call? N e probs?
Armaan: nah, I told u just to say hi

Ridz: armaan m really sleepy, had a long week…

Armaan: ok ok, umm…I'll talk to u later

Ridz: sure

Armaan: gud nite n sweet dreams n sorry once again for disturbing u

Ridz: (smiling) gud nite

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey vryyyy cute prt yaar nd ridz nd ar ws tooo naughty in childhood hehhehehe nd nani aa gayi wow nd wht surprise u r bringing cnt wait yaar nd arridz tlkng bt ridz ws sleepy nd poor archoooooooo sad..........hey i cnt be able 2 reply fr 2days kkkkkkk.i am goi out......
tc
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hhey its awesum..plzz pm me nxt time wen u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
hey amazing part..luvd it..armaan is really very sweet..update soon..
n thanx fr PM hun..
luv ya..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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veryyy gooood!
had armaan gone mad??
agar mujhe itni raat ko call karta to main to uska katal kar deti!!!
lol!

continue soon..
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

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