AR #1-wen u luk me in d eyes(PART 38-PG 148) 17/6 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooohhhhhhhhh. poor ar called end riddz didnt geve too much importance to himmm...ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh, i loveeeeeeeeeeeee surprises! plzzzzzzzzz PM me!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey very nice part and pls continue soon (pm if possible)

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
hi

I happened to read all the parts 2day only!!!!!!
n i loved this FF !!!!!!

very nicely written!!!!!!!
AR scene's r soooooooooo cute!!!!!!
n realtion bet every char is sooo cooooool
this FF is awesome

want 2 read more!!!!!!

Plz PM me if u can after updating the next Part!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update... poor Armaan.. Ridz didn give importance to his cal.. plzz continue soon.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys!!!!!!! thanx a lot for all ur comments they really keep me going but guys m really sorry i wont be able to update before thursday coz my exams r starting from 2morrow m really sorry i cannot update any parts 2day love rabu
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Hey dear take ur time.. ALL THE BEST for ur exams.. dont forget to PM me when u update........😊
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hey its kk yaar dnt be take ur time nd all d bst fr ur exms........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
thks for the pm dear
sweet part
update soooooooooooon
i was busy with my coll for 2-3 days so i have 26 pm
so plz donot mind i will reply properly next time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys!!!!! i finally finished wid my exams
now i ownt say anything
jus enjoy the part n leave ur valuable comments!!!
enjoy
love rabu
PART 9

5 a.m

Ridz's cell rings, she wakes up half sleepy n checks

*one message*

Armaan- get up sleeping beauty u gotta go rite?

Ridz smiles reading the message n goes to get ready

6 a.m (downstairs)

Ridz: bye mom

Padma: beta tu itne jaldi ja rahi hai?

Ridz: ha mom meri duty 7 baje shuru ho jati hai

Padma: (worried) lekin tune toh 9 baje bola tha

Ridz: ha mom but aaj se jaldi jaana hai

Padma: accha, lekin tu pehle nashta karle. Main tujhe aise jaane nahi dungi, raat ko bhi aane ke baad tu kuch nahi khati hai

Ridz: ok mom

8 a.m

Padma: anjali beta utho, sanjeevani ke liye tum late ho jaogi

Anji: ha ridz, 5 min

Padma: anjali main hu tumhari mom, ridz toh kabki chali gae

Anji: (waking up with a jerk) kya? Itni jaldi? Par kyu?

Padma: usne kaha uski duty 7 baje start ho jati hai

Anji: par??

Padma: accha chal tu pehle uthke fresh ho ja. Late ho jayegi

Anji: ji mom (still thinking)

Ridz's cell rings during her break time

Ridz: hello?

Anji: ridz, itni jaldi kyu chali gae tu? Atleast mujhe bata ke toh ja sakti thi na? (totally pissed)

Ridz: sorry di?woh?app so rahi thi toh maine socha disturb ho jay?

Anji: ridz stop giving stupid excuses?aur kal se main tujhe tere hospital tak chodungi?subah subah akele jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai?samjhi?

She was getting a second call so all that she could say was?

Ridz: ok di

Anji: accha ridz, I gotta go now?I'll pick u 2day ok?

Ridz: ha di, bye

She picks the second call

Ridz: hello?

Voice: hi

Ridz: hi armaan

Armaan: so break time huh?

Ridz: u know my schedule in out don't u?
armaan: yup, c I don't want to disturb u during ur working hours so I should know ur break times. Don't u agree?

Ridz: hmmm

Armaan: riddhima can I say something? (seriously)

Ridz: ( a bit apprehensive) ha bolo

Armaan: actually? the break timings of all the sanjeevani branches r the same

Armaan: (laughing loudly)

Ridz: ( smiling) m sure they must be, but armaan I don't work in sanjeevani

Armaan: ( oh shit!!!!i didn't know dis, shit man she caught u) oh?ummm?re?.really? (fumbling for words)

Ridz: ya really (smiling thinking dat he knows so much about her n her schedule)

Armaan: ohhh?kkk

Ridz: armaan u don't need to be embarresed, m happy dat u know so much about me

Armaan: (happily) really?

Ridz: yup.

Armaan: hey but u never told me dat u don't work in sanjeevani I thought ghar ki kheti pe gharwale hi hal chalate hai

Ridz: (laughing) armaan yeh tum kya bol rahe ho?. N tumne mujhe poocha kab?

Armaan: has lo, bechare bacche pe, has lo

Ridz's pager rings

Ridz: accha armaan mere emergency hai. I'll talk to u later

Armaan: (sadly) ohh k, bye

Ridz: bye

Raj: dr riddhima u have to handle this case (handing over a file)

Ridz: (checks the file) but dr. raj m a gynaecologist aur yeh case toh orthopaedic hi handle kar sakta hai

Raj: oh cumon doc. M sure u can manage (n leaves)

Ridz: but?..

Ridz slogs the whole day n tries to handle the case.

Its 10 p.m

Anji comes to pick her

Anji: ridz kaha hai tu? M waiting outside ur hospital. Jaldi kar

Ridz: (totally tired) di, aap chali jao mujhe bahot kaam hai main khud se aa jaungi

Anji: par ridz, its already 10

Ridz: I know di but sirf 1 hr ka kaam hai. I'll manage di

Anji: accha theek hai. Par kuch bhi prob hua toh mujhe call kar dena. I'll be waiting 4 u. ok?

Ridz: ha di, thanx. Bye

Anji: bye (thinking to herself) yeh ridz itna exhert kar rahi hai I hope kahi bimaar na pad jaye

Its 11, n ridz is leaving the hospital

*tring tring*

Ridz: hello

Armaan: hi

Ridz: hi armaan, kaise ho?

Armaan: m gud. Itni awaaz kyu aa rahi hai? Aren't u home yet?

Ridz: nahi, main ghar hi ja rahi hu m in the taxi

Armaan: riddhimaaa?itne raat ko akele travel mat kiya karo yaar (concerened)

Ridz: armaan main kya karu? Hospital main itna kaam hota hai toh late ho hi jata hai

Armaan: atleast anji ya uncle ko bula leti stupid

Ridz: armaannnn (pissed) main stupid nahi hu

Armaan: but bacchi toh ho na? (smiling at her childish tone) isiliye keh raha hu akele itni raat ko travel mat karo

Ridz: uhhh armaaan main bacchi nahi hu (very pissed)

Armaan: dekha maine kaha na? gosh!!! Y do u always shout like a kid? (enjoying every moment)

Ridz: no I don't (angry)

Armaan: yes u do!!! (amused)

Ridz: no I don't

Armaan: yes u do!!!

Ridz: (calming down) armaan?main bacchi nahi hu? (saying in a cute manner)

Armaan: (totally fida on her) ok fine. U win? tum bacchi nahi ho but?

Ridz: but?

Armaan: ummm nothing

Ridz: bolo na armaan? (curious)

Armaan: kuch nahi riddhima. Accha listen call me wen u reach home. Ok?

Ridz: (disappointed) ok

Armaan: bye

Ridz: bye

Armaan to himself, but riddhima u really need sum1 to take care of u all the time coz tum sachme bacchi ho (he smiles thinking about her)

hello!!

i know der is ntn much about AR in it. but m sorry i cant help it coz armaan is not here 😭

anyways

keep reading to get armaan back in mumbai

till den cheers

love rabu

Edited by rabiam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plz dnt say lke tht bt u know i am to enjoyng evry bit of it he's so concernd abt her wow yaar wow yaar vryyyy cute yaar i realy enjoyd it cnt fr d nxt specially whn thy wre fightng lke small kids on small topic heheheh chooooo chweeeeeeeeet yaar lvd it
cont soooooon
thnks fr d pm
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