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Simran Kaur

@sim.07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

hey its v.nice plz continue

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

their eyelock session is broken by the sound of thunderstorm

gunjan..utaaro mujhe neeche

sam..dos'nt listen to her and keeps on going into that hut he then keeps gunjan on the bed of hay

gunjan...thanku samrat

samrat..mention not but ek baat toh hai

gunjan...kya

sam..tum bhaari bahaut ho

gunjan...kya

sam..burst out into lughter

arey main toh sirf mazaak kar raha tha

gunjan..phir theek hai

sam..acha acha ab tum so jao waise bhi tumhaari par mein lagi hai will see u tom

gunjan...theek hai tum kaha so ge

sam..main yaha zameen par so jaonga

gunjan..r u sure

sam..yeh i am

gunjan ..ok theek hai goodnight

sam..yeh bye goodnight

after sometime gunjan falls asleep

then

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kavya

@kavya.b

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

good going guys

we have many creatives here

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kavya

@kavya.b

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

me writing ff 4r the 1st time n most of it will b in english

gunjan falls asleep , samrat laso tries 2 sleep but he cant sleep

suddenly he sees gunjan, she was looking very beautiful n innocent.

he stares at her n stares at her....... n falls asleep

it is morning now

gunjan wakes up n sees samrat

while sleeping he looks very innocent , so now she recalls wat all happened yesterday nyt n then suddenly she comes into her senses n get tensed n wakes samrat

gunjan-samrat, samrat

he wakes up lazily

samrat- kya hua, tum kyun chilla rahi hoon

gunjan - it is morning now, we have 2 go to the resort

di will b tensed

samrat- if di is not tensed , will u stay here with me

then gunjan gives a confusing n serious look at him

samrat- oho dont b serious , i'm sry

ab chalo

at the resort everyone is tensed

nupur 2 mayank- i'm very afraid , gunjan is very afraid of dark

this samrat always plays wid her, both of them didn't come till now

mayank- daro math, kuch nahi hoya, veyseybhi isme samrat ka koyi galthi nahi hai

nupur- galthi nahi hain!!!!!!!

u boys always support boys only

instead standing still here , u can go n search for them....

she will be continuing her bashings 2 mayank without giving him even a chance 2 speak

then suddenly , avoice comes frm back "di"

n it is gunjan along wid samrat

mayank - thank god gunjan u came or else nupur would have made me mad with speech

hope u liked it n sry 4r mistakes

plz someone continue now

PS:guys as this is my 1st ff

plz do comment / criticize on this

so that i'll know how it is

plzzz

Edited by kavya.b - 17 years ago

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Ramshah

@Ramshah123

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hi...i'm new here....btw u guys r awesome...cont soon

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

gunjan..di

nupur...gunjan tu kaha chali gai this she see samrat and yells on him

tum tumhe maine kitni baar kaha hai ki meri behan ko pareshaan karna band karo but tum apni harkato se baaz nahi aaoge na

gunjan interrupts di listen

nupur..cuts her off

ruk ja gunjan yeh samrat samjhata kya hai apne aap ko darsal iski koi galti nahi hai saare ladke hote he aise hai

mayank....by the way tum saare ladko ko kyubeech mein la rahi hun

nupur...kyunki tum saare ek jaise he hote ho bas ladkiyun ko pareshaan karna he aata hai tumhe

samrat...hey nupur ek toh maine tumhari behan ko safety se yaha pahachaya aur tum ho ki

nupur ...oho bada ehsaan kardiya tumne use problem mein bhi tum he ne phasaya tha na

maya...tumhaari behan ne he game mein dare maanga that isme sam ki koi galti nahi hai

nupur..tum toh chup he raho na mayan toh acha hoga bas maine decide kar liya hai ki aaj se ladke apne raaste aur ladkiyaan apne raaste

diya..wat nonsence its not possible

nupur...u have to make it possible dia tumhe meri baat mani he hogi

sam..thinking oh no kaise rahonga main chashmish se dor

sam...dekho nupur

nup..cuts him off tum dekho aaj se hum yaha trip apne tarike se enjoy karenge aur tum apne now the groups will be divided boys their ways and girls there ways

aur haan aaj raat hum part ke liye ek jajah par jaa rahe hai waha aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

mayank...jao jao in a teasing tone jab kisi problem mein phaso ki na tab mat bolana

nup...arey jao jao main tum me se kisi bhi ladke ki koi help nahi longi

bye

chal gunjan

gunjan walks away looking at sam both look to each other with sad faces

precap.......the place jaha par saari girls party kar rahi hai waha par landslide ho jaata hai aur toh aur dia ne apna revenge nikaal ne ke liye uske coldrink mein behoshi ki medicine bhi mix kardi thi

boys comes to know about that and they go there for the girls rescue all the girls r safe suddenly sam realises that gunjan is nowhere to be see.where is gunjaN?will sam be able to find her