EnCoUnTeR ReCoUnTeD!!!! - Page 13

Originally posted by: missypatel

anitaaaaaa!!!!

ur another 1 of ma favz here..cuz i get d kicks wen i read yur comments...urs r d fastest!!

its yur take..the more i read yur comments..d more i wanna rite n mke u read!! ahhhh!!!

thanks again!! :) means a ton to koee..ur readin n likin tem!! :)

Originally posted by: missypatel

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awwwww!!! thank you naseem!! :)
tis i took me foever..nt really! bt i kept ritin n erasin..it juss wasnt rite..and wen i was dne..i was lke..it sucks! maybe i shuldnt even post it!! for sum reason...i really thot so!!
i swear..i was dne ritin AR after tis 1..!! even thot njz gonna be so mad..m puttin all tis on OUR thread..u koe!!
and the rhymin...i didnt wanna add more of it..cuz poems rent juss abt rhymes yaahh!! ter so much more to it!! ....i know exactly wat u mean....i was reading yeats the other day....unfortunately for the great poet an engineering frend of mine saw it too...its was the part of his work called THE COAT....n this guy goes its oki oki ...not too clear to understand....n kinda less rhyming n um like...wat the hell...dont touch my stuff u not worth the skill...n then again theres ppl like seth, who rhyme like every line, but do it so incredibly that i love it anywaz!!!,....aawww poetry is hard....u got the jist of it totally...keep writing for us n see how polished it will start becoming soooooonnnn!!!...its that dialogue from mahabharat which bhim says to arjun..."ABHYAAS ARJUN ABHYAAS!!!"
uff m dwn 2 ma explanations crap again!! ahhaha!!

now do u C y m put more of u in ma fic..u truly r an inspiration!! lol!! 😉

that has to be the best compliment i ever got..nj!!! i mite even cry..hahha!! kiddin!!
but for a sec imagine..muskaan laughin...and KSG blushin...thts me rite now!!

m gonna rite more of tem...yayyyy!!! but if i keep ritin ter events..ill hve a book of 500 pages filled..lol!!
wen u msgd me..i was lke dude she msgd me...smg urgent n utmost importance..it sure was!!

thanks again jauhar!! means a lot!!! more than words put together!! 😊

by the way heres the yeats part i referred to, just want u to read it....

I MADE my song a coat
Covered with embroideries
Out of old mythologies
From heel to throat;
But he fools caught it,
Wore it in the world's eyes
As though they'd wrought it.
Song, let them take it,
For there's more enterprise
In walking naked.

think ul love it...somehow i know u will...coz i did 😳😆

ahhahahh!!! OMG!! tht really was wow..absurd in a way!!

how can ne1 rite like dt..likin its abt your imagination i koe..bt pullin strings together like dt?? its sooo simple..yet strikin in its own way!!
ahhah and yur frd didnt get it??lol but nt surprisin..tey r at ter max simplified..as i said...bt yet appealin...bt nt all can connect 2 it...ya ya!
i luved d last bit..especially!! i wud never think lke dt!! wow!!!

but c dtz d thin abt me..i cnt do ntn if i dnt feel deep for it..be it nethin!!

gurl!! if you luv poems..you ought 2 be inspired by tem...likhoooo tum bhi!!!

haha i know watcha getting to...n me pmed u na....kar dungi uta n ul know u dont want more after that haha....n yeh the last line about more enterprise in walking naked was like WOOOOOWWW when i first read it i was like man....here was a guy who's poetry i cud worship....the thing is ,,,he wrote a lot of romance at sometime, when he wrote the way he did, he was one of a kind, but themm to many like that sprung up copying him n the charm was lost...n so he wrote more real stuf...this was one bit, it related to his own work n life.....n so coz he swicthed his writing so drastically it was like having to start from scrathc n so he said....more enyterprise in walking naked....oki oki....this is so redundant to the thread n ur poetry...duno why me telling u...haha...i shud stick tp pms n cell texts!!!

Something there was
about her,
startling feeling it was,
time and again, it refused to
prevent the hastening beats
of his heart.
What, when, why, and how
were now his constant thoughts.

One glimpse at her,
walking through the door,
'Basket' escaped his lips
forming twinkles on his tips.
He knew then,
that was HIS name for HER,
a name he'd formed
for the mysterious frame.

sum more!!!!!!!!! AR all d wayyyy!!

hmmmm uve dne your hw well..u koe a lot abt him i c!!

lol!! i thot of "H****" tooo..had a gud laugh..imagine dt in d line!! lol!!

it doesn go so well...bt i didnt wanna chg d whole line...soo watever meanin it gives..ill let it be!!

and hey! its our thread..talk abt nethin n everthin under d roof..kisko problem hai?????😒

oh man.....u just getting the old dmg alive before my eyes.....the charm of the beginning is missing now, although they act well..n the story not totally horrible.,...but something...well its my adddiction i judge by, now i can skip n epi n not feel incomplete....earlier, id feel restless if i even delayed watching the epi by an hour of the usual time when i wud see it online....but bless ya....the poetry taking me allllllllllll the way back...fab job....n i tot of another scene when i told u in the pm i think i know wat u writing abt ....i thto u wrw on the first date at the b'ball court scene..duno why haha...lips made me think i guess....for that perhaps H*** wud fit haha :D

WOWIEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nijal u r simply amazing n wonderful!!!!!!! bith d poems were fab truly perfct !!!!!!!!!!! u r so imaginative wid words n ur rhyming scheme just rocks !!!!!!! kudos to u loved dis sooo muchhh!!!!! keep dem cuming yaar full on.....

ohh n nj...still waitin for yur comment on d fic...
it cant be dt bad now...sooo edit!!!!!! hahah!!

give me sum ideas na...ill hve 2 rewatch dmg 1st scenes..juss 2 koe wat 2 rite on...u c d pattern na..m tryna mke it juss d way tey showed it..
most significant ones..atleast!!

awww!!

thx aravi!! glad u liked tem!!
i luv AR sooo much!!! hence d poety side of me..juss for tem!! lol!!

keep the comments rollin..ill hve AR work through all yur minds..all d time!! LMAO!!

seriously! the more you guys make me greedy for tem...the better tey turn out..;)

ps ....did i tell ya..i like yur nme so much..it juss give u a sweet tingling!!