EnCoUnTeR ReCoUnTeD!!!! - Page 12

@ zuzu ...OMG!! thts a huge thing to say...thank you!!!!tht was really sweet!!

@ jia loL!!yaa..anita was lke rite sg abt AR n so i did..glad u liked it!! i dnt lke d 2nd part much..its not d rite flow..bt ters not much i can edit..
nehow!! m gonna rite more..bt i need ideas..wat to rite abt..u got ne?
btw thx so much! :)

@ anita ..haha!! its all yur doin...u asked for more..and here it is..mite add more to it later!!ha! thx again!!!! means a ton!!

Their first meet,
would never repeat.
Out went the ball,
from his slippery hands
it came to a stop
as it hit her with a bang.

The battle had begun
as they played some ball.
It was surely, an unforgettable
silent brawl.
One shot, two shots
and they hit some more.
The match was over
but neither a proud victor.

I am marvelous, your shinning knight
hey you lady in white
what are you doing tonight?
I am dazzling, always polite
stay away from me
i am a threat blight.

One would quarrel
the other would struggle,
both of them
ready to strangle.
Neither of them
cared much,
Ouch! Ahh!
was all they could mumble.

sum more of AR!! hmmm!!

nij wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....i just read the new ar poem part u posted on our thread...WOOOOWWWW its i think ur best so far, i mean after the N's poem, that my fav, i have a bias hehe...

but wow seriously u did a great job with this one nij...its like amazing how easy the flow comes....n how natural...n the rhymoijng doenst look with effort bor forced in the leats....seriously....i have to say this when u right its the stiory which captivates the writing is good but the story def leads....when u wirte the poem thing.,..i dont even seem to c are wat it is abt...i just love the skill u put in...its just so...i eman it make su feel like u wana right poetry to....thats the biggets compliment i can think of...if u pas sur passion thru ur skill, i think u did a job like nothing better can be!!!

loved it....hope ul have many more to come....

👏

lov,

nj

fab stuff Nijal

Lovely Nijal!

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awwwww!!! thank you naseem!! :)
tis i took me foever..nt really! bt i kept ritin n erasin..it juss wasnt rite..and wen i was dne..i was lke..it sucks! maybe i shuldnt even post it!! for sum reason...i really thot so!!
i swear..i was dne ritin AR after tis 1..!! even thot njz gonna be so mad..m puttin all tis on OUR thread..u koe!!
and the rhymin...i didnt wanna add more of it..cuz poems rent juss abt rhymes yaahh!! ter so much more to it!!
uff m dwn 2 ma explanations crap again!! ahhaha!!

now do u C y m put more of u in ma fic..u truly r an inspiration!! lol!! 😉

that has to be the best compliment i ever got..nj!!! i mite even cry..hahha!! kiddin!!
but for a sec imagine..muskaan laughin...and KSG blushin...thts me rite now!!

m gonna rite more of tem...yayyyy!!! but if i keep ritin ter events..ill hve a book of 500 pages filled..lol!!
wen u msgd me..i was lke dude she msgd me...smg urgent n utmost importance..it sure was!!

thanks again jauhar!! means a lot!!! more than words put together!! 😊

WOW Nijal awesome work yet again....you seem to be in superb form babe... And the AR poem is sooo lovely...described everything to perfection...

thanks hina!!! 😛

man!! u guys r killing me with your comments..!! my jaw hurts from all the blushin and smilin!!

if you keep commentin..ill mke sure i keep ritin!!

anitaaaaaa!!!!

ur another 1 of ma favz here..cuz i get d kicks wen i read yur comments...urs r d fastest!!

its yur take..the more i read yur comments..d more i wanna rite n mke u read!! ahhhh!!!

thanks again!! :) means a ton to koee..ur readin n likin tem!! :)

thanks krati!!

glad you liked it!! as i said..all you guys comments r like adrenaline rush...mkes me rite more n more!!! 😳