My Very Own Rahul & Muskaan Dream - updt pg 55 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks everyone! Will be away from tomorrow till next week.
Hopefully will be able to write anyway but will see what happens.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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where did you go? did you stop writing?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭 ha Yaar plzzzz continue na we r weating so badly😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys! I miss IF!!! 😭 I did not have time during my trip or access to the internet so... I will be flying tomorrow and landing late so I won't be able to write till monday morning (my time). Sowwy!

No one else missed me? 😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

Hi guys! I miss IF!!! 😭 I did not have time during my trip or access to the internet so... I will be flying tomorrow and landing late so I won't be able to write till monday morning (my time). Sowwy!

No one else missed me? 😭

its not like this yaar we r missing u alot n plssssssssssss contine yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

Hi guys! I miss IF!!! 😭 I did not have time during my trip or access to the internet so... I will be flying tomorrow and landing late so I won't be able to write till monday morning (my time). Sowwy!

No one else missed me? 😭

oh thankz u r coming back !!!
JAANI v missed u a lot n ur contributions in FF n WWRM
mOonA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OK I am back! I caught up on the show.. well atleast the RM parts for now. Its 4am but I had to do it. I was gone for 6 days and I had limited internet access the whole time. That was complete torture.
The only great thing to come out of this was many many RM dreams. So now I don't know what to do. I have to finish this for sure and I have it all written down. I just have to type it up. But then what will I do with myself??? Maybe I will post another dream. What do you guys think?
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Part 9

She didn't know how to respond so she literally did not respond. She closed her eyes and just stood in front of the sink not moving. She thought if she didn't move or look at anything, that everything would disappear and she would not have to deal with how to react. But Rahul was not about to go away.

Rahul - Muskaan?

No answer from Muskaan. So Rahul moves closer.

Rahul - Muskaan?

Muskaan - (tensing up) Hmmm....

Rahul - Tune suna nahin? Main ke raha tha ke...

Muskaan - (cuts him off - not wanting to hear him apologize again - it made her uncomfortable) Woh.. ummm.. rehne do.. theek hai. Tu.. tumhe aur kuch khana hai? Halwa banaya hua hai. (She kept going on about food - trying to avoid the subject)

He realizes she just wants to change the subject and he has a big smile on his face. She obviously is shy about the whole situation. She would have told him off already if she really didn't like what happened last night. So he feels a little comforted but still wants to make sure.

Rahul - (sighs) Muskaan, lagta hai hum kuch bathein karni chaiya.

Muskaan - Kaunsi bathein? Mujhe koyi bathein nahin karni. Bohot kaam pada hua hai.

Rahul - Kaunsa kaam? Muskaan hum apne ghar mein nahin hai.

Muskaan - Haan.. pata hai.. maghar phir bhi..

Rahul - Ok.. ok...

She turns around and pushes him back to the table and makes him sit down while she puts some halwa into a bowl in front of him.

Muskaan - Tu bhait ja aur kha le aur pata de kaisa laga.

Rahul takes a bite and wants to mess with her so he makes a face that looks like he is digusted. She gets upset and looks down and doesn't realize that she is looking so sad in front him.
Rahul sees this and knows shes upset ..

Rahul - Tujhe kya hua?

Muskaan still looking down - Kuck to nahin. Tujhe acha nahin lagha?

Rahul - Kyun? Tujhe kya farak padta hai mujhe acha lage ya nahin?

Muskaan - (abruptly) Nahin to. Mukhe kyun farak pade ga? Teri taste waise bhi kitni kharab hai.

Rahul smiles and says - Haan woh to hai. Tujhe jo pasand kiya hai.

Muskaan blushes and yells - Rahul!
Muskaan - Rahul! Tu na.. pite ga.. (and raises her hand)

Rahul finally notices she has mehndi on (from the party the night before) and thinks he glimpses his name on her hand.

Rahul - Ek minute. Haath dikha.

Muskaan realizes that his name is in fact on her hand although she did not ask for it. She puts her hand down and tries to hide them.

Rahul - Haath dikha na.

Muskaan - Kyun? Maar kahni hai kya?

Rahul - Mera naam likha hai?

Muskaan - Tera naam kyun likha hoga? Nikamma!

She turns to walk away. Rahul gets up and walks behind her. To her dismay, he is not letting up this time. He keeps trying to grab her hands and she keeps trying to pull away. But there is no hiding this. She knows eventually he will view his name. Its so embarrassing especially since she did not actually want them to do that but everyone found it so humorous last night. He actually starts to tickle her slightly. That is her total weakness. Especially with his touch. He finally does get her to stop fussing and sees her mehndi with his name drawn within it. She just closes her eyes.

Rahul - Ab kyun sharma rahi hai? Mujhe sab pata hai. Chal jab mere naam ki mehndi lagiye hai to sach mein mujhse shaadi bhi kar le?

Muskaan is like totally shocked that he brought this up so quickly. They barely even acknowledged their love for each other. But it was the right thing to do before anyone found out about the fake marriage they were in right now.
Muskaan - Chal haat!

Muskaan somehow escapes him and picks up the dishes and bring them to the kitchen.

Rahul confused with her reaction.

Rahul shouting after her - Kahan ja rahi hai. Pehle pata to sahi...

Muskaan is standing in front of the sink but continues to keep washing the same dish over and over again. She is lost in thought. Rahul comes over and is watching her do this from behind. He knows shes tense but he wants to bother her some more. He keeps calling her name but shes not responding. She knows that she should run away as she does not want to deal with this now. She also knows as this is his house there is really no where for her to hide. She is blushing and trying to calm down before talking.

Rahul - Muskaan!!!

Muskaan - calmly talking - Batha, kya hai?

Rahul - Kya hai? Pehle tune meri sawal ka jawab nahin diya. Aur vaise... woh.. mujhe.. teen nahin, char bache chahiye. Aur shaadhi nahin hui to yeh kaise honge. Waise bina shaadhi se bhi ho tho sakte hain magar main to aise waise ladka nahin hoon. Tera aur kohi iraada hai to batha.

Muskaan whispers to herself - Dhat teri! Usne to sab kuch sun liya hai. (she knew she shouldn't have said any of that out loud)

Rahul walking over closer to her.

Rahul - Haan. Maine sab kuch sun liya. Yeh to pata.. bachon ke baare mein tu kab sochne lagi?

He moves even closer slowly.

Muskaan - Tu na bas... ulti bathein kartha rehta hai.. Maine.. kab.. (she gasps)
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh SONIA so u r back wid bang !!!!!
u rocKS !!!!👏👏👏
gr8 paart .... luved RM
yarr deadly waiting 4 next dream
mOonA
Edited by luvingRM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏 hey sonia thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx that was awesome AND Rahul is very Naughty nah ''''''''''''''' 4 bache chaheye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG OMG OMGG!! Sonia..I caught up wid the last 2 parts..absolutely amazing!!!!! ...My fav. fav. scene in all ur parts is dis one.
Where Rahul says he wants 4 kids n not 3..Nd Muskaan says Dhat teri..awwwwwww.....simply cutest!!!
Cant wait for nxt part!! Update soon!! :)

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