My Very Own Rahul & Muskaan Dream - updt pg 55

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

yar u ppl hav writing skills

mai ne tu buhat dafa koshish ki ke kam az kam WWRM mai he likh pao but 🤔

so write more as early as possible !!!

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Thanks!!! You guys are so sweet! 😃 I am glad you liked it but I don't know what to do.

You see.. I don't really have a good imagination. I don't know if I can continue this past my dream.

😕😕😕

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia
Thanks!!! You guys are so sweet! 😃 I am glad you liked it but I don't know what to do.
You see.. I don't really have a good imagination. I don't know if I can continue this past my dream.

😕😕😕

dont say that girl i am in love with this ff.......ple dont stop..........if u r stuck somewhere.....ple let us know so we can help u but ple dont stop ............we all want u to continue.........ple ple ple

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crazy8980

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

gr88888 ff.
I am a fan of RM and since creatives are doing nothing for them I guess your dream comes as what i was looking for. please keep continuing and don't stop.

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Ok this is the last part of my dream before I have to figure stuff out on my own. I know the dream was long but ofcourse I exaggerated some of the scenes. Hope you enjoy it. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Part 10

She gasped because he was right behind her now. He again puts his arms around her waist and pulls her close. She doesn't push him away. In fact she is getting used to this and feeling completely comfortable. She is literally melting in his embrace. It felt so perfect. In his arms she belongs. She actually takes her hands and places them on his and interlocks her fingers with his. With this he hugs her tighter and puts his head on her shoulder. They stay that way for a bit while lost in each others thoughts.

Muskaan - lightly says - Rahulll .. yeh.. hum.. yahan.. kohi aagaye to

Rahul has no intention of letting go. Instead her voice just makes him go further. He does not seem to care that they are still in the kitchen. He takes one hand and moves her hair to one side and kisses her upper back and neck and moves his way up to her ear.

Muskaan - Yeh theek nahin hai..

Rahul sighs and pulls away slightly but doesn't let go. She felt terrible about saying this because she wasn't sure if she really wanted him to stop or if she was just concerned about other people coming in.

Rahul - Muskaan, yeh sab natak mujhse nahin hota (while leaning his head on her shoulder still)

She is confused about what he means by this.

Rahul - Ab to mujhse tu sach main shaadi karle.

No response still. Ofcourse she wanted to but she just didn't know what to say as he sounded so serious.

Rahul - (trying to loosen up) To bol na. Itni khamosh kyon hai? Kare gi? Abhi to main theek se thang bhi nahin kar sakta tujhe.

Muskaan - (she smiles) Hmm... (thats all she could muster out of her mouth)

Rahul - Sachi? (still not completely believing it)

Muskaan - Haan na. Karna to padega. Aur kaun tujhe jhel pahe ga?

That was more definitive. Rahul was very excited and turns her around abruptly. She drops a glass she had just picked up from the sink on the ground and it shatters. She moves to try to start picking it up when one shard goes right into her hand.

Muskaan - Owwwwwwwwwwwww!

Muskaan dantne lagthi hai.

Muskaan - Dekha! Teri waja se yeh... owww... Ab pata hai mujhe tere saath reh ke meri kya halath ban nay wali hai. (making a sad face)

Rahul is not paying any attention to what she is saying. He is trying to put her hand under the running water at the sink, blowing on it, and wrapping it with paper towels while she is now just staring at him acting so caring. She knows that she just says all this nonsense but deep inside she knows he would never let anything happen to her.

Rahul - Sorry! Pehli baar tune kuch acha kaha hai na; main todha excited hogaya tha.

Muskaan is still in her own world daydreaming and looking at him with this glazed look.

He decides to take advantage of this and gives her a peck on the cheeck and runs away. Muskaan finally comes outof her trance and blushes again and actually goes running out of the kitchen to chase him.

Muskaan - RAHUL!!!

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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crazy8980

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

again a gr8 part. I have this page open and I keep refreshing it...so much I m hooked to it.

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-Mishti_Divz-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

oh no waz dat last part 😭 i was enjoying it tooooo much sonia di when u r goign to make a new one

and pls pls plssssssssss continue u r doing a great job 👏👏👏 we want u to continue :)

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Wow!! Sonia..it was amazing..pls take ur time..but dunt end itt..Im 2 much n luv wid itt!! :((

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#99

omg that was so cute..........it was out of the world praposal..............i mean in the kitchen.........but anyway thats u call true love.........ple ple ple continue.........thanks