My Very Own Rahul & Muskaan Dream - updt pg 55 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow that was amazing. I think I melted. lol. Please continue soon and hope u had a good halloween. I went crazy handing out candy every 2 min. Sigh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks.
I really stretched this out so much by describing the scenes in my dream. I need to just finish it but I feel so lazy.
My Halloween Party was so much fun! I am still recovering.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sonia that was beautiful! thank u for the PM.
Halloween party? how nice! i refused to stay downstairs yesterday. i told mumma that i''m not doing candy duty this year. so i locked myself in my room from 3:30-8:00. i was surprised with the amount of kids this year. we had to go grab more candy... anyway, so what were you? i stopped trick-or-treating when i was 13 yaar. i'm 18 and in college... i do NOT go candy begging. lol.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi, i just read your "dream" and it was wonderful! the way you expressed muskaan's shy-ness around rahul is so cute, in a way it's how armaan and ridhima were during the beginning. if only the creatives used your idea, RM's love story would move on which would hopefully lead to a confession between the both.
next time you write, can you pm me please?
love,
mona :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Komal and Mona!
@ Komal - I dressed as a greek goddess for halloween. I love those white flowy dresses and the jewelry too. I don't blame you for hiding out. I wouldn't want to deal with the trick or treaters.
So this next part isn't so 'romantic shomantic' as before but its what I dreamt/wrote so hope you enjoy.
😃
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 8

And he actually lets her go. He feels a little shaken up by what he just did and how she actually kissed him back. He knows she must be as flustered as he was and did not want to make her feel worse. He just checked to make sure she was fine and decided to come back to his room. He crashed down on the bed and planned to contemplate what happened but ended up falling asleep.

Muskaan ran back to the party but still looked flushed. Everyone kept asking her what was wrong but how can she possibly talk about this. The whole thing that happened felt so right but wrong at the same time as she thought about how they weren't really married nor did they even really like each other just a while ago. She couldn't focus on the party and she definitely wasn't good company. She wondered where Rahul went as she had not seen him since .. She doesn't want him to feel badabout what happened and she figured he must be since he did not come back out. Her curiosity getting the best of her she goes to check on him now. She is so nervous about going in so she slowly peeks in. She sees him sleeping peacefully and breathes a sigh of relief. She walks over to him and sits on the bed staring at his tranquil and amiable face. She didn't mean to but she also starts scrunching into the bed and falls asleep.

Muskaan wakes up at the break of dawn. The first few light beams reach her face and warm her up. She opens her eyes and takes a deep breath. She feels some restriction across her stomach. She looks down to notice Rahul's arm laying across her and him sleeping to the left of her. She looks over to watch him sleep for a few moments. She wants to reach out and caress his face but is afraid she will wake him. He looks so adorable and peaceful. A faint smile plays on her lips. She slowly removes his arm from her and fixes herself up before going to take a shower. After the shower she dresses in a simple white salwar suit with minimal silver embroidery. She sees his position has changed on the bed but he is still fast asleep.

Rahul is really awake sneaking glances at her looking angelic and innocent while drying her hair.

She walks over and sits down on the floor besides him thinking how lucky she is to have him in her life and how she can't live without him. He probably doesn't know any of that and she sure does not know how to tell him. She gives him a light peck on the cheek and leaves to walk out and meet his family this morning.

The only person awake is Rahul's didi - Priya - who is making breakfast so Muskaan decides to help. After which they sit down on the couch to have chai and gossip. Priya is talking and talking about herself and her family and finally realizes Muskaan is getting bored.

Priya - Muskaan tu yeh to pata meri bhai mein tune kya dekha? Mujhe to lagta tha uski shaadi kabhi bhi nahin hogi.

Muskaan - Woh mein.. (starts to ponder about rahul and starts thinking about the past few days and
especially last night; she gets flustered and starts blushing)

Priya - Chal, mujhse kya sharmana? Theek hai..rehne de.. kuch aur bathein karthe hain.

Muskaan - Nahin.. woh ......

Priya - Vaise ek baat to batha .. tumare bache kab honge? Mere bachon ke liye dost chahiye.

Muskaan just starts blabbing about how she wanted a large family and atleast 3 kids and how she wanted 2 boys to be just like Rahul. She doesn't even realize how she must have thought of this before as everything was just coming out as if she had planned it out already.

Just then Rahul comes strolling out in a white kurta pajama after taking his own shower.

Priya starts laughing as Muskaan is embarassed by what they were discussing and at the prospect that he may have heard but he did not act like it.

He barely appears to notice them and walks right into the kitchen.

Muskaan - Rahul? Kahan ja rahe ho? Main nashta lagathi hoon na.

Rahul - Meri bhi haath hain. Mujhe kahna banana aatha hai. Tu baithi rai.

Feeling as if he is mad at her for some reason she starts feeling upset and runs into the kitchen.

Muskaan - Rahul? Ghusse ho?

Rahul - Nahin to. Tujhe bas disturb nahin karna chahatha tha. Main apne ap...

Muskaan - Kana to bana diya ab tu bhait aur main abhi layi. Maine bhi abho nahin kaiya. Tera intezaar kar
rahi thi. (feeling like taking care of him)

Rahul - Kab se uthi huyi hai? Tune mujhe uthaya kyun nahin. Itni bhook lag rahi hogi tujhe

Muskaan - Nahin. Kohi bhaat nahin. Ab chal.

Both feeling shy and a little awakward about last nights events they wont look each other in the eye but
keep sneaking glances at each other while they eat.

After finishing, Muskaan goes to wash the dishes.

Rahul realizes its become even more awkward between them since last night and decides to break the silence - Muskaan woh kaal raat jo hua tha ..

Muskaan totally turning red and in shock that he is bringing this up now.

Rahul - woh jo humne.. uske liye.. I am sorry.

She didn't expect him to apologize. It wasn't just a one sided kiss. She was just as much to blame.
She didn't know how to respond.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
awesome man !!! cant wait till the next part...👏😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
wonderful thanks for sharing ... looking forward to further romance bw RM !!😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg it so good u keep saying u wanna end it. oh come on u r doing such a fab job.👏👏👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
hey suhani....

awesome....i wonder y i dont get such beautiful dreams abt them.... this time i vil try to think abt them so that i'll get a dream....

wish u that u shud get these kinda dreams n v r always here to njoy tem

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