My Very Own Rahul & Muskaan Dream - updt pg 55 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u so much i love ur dream i love rahul muskaan continue soon cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey lovely part yaar cont soon and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sonyy
u started again uso well
i m jealous from ur dreams :)
lolz
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
babes. what happened to this story?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks everyone for your comments and PM's. I think I am quite moody because I don't really feel like continuing anything right now but maybe it is because I still don't have any real ideas of my own. Thank you everyone for your input. Those were great ideas. I guess I can just continue and get them married and take it from there. I will try to update soon... maybe tonight.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok. So I thought I should try to update this story a little. Its my birthday today and its a gift to you guys! I hope you like it. Its actually scenes that I dreamt and some from daydreaming when I was away a few weeks ago. The story doesn't move much in this part but this is all I could do right now. So sleepy!!! 🥱
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Part 12
The whole day goes by with dealing with the family here and there. Rahul and Muskaan barely get any
time together. Rahul is getting quite frustrated that this is actually working out between them and he
can't even catch a glimpse of her. Finally its just after dinner and everyone is slowly recovering
to their rooms. He finds her alone putting away some clothes in their room. He doesn't waste any time and goes running behind her and grabs her scaring her half to death. She drops all the clothes and screams. Rahul doesn't seem to care and goes straight to the point.

Rahul - I love you!

Muskaan - I know.. Pehle bhi suna hua hai.

Rahul - Kya? Yeh kaisi reply hai?

Muskaan - Jaisa mera mann kiya maina kaha. (in a mast mood)

Rahul (gets upset with this response after such a difficult day apart) - Theek hain.. tu kehti reh jo tere
mann kahe. Main chala!

Muskaan thinks..phirse naraaz.

Muskaan thinks he is joking but he isn't there when she finally turns around. She becomes concerned thathe might have taken her seriously and is mad at her. She goes looking for him and sees him standing outside under the awning watching the rain.

Muskaan - Rahul?

No answer.

Muskaan - Rahul?

Rahul - Kya hai?

Muskaan - Woh.. I'm sorry na.. maaf karde..

Rahul - Kis baare main? If you don't love me then you don't love me. Sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai.

Muskaan - Rahul? Sun na.. maine kab kaha ki main tujhse.. (smiling)

Rahul cuts her off - Haan.. kuch kaha toh nahin hai..

Muskaan - Main toh bas yehi kehna cha rahi thi ke woh.. main tujhse sirf pyar nahin.. zindagi se zyada pyar karthi hoon.

Muskaan feels so relieved that she said it and exactly how she meant to say it. Rahul initially smiles but then goes back to his grumpy face and mood - not believing her.

Rahul - Hmm..

Muskaan - Tune suna nahin kya?

Rahul - Sunliya.. tera natak..

Muskaan - Natak? Theek hain.. Manne ga nahin?

Rahul - Teri jhooti bathein main kyun manu? Waise batha.. tujhe kabhi kohi chahatein ya jazbaat nahin hote kya?

Muskaan sighs.. feeling terrible that he doesn't believe her and he thinks she is pretty much heartless without any emotions or feelings. She gets this idea.. and smiles.

Muskaan - Aankhein band karo?

Rahul - Kyun? Ankhein band karwake kya karne wali hai mere saath?

Muskaan - Dekh lena..

Rahul - Aankhein band karke main kya dekhoon ga?

Muskaan - Chup .. tu mera mood kharab kar raha hai..

Rahul - Ok theek hain.. mutters.. tune bhi mera mood hi toh kharab kiya hai sara din..

Muskaan is apprehensive about this but she goes inside for a minute and comes running out straight into the rain.

Muskaan - Ok. Aankhein kol.

Rahul opens his eyes and doesn't see Muskaan at first. He looks around and finally spots her outside.

Rahul - (concerned) Muskaan! Kya kar rahi hai? Bheeg jaye gi.. Andhar aa.. (waving her in)

She just puts her hand up basically telling him to wait and then slowly starts counting with her fingers and mouthing Ek.. do.. teen.. Just then the music starts.. Tip tip barsa pani.. and she starts dancing and mouthing/singing the song..

Tip tip barsa pani
Pani ne aag lagayi
Aag lagi dil mein to
Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to
Jal utha mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi bathao sajan
Main kya karoon

Naam tera mere labon pe aaya tha
Naam tera mere labon pe aaya tha
Jo maine bahane se tumhe bulaaya tha
Jhoom kar aa gaya saavan
Main kya karoon

(in case some of you don't know this song which would be unfortunate.. its a damn hot song but a little dated http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VB4Yk6ovoXw)

Rahul has this huge smile on his face and he is completely enchanted with her dancing. She comes running up to him and bring him out too and stops singing the song and they just start dancing. He spins her around and they sway and dance.. He touches her face and tilts it up to him.. and as he is moving in she runs away. Rahul comes from behind and hugs her and she turns her head slightly he kiss her forehead and she turns around with eyes closed and she hugs him tight and he strokes her back.

Rahul - I love you

Muskaan - Patha hai..

Rahul - Phir?

Muskaan - (giggles) I love you too.

Rahul - Finally!

She giggles and he smiles.

He picks her up.. and starts taking her inside.

Muskaan - Rahul yeh kya? Chod mujhe..neeche rakh.. koi dekhle toh..

He doesn't care and he bring her straight in and to the bathroom..

Muskaan - Yaar.. itna maza aa raha tha.. Yahan kyun laye ho mujhe.

Rahul - Waise yahan bohut kuch karthe hain log magar abhi to kapde badalne ke liye.. bohut bheeg chukhi.. beemar pad jaogi.. zukham ho jayega..

Muskaan - Hmm.. theek hai to tu nikhal..

Rahul - Nahin na.. main help kartha hoon teri..

Muskaan - KYA? Ja yahan se.. (pushing him)

Rahul - Woh tujhe help chahiye hogi .. dekh tere geele kapde tujhpe kitne chipak rahe hain.. tujhe assistance chahiye hogi aur main bohut helpful hoon

Muskaan - Nahin chahiye koi assistance.. nikhal ja..

Rahul - Magar mujhe to teri help chahiye.. (unbottoning his shirt and walking closer to her)

Muskaan - Rahul!

Rahul - Chup.. itni zor se mat bhol.. sab sochein ge kya?

Muskaan - Kya?

Rahul - Ke hum aur tum bada pyar kar rahein hain.. (smirks)

Muskaan - (totally blushes) Hat! Nikamma kahin ka!

And she is finally successful at kicking him out. She changes into a simple (not sexy) nightgown and comes out drying her hair with a towel.

He is shirtless in the middle of changing shirt but she doesn't notice right away as she is not looking at him.. but as soon as he sees her he is just staring at her.. She spots him..

Muskaan - Rahul! Yeh kya.. (she turns around)

He walks towards her and wraps his arms around her again..

Muskaan - Rahul.. tu toh har chance pe mujhse lipat jatha hai..

Rahul - Tujhse dhoor rehna ka man hi nahin kartha. Ab pyar ki bathein keh toh di hain.. to kuch kar bhi lein?

Muskaan - Hmm.. keh to di lekhin..

Rahul - Yeh lekhin nahin.. Yeh lekhin mera sab se bada dushman hai..

Muskaan - Ab.. Rahul hamari shaadi sach mein nahin hui hai ab tak.. aur yeh theek to nahin hai.. todhi der sabhar karo..

Rahul - Haye! Pehle tum yeh sexy sa dance karthi ho.. full romantic mood main hoon aur kitna intezaar karaho ghi.. (lets go of her and falls backwards onto the bed)

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Sorry for leaving it here.. Hope you liked it as much as I enjoyed daydreaming it. 😍

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
first of all, happy birthday! hope you have a fabulous day.
today was such a cute update, and i loved every moment of it. thanks for the pm.
please do continue soon and pm me when you do so.
love,
mona :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
happy birthday. thanks for the PM and yes it was very very enjoyable. looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
they are too cute together. lots of blushing in this part. 😳 i too love that song.. very risky tho.

oh and happies birthday!
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Posted: 16 years ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SONIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS A GREAT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE FAST!!!!!!!!!
love ya!
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago

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