~||Star-Crossed||Shera-Veer FF||~{nte_35} - Page 14

Originally posted by: hiri

that was mind blowing maddy loved veer's challenge to shera les seee who's gonna win...

esha

Originally posted by: ektay11

thank u sooooo much madhu

its wow

amazing

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

VS scenes comment:

Part 2:

ok, i commented till she comes to say sorry. 😛 now, aage: Okk me ready archu...U givin me full edits..em lovin it...

Chahe kitni bhi koshish kar lo, yeh haath nahi chuda paogi?" at tis bells in the near by sati-shiv temple rang hard?

wat? 😕..... oh u edited sum bits.. 😛 uhm.. special effects.. yhh..It was like they were becumin lil unlikely seeing the atmosphere n all..n I didn't want to delete the piece of impulsive writin of mine..so edited it as a whole...

(now her back is touchin the tree trunk n he is vry close to her?the wind seemed to hav gone wild..it blew harder than ever..matchin the way their heart beats had speeded up n got eratic)

sumthing more updated.. 😛 aaw.. heartbeats descriptions are always loved by me.. wow..will take care then..nxt time onwards wheneva I update such scenes..will put heart beat descriptions..

b4 she cud react..he tuk a step forward n let go the piece of cloth that was obstructin him from viewin the beauty it hid behind..

😉 nice scene, didnt know that u were really referring to this, when u said that, that scene inspired u.. 😛 Aww yes...I rilli was hell a lot inspired by tht scene..rilli it was sumfin which triggered off to the startin of tis FF..

N then finally he luked at her lips..he kept lukin at it for a vry long time..which seemed to be eternity for Shera..He gazed intently at those lush red lips...as if they were a winecup luring him..to hav it..He moved closer..n then saw her breath becum short n quick?

kiss kiss kiss.... oops not yet.. lolllzzzzz Shera n a Kiss..Itni jaldi...Not at all Possible.....

he luked bac at her eyes..n found them close..he saw her lukin like an angel in the moon light..he luked at her intently as he found colour risin up her cheeks..She luked so perfect..so beautiful..so serene..pure beauty..the radiance emitted from her face was heavenly..he found himself being absorbed by her beauty..

He moved closer..so close that his nose touched hers?

He slowly closed his eyes letting her beauty be ebbed in his mind..4eva..

uff... veer has something different uh.. this kind of love, this way of lovng someone... is the 1st time i see it, Madhu, congrats, u have created a new type of loving. 👏😃 aww it's kinda love at first sight lolllzzzzz..buh did I rilli create a new kind of love,...If I did..lolllzzz..em vry vry happy to say em rilli vry happy...

..he was unaware of how vulnerable n exposed she was feelin..

lol lol lol... now, how do i opine? i mean, can i say now, that i liked this scene? ya, it was romantic, but she was feeling so.....? well like she was feelin so as it was first time..for her..n she was feelin rilli feminine...

"Kya sach mein humse durr jana chahti ho.."?

"Bolo.."

" Toh jao.." n left her

My favourites among favourites. 😃 wowwwieeee...Thanx di..em rilli vry happy u liked it soooo...

Now part 3:

??.And As she turned to leave??.

" Shera?" the royal muttered..

"huh..apko humara naam kaise pata.." she said wiv a confused expression..

" Dill ki awaz se..".. waaaaaaaat??........ 😲 lolllzzzzz... yh she too felt the same..

"KYAAA???" She gave him a deadly luk..already the way tins had turned out to be had enraged her..She had let off her defenses, lost control ova her emotions in front of a complete stranger..she had let him touch her..speak to her in the way no one else ever had..she had felt so vulnerable at that moment..

"Is tis what a gal from a gd family does..Is tis wht u'r baba has taught u..Is tis the way u behave around a complete stranger..???" She mentally kicked herself for letting tis rich spoilt brat take control ova her 'momentarily'...even if jus for sum time..buh he had made her feel like no one else eva did..she felt tis sense of security n comfort bein close to him..even though she knew that modesty doesn't allow it to be..She cudn't deny that she was shocked n mre ova SCARED..coz no one had eva taken advances towards her..n here he was openly touchin her that too disarmed..n she still didn't stop him..She felt so bad n sick..She felt bad not for letting him cum close..buh becoz now she knew she had given him hopes?she had made her own self fall down in his opinions...she felt sick..coz she knew she wud neva be able to control her emotions in front of him..she jus cudn't?

N here he was flirtin wiv her..she jus cudn't help buh shout at him..

oh my god... im wid her, ya, i have decided while writting this comment, i didnt liked the way of loosing control. 🥱 Yup...seriously..buh he had such an effect on her..buh she did grip hold of herself afta tis..

"Apko humara naam kaise bhi pata chala ho..hum sirf yeh chate hai..ki ajj ke baad hum kabhi na mile..humein nahi pata ki voh kaunsi ruhani kashish thi..(her voice softened) jo humein app tak khich layi..hum sirf apse maafi mangna chahte the..Humein maaf kar dijiye kyunki humne binamatlab app par chilaya aur phir..Yeh joh kuch hua?uske liye humein maaf kar dijiye..(she was near to tears now..buh she controlled herself well tis time)

"Shera hum toh sirf mazak kar rahe the..humara apko iss tarah dukh pohchane ka koi irrada nahi tha..hum jante ai ki app sirf humse maafi mangne aai thi..aur phir joh hua uske jimedaar hum hai..voh kashish humne bhi mehsoos ki..aur haan hum apko koi giri hui ladki nahi samajh rahe..hum jante hai ki isme apki koi galti nahi hai..aur maafi toh humein mangni chahiye chunki yeh sab humari vajah se hua..shuruat se hi hum galat the.."

He said in a hurt voice..he so wanted to control his voice buh it gave away..his hurt was clear thru his voice..He had neva wanted to do nytin that wud make her feel uneasy n distaste him..He had neva even touched a gal till date..buh he didn't know why..Buh he felt deeply inclined towards her..he cudn't stop himself..he had seen her becom stiff n then how she stopped him..he knew how bad she must feel..to let sum stranger touch her?after she was a classical beauty from a vry gd family....He was feelin guilty, ashamed, bad buh still to a certain extent RELIEVED?

oh ok... if hes aswell feeling bad.. then this veer is not as worst as she thinks... *sighs.... oh great... now both are confused.. Lollllzzzzz....jus like us na...😆

She stood still for a moment ( the hurt in his voice hadn't gone un noticed by her),then covered her face wiv the cloth n turned bac to leave?

He let out a sigh..n went in front of her.. " Apne humein abb bhi maaf nahi kiya.."

She stopped in her tracks n not lukin at him..she changed her direction..buh each time he wud block her path..

" dekhiye humein jane dijiye" She said wiv a mixture of irritation n anger in her voice?

" Jab tak tu..he corrected himself the vry moment..mera matlab jab tak app mujhe maaf nahi kar deti..mein yahan se nahi hatunga.."

She raised an eyebrow n then humourlessly givin a laugh.. " Ek aryavrath humse maafi mang rahe hai..humein abb tak apne kano par yakin nahi ho raha.."

He cudn't take her mockery now..It was enuf..firstly she had refused to 4give him n then she was mockin him..He took hold of her shoulders lightly.. once again... 😕buh not in tht way..he won't do tht again.."Mein nahi janta ki apko hum aryavraton se kya sikhwa hai..par mein toh sirf yeh chate hoon..ki app meri dost bane.."

She shrugged her shoulders the moment his hands touched em..

" Apki himmat kaise hiu humein chune ki..Dosti ki baat toh durr..hum apka yeh chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahte" n she walked past him..

" Soch lo..hur kissi ko Veer ki dosti nahi milti..aur yeh chehra dekhne ke liye toh sari ladkiyan marti hai..Aap badi nasib wali hai jo?" he was cut by her?

" Aap sach mein humse dosti karna chahte hai?" She said in an amused yet angry tone

" Haan?"

" Toh hum sirf itna kahenge..ki dosti sirf haath badha kar ya bol kar nahi ki ja sakti..dosti toh kisi ka vishwaas jitt kar hi ki jati hai..Dosti koi khel nahi..Kabhi toh Do lafz bolne se bhi ho jati hai..aur Kabhi ta umra saath rehne ke bavazud bhi nahi hoti..

" Aur mein manta hoon ki humari dosti bhi ek hi mulaqat mein ho jaegi.."

"Toh sochte rahiye..kyunki humein nahi lagta ki hum kabhi dost ban paenge.." she said wiv a loads of distaste dripping wiv each wrd?"

😆 amusing.... rilli..aww thnxxxx...

" Mujhe apka naam iss churi ko nikalte hue pata chala.." he made anoder attempt to change his bad image in front of her?

😆😆😆 i knew that he had heared her name... but cudnt remember.. yh me too..buh then it came to me..lolllzzzz...seriously bein a writer u need to tink all the ways...

" Haan iss par humara naam khuda hua hai?" she said angrily? Even though she was confused as to how cud she not use her common sense?She knew one tin for sure that tis wasn't one of the days when her brain was dependable enuf..The previous events had actually made her too ashamed n angry to tink properly.. .she still knew that she wud neva 4give him..

" Aur voh bhi itni sundar tarah se ki koi kitna bhi chahe isey dekhe bina nahi reh sakta.." he eyed her the time he said tis?

Hearin his double meaning statement she nearly snatched the dagger from him?She stroked the dagger n then said " humein khed hai ki humne iss sey apke upar nishana lagaya?abb isey na jane kitni baar saaf karna padegi?"

n then she started movin away from him?

"Chahe kuch bhi kaho..abb toh mein aapko apna dost banakar hi rahunga..Yeh Veer ka vada hai?"

"Khokhle vadein karna aryavraton ki fitrat mein hai?"

😲😆....

" Yeh vada khokla nahi..Abb toh isey pura kar kar hi dum lunga.."

"Sapne dekhna achi baat hai..hum apke liye dua karenge?"

" Kyun"

" Kyunki Shera ki dosti app jaiso ko nahi milti?"

"Veer apki dosti hasil karke hi dikhaega?"

" Yeh toh waqt hi bataega?" sayin so she strode off in the dark night..

night.....? b..but i thought it was morning... 🤣 anyways, now i will have to read it all again having the image of a full moon night in mind.. 😍 oHoooo...archu....lolllzzzzz morning..time for such romance..lolllzzz..Kkk mah mistake..I'd take care nxt time..Yh read it tht way..U'd like it.....

He kept watchin her till the time he cud see her?n then wiv a sigh..he luked to the heavens above..

" Humein karib lakar yeh toofan toh tham gaya, Mere dill mein jo toofan utha hai, Voh kabhi nahi Thamega."

ya... tell him not to say such things, shera is destinated to live wid him, 😕 oh ya, but, it looks realistic. 😊 Well even if she lives wiv him..uske dill ka toofan aur uthega..kyunki voh pyaar ka toofan tha..agar dur raho toh bhi aur pass mein raho toh bhi..voh humesha badhta jaega..humesha..kabhi kaam nahi hoga na kabhi thamega..coz such a beauty will be by his side..n yess..Thnx I loved tis line..Wow archu read u'r line again..It's rilli awesum..

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Veer watched her go, till her thin, small, attractive frame disappeared admist the dust. He placed his hands on the bark as if feelin it, feeling her in it. He could still feel her essence, her sweet, smell of crushed pines n wild flowers. He slid down n sat at the roots of the old banyan tree, under which; moments b4 he had, had his lyf's mst passionate n romantic experience. He knew wht he did wasn't sumfin tht was modest, Not at all how a first meetin shud be like. Buh he cudn't help it, from the moment he saw her his heart went wild. Her mere presence seemed to stir a turmoil of such emotions from which he had remained unknown b4 today. Buh still the time she came close to him, put her sword on his neck, he felt sedate, he felt calmer n much happier. ( Ironical isn't it..buh still as much true)

nice feelings, nice description. 😊 ^^ aww thnxxxx

He didn't want it to be like tht. Buh she wasn't ready to listen to him, or talk to him.

She had been bold n atrocious from the very start, unlike all the oder gals he had ever seen b4. Buh he knew as a matter of factly tht even people who appeared to be vry strong need tht protection, they too had feelins. He knew she was just like him, as he didn't like to show his emotions in front of all n she too was the same. He knew vry well how to mask his feelings n wear a face faade, guard his expressions in front of people whom he didn't want to knw his feelins. Buh when she was near him, in front of him, he didn't feel the need to guard his expressions, coz he knew he cudn't. Oh How beautiful she luked wiv the moon-light bathin her face, her eyes closed, cheeks aflame, lips quivered. The way her breath becam short n heavy, when he was near. He loved seein the effect he had on her. He had never been so close to a gal in his whole lyf, n how so eva much he tried he cudn't resist himself after seein the effect he had on this Nave, bold n atrocious beauty..He felt tht sudden need to protect her, be close to her, as she felt so nave and vulnerable under him.

ok.. now... i dont know wat to say... im petrified, and i cant say if its possitively or negatively.

Godd...temme yaar...Tis was the prt prt n description tht got deleted..n the nxt prt too..

The heavenly embience on her face was one tin no one cud let go unnoticed n he too noticed it, Her beauty was so pure, serene, untouched..anyone cud get drowned in her beauty. She was jus like an angel, in both the ways?..

She was the BEST of her kind..

Slowly he brought his hand towards his chest n placed it on his heart, where moments b4 she had put her soft, small, smooth, beautiful hands to stop him from going further. He placed his hands ova his wild, eratically beatin heart, So wild tht he cudn't tame it nymre . His eyes had tht twinkle now, wiv a cutu nonu smile which lit up his face.

ooh... shining eyes, shining in a passionate love, and a smile of cutu nonu?... manna padega, this is veer.. 😛

awww yes..cutuuu nonu....😳

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" AGNI" He said mre to himself than the handsum stranger (mirchy di ke jaanu), " Haan yeh Agni hi ho sakta hai, mein bhi na, uske khayalon mein itna ghum tha ki..kuch aur yaad hi nahi raha." Sayin so he smiled to himself. " AGNI"

AGNI!!!! 😆😆😆 lol lol lol... wat kind of different roles we have gave to our villians... poor them.. 😆 lollllzzz yes...buh I can't see mirchi di's jaanu in a negative role..

" Apki badi kripa Rajkumar Agni, toh app kya app humare pichle sawalon ka uttar dekar hum par thodi aur meherbani karenge." Veer said, givin him a enuf of it luk..

" Zarur!! Vaise jald hi mera Rajya Abhisekh hone wala hai .

" Hmm..Toh mera bachpaan ka dost, mera langotiya yaar, abb Ajmer ka Maharaj Ban ne jaa raha hai, Yeh toh bohot hi khushi ki baat hui."

" Haan, aur kuch dino baad jasn hai, toh mujhe yahan pitaji ki agya se ana pada, kuch ache utth ( camel) aur ghode kharidene the, aur isliye bhi taki hum thodi kuli hawa mein ghum, Kyunki yeh shayad akri baar hai jab hum iss tarah kahin bina chinta ke aa jaa sakte hai..Vaise mein yahan se Gurukul bhi jaunga, Guruji ne bulaya hai..so unse milne.."

" Aur Rajkumari Vaishali se bhi." Veer said wiv a naughty gleam in his eyes, tryin hrd to keep his face straight.

" Hmm..chidalo jitna chidhana hai, vaise app bhi shayad kissi ko apna dill de chuke..."

" Tum kabhi nahi shudroge Agni.."

😆😆😆 whatever... but im liking it, this conversation on their heart rulers

yes madame...

" Arey Barkhudar, tumhara dill bhi kissi magror hasina par aa hi gaya hai, tabhi toh ped ke niche, uski yadoon mein gum, iss kadr dill thame baithe the" he gestures whteva he says n at last puts his hands on his chest jus like Veer's.

"Agni dekho jaise tum samjh rahe ho vaisa kuch nahi hai"

" Hmmm!!! Majra shayad usey bhi jyada ho..".."Kheir.." He conts seein the way Veer doesn't want to tell him nytin now.. " Jab bhi tum chaho, mujhe batadena, mein janta hoon..ki tum jyada der tak mujhse koi baat nahi chupa sakte."

Veer gives him a cutu smile n thanks him thru eyes.. " Kabhi nahi badlega, humesha vaisa hi rahega" (Veer smiles seein his childhood buddy, who understood him better than himself, always supported him, they had been the best of frens from the time they met in the Gurukul, where they were educated.)

"Umm voh abhi thodi derr pehle yahan toofan aya tha, so saare log chale gaye the.." he pauses for a while as he got bac memories of the events of the evening..

" Aur..aur voh..haan meine suna hai yahan Ekadashi ka bohot bada mela lagta hai, jisme uthhon ke bade bade saude hote hai, aur achi nasl ke ghode bhi milte hai. So chalo hum chalkar tumhara kaam pura karte hai, Shayad wahaan koi bohot hi acha uth ya ghode mill jaye"

" Hmm aur Shayad voh Magrur Hasina bhi, joh apka dill chura le gayi.."

" Huh" " Tum bhi na Agni.." ( Abb toh sirf khakh milegi, maine toh usey itna naaraz kar diya ki abb toh voh shayad hi mujhe mile, maine aisa kyun kiya..thodi duri banaye rakhta toh kya ho jata..na jane abb kya sochti hogi voh humare bare mein) Veer speaks to himself, buh a lil loudly..

" Abb toh pura vishwaas ho gaya hai ki tum apne dill se haath dho baithe.."

" Kya Agni tum bhi, baat ka batangad bana rahe ho.."

" Acha..Tum toh abhi se hi pyaar mein pagal ho gaye ho?"

( PYAAR..huh Pyaar ki baat toh durr, voh mera chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahti)

"Pakka Bhabhi kahin aas paas hi hogi.." Agni conts..

(BHABHI!!! Hmm..Abhi toh dosti hi nahi hui, aur Bhabhi..Par sabr kar Agni, mein usey hi teri Bhabhi banaunga.)

" Dekha khud se hi baatein kiye jaa raha hai..sachi Veer.." n b4 he cud say nytin mre..

" Chalo Agni jaldi chalo.."

" Hmm shayad jaldi karne se bhabhi mill jaye" Agni teases him even mre..

n Veer walks ahead ignoring his remarks.

ohok...😃 enough now, i liked this part, i cudnt comment as before, but it was a nice part, waiting for more to come soon. Yes yess...updated......

Love ya loads archu for such a beau comment.....t.cccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

your part 3 is LOVEEEEEELY MADHU.. cant tell u how much I enjoyed reading it.. you made my day with such a lovely update.. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee update soon.. Thank you for such a lovely FF

Originally posted by: kiran99

lovly update enjoy reading it wat a good shayari and romantic gazle u r to good dont make us wait for long plzzzzzzzzzz update soon