~||Star-Crossed||Shera-Veer FF||~{nte_35} - Page 15

Originally posted by: act12

my reply before reading this part Okies...replyin to the nxt one also...

Ciao

Jiya

Originally posted by: act12

😲😲WOW.........wen i read this updt, I was really entranced by the beautiful wording and the course of event, Imust say Madhu, u r very good at shocking otha ppl. well this was more like a pleasant surprise.....but neways, it was so beautiful and especially how u described love, felt like u have experienced it already or mayb someone has been reading a lot of Romance☺️ novel lately......It was really nice how Abhi described it as if he was 6-7 yrs older than her......he's so adorable....and Agni, wow, so he is luv with vaishali huh.......very nice, m so happy u made him nice in this FF instead of mean so hip-hip hurray for u........lastly, I jus luved the part wen they both thot of eachtha, O gosh, veer is accting like a love sick highschooler or one of the hero's in the movie who decides to befriend the heroine while the heroine wants to stay away from them😆, and Shera, wow, rejecting a handsome young prince whos ready to do anything for her....especially how she get so annoyed with his regular flirting, ofcorse she wud think that he does that with evry girl, he's jus so pefect😳

U showed all the characters very well.....especially the way u described Shera was jus amazing, seriusly I must say u shud right a romance novel and I bet u that It will b 1 of the best-sellers.......very nice....plzz keep on writing and yh 1 more thing, When r u going to update ur otha FF where Veer is a cruel husband (forgot the name, sorry)....plzz do cont dat 1 aswell, i m eager to no how its gonna go

Lastly, very nice job👏👏, u described everything in such a serene way, It has a sense of calmness to it, very nice, plzz do cont. soon and plzz don forget to PM me

Ciao

Jiya

Originally posted by: junglli billi

😍 pata nahi log itna acha fic likh kyse lete hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

all 😛 so cool
loved it

Originally posted by: 090909as

MADHU? aww hala...
awsome no words gr8 u could about this FF, god awsome!! God..wowie....breath love..btw thnx yaar..em so glad u liked it...
loved it i only read the first part though, even though awsome i don't blame you for not updating royal love two uniqe and awsome FFs need time loved it!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^ well waise toh 8 FF's..buh VS par three..lolllzzz..buh em rilli lazy...buh now em tryin to update evry day.....well I jus hpe u like the oder prts too...

It's so G888 to see ya here.....

Love ya loads....t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: ektay11

wow

madhu its beautiful

ur simply superb dear

thank u sooo much

Originally posted by: 090909as

madhu kya long updates i am tiered of reading..aww baby..sowie as I said Mah readers can complain abt late updates buh neva for shrt updates..em rilli sowie..nxt time onwards will take care to maintain the lenght too...😳 even part 4 though awsome loved it nights ko kya kya ho sakta mujhe to pata bhi naye i'll give a better updates after finish reading part 4... Cya

Ohkk..will be waitin..buh lollzz..U rilli don't knw kya kya ho sakta hai..?? will tell u dear thru tis FF...😉

thnx dearyy..

cya sn.....

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

That was BRILLIANT Madhu 👏 awww thnxie di..

😆 Bechara Veer impression jamane chala ta aur kya hogaya. well yes kind of..buh he jus wanted to follow her..buh in oder wrds...rilli impression jamane gaya n popat...😆

God how did he not know he had bad underarms. lollllzz..well actually travelling on a horse day and night any one can smell bad..and also bichara had not had a bath for days..so thought he required it..n also for raisin TRP's..(seein nonu shirtless ladkiyan wud go...droooolllllliiiiiiinggg...😆 JK

So not only does he look a litte stupid he also loses her for a while. hmm,...

The water-fall and stream scene is soooooooo cute. Shera is such a kid. 😛 Yh she is..A water person jus like me..I love doin masti wiv water n all..I jus trully love falls and streams,..love swimming too..If I were in her place I wud be doin the same..

But that changes with the fight. The sword fight was seamless and almost sensual aww was waitin for sumone to comment on the sword fight..mah first time for such a tin di..em seriously thnkful to u for tinkin tht prt was wrth givin comment....

And what made it even more gr8 was that Veer was proved wrong. Yesss....😛

And then he tries to pretend he got hurt which Shera sees through. Though I love it where Veer say that he cant protect himself so Shera should accompany him for his safety aww tnx again..tht was like at the last moment edit dia..em glad u liked it..

Thanks for the pm aww well the pleasures all mine signora..

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooon and do pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. aww yes well surely di..pakka....

see ya sn....

Love ya loads....t.cccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: hiri

loved it madhu the way veer was trying to show his love and the way u described everyfing was brill...