~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 77

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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part...!!👏👏
Iss Aditi ki toh main.......😡
And why was she asking for Rahul...??? and how does she know him...???😕😕😕
Pls update soon...can't wait till next saturday...!!!😉😉

And Raj ki condition...uff.....!!!!😭😭

And I m glad u r continuing this for a while...!!!! At least sab ki shaadi mein invite toh karogi...!!!😛😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
great part tina...but hate aditi😡 y the heck is she asking for rahul?😡...
loved the precap, finally we see come signs of raj..but i hope he's fyne..can't wait for next Saturday
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Tina
How r u?//I'm replying after a long time but u know I was busy in settling down..Finally I'm relaxed.
Read all the updates ..They were just terrific..
U certainly seem inspired by hollywood movies .The way u have described secret chambers,thumb impression n that human trafficing ..etc etc..
So u have introduced a new character..Shweta Salve//After reafding the update I felt like killing that woman..
I hope Raj is fine..Naina will deinetely find him...
N dis fiction is also abt to end..Why does all gud things end so soon .
Bye take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks for the update.

So the scandal here is about human trafficking … All the cadets are shocked to see what is going on..how innocent people are being tortured. They are afraid about what might have happened to raj..

The villain is back again and Naina's fear only rise by seeing her...

Abhi and naina want to beat the crap out of Aditi but have stopped themselves only for raj's sake.

Loved the precap as it shows that raj has been found..

Please continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
loved it.....

also d precap too as rajs found.....

totally awesome part
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Posted: 16 years ago
Good uds, finally Naina Rahul k ghar pahuche hai abhi jab tak vo KMA nahi aa jaati. Raj ka best friend hai Rahul n i am sure ki Naina ki dekhbhaal karega vo. Naina ko us ne Naveen mil jaayega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
RECAP !!
Mission in progress.....shweta salve as vamp....aditi !!..
Naina kills people disconnects cameras....and is frustrated...trying to find RAJ !!
Naina was thinking what to do...when her eyes fell on a small opening at the end of the room....the screens looked like stuck to the wall forming the end of the room...maybe there was something behind...she moved a few things....and somehow squeezed through..
No guesses there was a small space left behind....it was dusty...she saw a man on one extreme corner
She saw a man lying there
She went forward to face the person and she frooze....
It was the face she was dying to see .....it was to her the most charming face ever.....but right now it was in the most horrible form.....
The face she had been dying to see in the last few days....the face which carried the most charming smile....and it was like thought someone had stolen that smile from him..
He lay there in a pathetic condition....His clothes ripped and dirty...his beard overgrown......his hair shabby...... his eyes closed...
A tear escaped out of her eyes..
Naina-- R..Ra...Raj .....
She fell on her knees by his side......Tears falling down freely...
She shook him..
Naina-Raj......raj utho..
There wasnt any response from the other end..
She shook him hard !!
He was lying there very weak and exhausted...he opened his eyes due to all the screaming and shaking..
He couldnt keep his eyes open....his head was droppping...
Naina just held him.....she hugged him....and tears flew down non-stop !!...😭😭
Naina-Raj....i missed you...tum theekh hoon na??
When she broke from him she saw his questioning face...he was damn weak and would fall unconscious any second..
Raj-Nai....na...nainaaa..
Naina- Haan Raj..main hoon..its me...tumhari naina..😭😭
Naina-Chalo...uthho....
She gave him support and lifted him...he dint have the energy to hold himself on his legs....
HE fell down..
Naina- RAJ !!
She sat down beside him..
He was struggling for breath..
Raj-Kyun.....kyu..kyun aayi.....aayii hoon....tu..tum ???
Naina-Just shut up Raj...apni halat dekhi hain tumne??😭😭
Raj shook his head and sighed....he assumed she dint know how things were...he was frustrated that she was here..
Naina-Thoda bahar chalo...mere bag main paani hain...please...thoda chalo..
He nodded..
They tried walking somehow...he would keep losing balance but she was there.....there to help him and not let him fall down...somehow she made him cross that narrow opening..
She took out water quickly from her bag and made him drink..
It was like someone had given him a life saving drug.....he hadnt had water in like ages....no water no food...only torture !!..
He lived on the food item called torture !!
He felt slgihtly better after that bottle of water !!
Naina began to sob..
Raj placed a hand on her shoulder..
Naina-Kya halat kar di hain inhooney tumhari.....😭😭 ... In loggon ko main nahi chodongi.....
Raj just saw her sob..he was not fit enough to say that they would come out of it nor did he believe that they would come out of this mess....
Raj-Tumhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha..
Naina looked at him..
Naina-Yeh jaaney ke baad bhi ki tumhari jaan khatrey main hain...wahin baith jaati...itna kamzor samjha hain mere pyaar ko..😭😭
Raj-Naina..
He paused...talking was damn tough.....he just wished he could get a bed and go to sleep.....maybe forever.....death was better than this torture !!
Raj-You dont know how it is here...this place is crazy...its damn dangerous..
Naina-I have got till here......
Raj-How did you get till here?....who else is with you ??
Naina- Well the cadets raj..abhi rahul aur muskaan bhi yahin hain.....they did everything....they are the best batch i have ever seen...absoluetly perfect !!... we made thru every obstacle....we reached the boss also...there must be somehting about us na...
Raj-BOSS?? 😲😲😲
His eyes widened..
RAj-Whose the boss?
Naina looked at him..
Raj-Tell me damn it..
Naina-A...aditi..
Raj couldnt believe it... 😲😲😲
Raj-Adi...aditi...
He was dazed...why did this page of his life come back..
Naina-Shes behind evrything raj....shes the one..
Raj sighed...
He began coughing...
She patted him...
Naina-Tumne kuch khilaya nahi hain na bahut dinoo se?
Raj sighed..he dint want to tell naina his troubeled stories....not at this point...
Raj-Jaaney doon..khair abb hume sabke pass janey chahiye
Naina-Tum chal paogey?
Raj looked at naina..
Raj-Tum sath hoon na..😕😭😕
A tear rolled out of her eyes..😭
Naina-I missed you Raj...
Raj wiped her tears..
Raj-Save all this for later naina....we need to move now..
Naina sighed nodded and got up..
Naina-Chalo..
She made these transformations so fast...from emotional to strong....raj was proud of her
Raj held her hand and pulled her back..
She looked at him questioningly..
He moved his lips forward and placed them on hers.....tears rolled out of her eyes...
His lips loitered a bit..
He pulled back within a few seconds..
Raj- I missed you too !!..
His eyes were red !!... Naina could feel his pain...
Raj-Khair..
He took a deep breath..
Raj-Save all this for later....lets move now !!
Raj-Tum yahan akeli aayi thi?
Naina nodded..
Raj-Aur tumne in dunoo ko goli se mara akele??😲😲
He asked her looking at the two men dead on the floor...
Naina nodded..
Naina-Shocking but true...
RAj-Naina....tumne gun..😲
Naina-Tumharey liye gun chalna bahut choti cheez hain Raj....bahut choti..
Raj smiled
Raj-Meri naina...gun chala sakti hain....😆😉
Naina looked at him lovingly....yes she was his......and she loved when he said "meri naina "
Raj-Naina..we are diverting....mission par focus karein !!...😳
Naina-Sorry !!...
they made their way out......niana led him towards the boss..
Raj-Damn..this place is made very well..and i cant belive tum logon ne itna sab cross kiya..
Naina-Cadets ne Raj.....sab kuch cadets ne kiya hian.....
Raj smiled..
Raj-I knew they were capable of this!!..Akhir mere cadets hain!!
Naina smiled..
Naina-Tumhari naina...aur tumharey cadets !!...sab kuch tumhara hain Raj !!...
Raj smiled..😊
Finally Naina reached the room..
Naina told Raj to wait out for a minute..
Naina went in..
Rahul looked at her expectantly..she gave him a " yes " look..
Rahul was damn happy but he kept the same expression....straight face..
He signalled to abhi..
Abhi nodded..
Aditi was sitin on a chair..
Aditi-Captains..tumharey bachoon ko Raj nahi milney wala..mere saath deal ki baat kar loon.....main raj ki location bata dongi..yeh bechari uski lover bhi wapas aa gayyi..
Naina gave Aditi a stern look..
Outside Raj saw Muskaan Huda and Aalekh in a distance...
He went towards them..they were standing with theirr backs facing him..
Raj-Cadets..
He whispered...they all turned around shocked...muskaan lept on to him..
Muskaan-Kahan the?
Raj-Shh..dhere..
Muskaan-Theekh hoon? ( lowerin her tone)
Raj nodded..
Muskaan-Bhai...i missed you so damn much !!...we were so freakin worried for you !... kahan the??
Raj-Yahin kaha pada tha !!
Muskaan dint look at his face...She looked down..
Raj-Kya hua??
Muskaan couldnt control herself...she burst out crying and hugged him..
Muskaan-I missed you bhai...i was so scared !!..
Raj patted her..
Raj-Shh !!...bahut hoo gaya melodrama...
He whispered..-- yeh rahul ka aasar ho raha hain ... ab chalein
She smiled through her tears broke from him and hit him...
Suprisingly enough even huda went up to him and gave him a short hug...
Huda-AAp theekh hain na sir??
Raj-Yes cadet huda..main theekh hoon !!..
Aalekh-Apun ko pata tha sir....aapko koi kuch nahi kar sakta...apun sab jab tak zinda hain tab tak aapko kuch nahi honeey dega !!..
Raj smiled..
Raj-Thankyou cadet !! Ab chalein ?
Aalekh informed the others also to reach back to the boss..
They all walked in ..
Aditi-Ahan not bad.....dhund liya...aa jao Captain..tumhari kaami thi...
Raj gave her a glare..
Aditi-So house full sab yahin hain....easier to kill....toh koi akhri wish?
Raj-Kyun kiya tumne aisa?
Aditi smiled..
Adti-Saari kahan sunogey??
Raj-bahut sarri sun li ...ek aur sahi..😡
Aditi smiled.
Aditi-Tumse dushmani toh mujhe hain..yeh koi top secret nahi....tumse badla leney ke liye.....maine pehle tumharey karrebi loggon ko takleef di...kyunki captain rajveer kisi apney ko takleef main nahi dekh sakta....kahan shuru hoti hain captain Rajveer ki behen se...
Aditi looked to Muskaan
Aditi- Muskaan Singh Shekhawat ,Rohit yaad to hoga...
The colour from her face drained...how was rohit connnected to this..
Aditi-Rohit ko maine bheja tha...Muskaan ki zindagi main......smart guy...took just 2 months to trap Muuskaan...not long before they started going out......and then slowly he brought his colours out.....kissing her huggin her and taking her to pubs...dancing with her.....and then one fine day taking her to bed....
Aditi-It was the perfect plan...muskaan ke saath raat guzarkar usse akela chodh dena......she would have felt used and captain rajveer would have felt angry and must have undergone so much pain...
Raj wa damn angry...he just controlled himself...if not in that position he would have killled aditi and rohit by then..
Aditi-But sahi waqt par muskaan ne dikha diya ki woh Captain RAjveer ki behen hain........rohit ne room main cameras bhi fit kiye the....through which i could watch a live RAPE!!.....
but then muskaan figured it out..usney camera dekh liye aur chalaki se wire ko katt diya.....rohit got damn pissed and he got violent with her i guess.....
par muskaan ne usko knife se marr diya...woh bhi usko chest main....he was lying in the hospital for god knows how long....dunno if he is alive also.....
and muskaan flee from there.......koi saboot nahi tha usko pakdney ke liye....aaj tak i dunoo if she actually got raped that night or not...kyunki i never saw his face after that....i think rape toh hua tha?... kyun muskaan??... hua tha na???.....batao na...kya hua??
Raj moved forward in a flash and caught hold of aditis throat..
Raj-I wont leave you damn it..tumhari itni himmat..you bladi **********
ADiti-Kaash yeh sab tumhe tab pata chala hota..phir tumhe bahut takleef hoti na captain...
Raj almost would have killed her when abhi pulled him off..
Abhi-Raj....gussey main kuch aisa waisa mat kar baithna......
Tears were flowing non-stop out of muskaans eyes....it just brought back the things she had always want to forget..the things she had always hidden in the past.....pages from the past she had torn away....they were coming back....
And rahul was in state of shock...he never knew all this.....muskaan had never told him anything...
He looked at her acroos the room..
She couldnt face his eyes...she looked down....tears flowing out !! 😭😭
When she looked up she stillfound rahul looking at her....his eyes red.....totally shattered and heart broken !!
All the other cadets were also shocked..
Aalekh was standing by Muskaan's side...he just held her !!
Muskaan laid her head on his chest..
Naina moved to hold Raj..
Aditi-Phir when i lost touch with Rohit i decided to go myself into the academy and trap Raj.......and woh story toh sabko pata hain....he just exposed me openly...but raj....you know in this worl no one follows truth for too long....jail main toh tumne dal diya..but i made my way out from theere....who would follow truth when there was a hot lady there..
Abhimanyu sighed...he knew what she meant...she had slept her way out of the jail..
Aditi-And then i striked again....remember raj when naina was kidnapped during the freshers ball....i failed for the third time in my life....you were just bladi lucky....you escaped yourself and saved he ones around you.......every bladi time...
Aditi-And today when we captured you --- here your people who think they have saved your life by finding you.....not too long friend.....bid goodbye to all of them...coz you all are gonna die soon...
Aditi-I might have failed thrice mate....but then that was in your teritory....now this is my teriitory...and you have no escape.....its the end buddies!!..
Raj-Why do you hate me?.....why do you send rohit to muskaan years back even before i knew who you was?
Raj asked angrily..
Aditi-Hmmm ....smart question !!...... so lets remind you captain !!....Lets take you into flashback !!
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Another part finally uff !!...man action is becmin tough to ryt !!... i jus hope its lyk makin sense to u guys...all the hidden chambers nd all that ....lol....i m jus wrytn trash !!... lol....now we get into the flashback next part and then who kills whom in the end of the mission !!..
Thanx fer the lovely replies !!...
thnx to all
sumaiya sania shaina vertika prerna dhara deepali rituka suhana nisha lipi arpita radhika
Sorry if i missed sme1....
@ suhana
hey.... i m dng gud !!... i totally understnd...hope the weddin went off well....glad that u takin out tym nd cmin !!.. :) fatiny would stay on for a little while !!....sme timepass for me !!.. lol..
@dhara
iss aditi ki toh main bhi ... lol !!...
shaadi main paakka aana hain !!.... ur the special invitee !!.. lol !!
Edited by -Tina- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Finally Naina ne Raj ko dhundh hi liya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊This was very sentimental when she looked at Raj's poor condition!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj's condition is very bad!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭They had tortured him so much!!!!!!

He was humilated for many days and neither food nor water was given to him!!!!!

I loved the way Naina tried her best to take care of Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is crying kyunki kya haalat kar di hai Raj ki in logo ne!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She swore ke woh in logo ko nahi chodegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj said Naina ko yahan nahi aana chahiye tha as he is worried for her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Now this is true love where he cares for his love more than himself!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne sahi kaha ke yeh jaan ne ke baad ke Raj ki jaan khatre mein hai woh wahi baith jaati itna kamzor samjha hai uske pyaar ko!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was shocked to know that Aditi is the boss!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina made these transformations from emotional to strong so fast that Raj was proud of her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj kissed Naina for a while as they have met after ages!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj was surprised to see ke Naina ne do guards ko goli se mar diya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina said Raj ke liye uska gun chalane bahut choti cheez hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne sahi kaha Naina is his and Naina loved it when he said meri Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina is right ke Raj ki Naina Raj ke cadets sab kuch uska hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊They are here only to save him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Muskaan was very happy to see Raj and starts crying!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭All his cadets were happy to see him as they had been so worried for him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh said jab tak woh zinda hai Raj ko kuch nahi hone dega!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aditi ko Raj se dushmani hai aur usse takleef dene ke liye usne Raj ke apno ko takleef di kyunki Raj uske apno ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakta!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

It was shocking to know that Muskaan ki zindagi mein Rohit ko bhi Aditi ne plant kiya tha!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Aditi is so sick!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡She trapped Muskaan first and thats why she asked for Rahul I guess!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Muskaan ne bhi bahut accha kiya tha ke usne Rohit ko knife se marr diya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I don't think ke uska rape huya tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

She has been through a lot!!!!! No wonder she was so angry and frustrated in the beginning!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She has hidden a big truth!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj caught hold of Aditi's throat and would have killed her when Abhi pulled him off!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Rahul is in a state of shock!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲I don't know what he will do now!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Will he understand her and be there for her when she needs him the most??😕 😕 😕 😕

Aalekh held Muskaan and she laid her head on his chest!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He is a true friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina moved to hold Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj truly needs her now!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ke kidnapping ke peeche bhi Aditi ka haath tha!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ish Aditi ki toh main!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

But the question still remains ke Aditi ne yeh sab kiya kyun??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Why did she want to spoil Raj's life and why did she send Rohit to Muskaan even before Raj knew her??😕 😕 😕 😕


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Nice part.Finally Raj is here. I felt really bad abt his condition. But then both Raj n naina managed well out of there. And Naina is ryt Raj ki Naina, Raj k cadets-every1 is His.

I'm shocked to knw abt Muskaan. But eager to knw y Aditi did all these when Raj even didnt knw her. W8ing 4 the flashbak.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Tina
How r u???
Update was as usual rocking!!!!!..How can u write at such pace..
Finally Naina found Raj ..She was happy to see him but his condition was pathetic..Raj was worried for Naina..Now dis is true love where we care for the other person more dan ourself.😊😊😊
Raj is shocked to know dat Aditi is the person behind all dese conspiracy..
It was shocking to know dat Muskan has faced so much of trouble..I dont think dat Rohit has raped her..Will Rahul understand Muskaan now..Will he b dere for her when she needed him d most...??? I wanted to kill this Aditi..How cud she???
Even I wanna know the mystery behind all dis..
Do update soon

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