~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#741

Rocking update..

It was nice to see BC's soft side for a change..even shalini was touched..but does this mean that Raj has told BC everything about Navin's death. I just hope that BC will support them as they will truely need his help now. And he need not worry because naina knows the truth.

Huda has been very brave...he has proved that he is a brove soldier and rajveer's true cadet..

Muskaan needs to keep her emotions at bay and focus on the mission...she has to be strong.

Naina, abhi and others are now determined to save rajveer and the other cadets...and please bring them all back safely..

Please continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#742

Nice update.

Raj k baare me sab k sab pareshaan hain aakhir hona hi hai vo dushmano ki kaid me jo hai. Raj ko bachane k liye sab k sab aa gaye. Huda ki haalat dekh k mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha tha but still he is a brave soldier kyounki Muskaan k gloi nikaalne k baad itna pain ho raha tha Huda ko fir bhi vo Raj ko bachane k liye jaana chahta tha.

Naina n Abhi ka decision sahi tha Muskaan ko Huda k saath chodne ka but i know soon they will join the troop n save Raj.

continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#743

Good ud's both were nice.

Raj ko bacahne k liye sab nikal pade hain n injured Huda informed them that Raj has been caught by enemy but now i know or i can say i believe that Raj would be safe soon.

continue soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#744

Good ud yaar. Naina ne thaan li hai ki us ko aur Abhi ko Raj ko bachana hai aur Huda ne bataya bhi.😃 Par Muskaan n Huda k beech me kya problem hai ye samajh nahi aaya mujhe.😕 Muskaan helped Huda in really good way. 😊

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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Tina

@-Tina-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#745

RECAP

At the base....huda injured..

Rajveer captured..

Rahul-Muskaan tension..

All leave for enemy base !!

As per plan everyhting was executed.......it seemed just to easy !!..... The security perhaps was too dumb !!......but why would it be so ?...

Abhi found somehting fishy...things were way too easy...was there a catch somewhere...

Abhi-Raj...tum yahan hoon ya nahi ?.......aggar tum yahan hoon toh yeh log alert honey chahiye the....aisey nahi...kahin tumhe kahin aur toh nahi bhej diya..

Abhi was talking to himself and trying to find a solution !!

All the three teams made their way inside the enemy base..

The security inside was comparitively more alert...but the soldiers sliced them silently and sharply !!

Somewhere in some corner!!

Naina saw a room....she decided to get in....along with few fellowe soldiers the team split up..

As naina and some soldiers entered in the room they found yudi and aalekh tied and kept on the floor..

NAina quickly untied them..

Aalekh-Idhar bahut locha hain...aap yahan kya kar rahi hain ma'am??

Naina-Hum yahan tum sab ko bachaney aaye hain...mujhe theekh se batao kya kya hua..

Aalekh-Story ke liye time nahi hain ma'am.....humko sir ko bachana hain...unn logon ne unko kidnap kar diya hain....

Yudi-Yes ma'am aur humein kaisey bhi karke un tak aur captain rajver tak pahunchna hain.....sir iss waqt kis haal main hain....we dont know anything..

Naina-Its ok cades...shanti se.....we'l do it...chalo lets move..

Yudi-Ma'am....kya captain Abhimanyu aapke saath hain?

Naina-Haan...woh bhi yahin hain..kyun ?

Yudi-humein unse milkar baat karni chahiye....iss mission main koi bahut bada secret hain...jo hum cadets ko bataya nahi gaya hain...shayad abhimanyu sir ko kuch pata hoon..

Naina-Dont worry cadet......humney bahut soch smajh kar planing ki hain...tum log bas mere saath chalo..

Yudi- Yes ma'am !

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Abhi's team dint face too many problems....since the other 2 teams had cleared out the people..

Abhi-Kahani main koi toh twist hain...aggar raj yahan hain toh security double honi chahiye thi...which is not the case....

Abhi's team directly ran into Rahul and Muskaans team..

Abhi spoke to Rahul..

Abhi-Theres a catch somewhere...itni aasani se hum andar yeh guards ....aggar raj yahan hian toh security double honi chaiye thi.,...

Rahul-Mujhe bhi wahi laga.....

Abhi-Kya hoo sakta hain??

Rahul-Shyad koi underground base??

Abhi-Ya koi secret chamber...ofcourse......itni budhu to nahi hain yeh log...rahul naina ki team ko contact karo....tell them to come here asap....humein yeh crack karna hoga..

within 15 minutes they were all together....discussing what to do..

There was silence.....

Aalekh-Sir aggar idhar underground base hain to apun ko sari ground area check karni hogi..

Yudi-Lekin aggar yahan technology se deewar ke piche secret chamber banya gaya toh??

Huda-Yudiye...deewar ke piche kya hain yeh kaisey pata lag sakta hain??

Yudi-Kahin koi board hoga...not necessary ki jahan board hoon wahan deewar ke piche...kahin bhi....wii-fii se uss board ko deewar ke 5 km durr bhi rakha jaa sakta hain..

Abhi-Cadets we have to get cracking....yudi huda aur aalekh...aap sab alag ho jayie....rahul muskaan naina...tum log bhi...bahar aao..

They stood apart...

Abhi-Abb aap jis jis team main hain wahin rahiye...team 1 aur 2 sari ground area check keejiye....koi shak lagey toh immediately humein contact karna.....team 3 aap jayiye aur control rooms check karein...kuch bhi pata laga toh batana..

Abhi-Sameera aur tanvi ka koi pata hain ??

Yudi-Nahi sir....hum sabko alag alag karke bandha gaya tha.....jab aalekh nikal paya aur mujh tak pahuncha toih humein phirse saath main bandh diya tha....warna sab alag alag hi hain..

Abhi-Sab saath hain cadet......hum sameera aur tanvi ko bhi dhundh lengey !!

Yudi - Sir !!

Abhi-Hum sab ek team hain...chalo lets go..

Abhi Naina Rahul-Muskaan Huda yudi Aalekh....

They were in one team now!!

In no time they found sameera and tanvi...

It wasnt tough..

Abhi- Cadets ko humney bahut aasani se dhundh liya...lekin captain rajveer ko dhundhney main bahut mushkil hogi.....itna aasan nahi hain yeh sab....tum log samjh rahe hoon na?

They all nodded..

Abhi-In loggon ki rajveer se purani khunas hain....itna aasan nahi hoga!!

Huda-Sir jo bhi hoon...captain rajveer ko dhundhna hoga.......

Abhi-Yes cadet....wahi main tum logon main dekhna chatha hoon !.... we can do this !!

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They all stood around a talbe...

Abhi-Yudi aur Rahul tum log saath main niklon....yudi yahan technology ke knowledge tumhe hain aur rahul ko bhi thoda bahut aata hain .....you guys get cracking ok.....koi bhi clue mile toh mujhe contact karna..welll saath main tanvi ko le jana.....you 3 stay together...

Abhi-Naina....tum aur aalekh mere saath rahogey....baki sameera huda aur muskaan....tum sab ek team......huda underground base ke baarey main koi clue miley toh bata dena.....make a move!!

They all split up into another 3 groups...very smartly abhimanyu made 6 different groups...somewhere someone had to find some clue that way!!

AFter lot of hard work and lot of brain wrecking the man who saved them was YUDI!!

They entered a room full of Invisible rays..

Yudi-This is it...aggar is room main yeh rays hain toh iske aagey koi secret chamer zaroor hoga...thats why woh nahi chathe ki jo yeh room enter karein yahan se bach paya..

Yudi followed a wire in the corner of the room and traced its path to somewhere outside the hut...

He went there and pulled out the wire...so that the rays wouldnt pass through any longer..

He informed everyone...he also found the wi-fi router through which perhaps they all communicated and disrupted that as well..

ANd then they finally made their way into the secret chamber....the entrace was computer operated ....yudi sat down and within 15 minutes he hacked the password and they all entered..

Slowl and steady they kept killing the little people on their way..

They finally reached what looked like the big room or the boss's room...

as they entered there was a shocking view for them all..it was a huge room.....the word wasnt room....it was like a palace.....about 4 floors .....loads of bodies which were placed like showcase pieces.....god only knows what they were doing.....naina sunk from within....she knew what it was all about.....and she feared that if the same thing was done to Raj...

There was another door and a whole different chamber behind it looked like...coz here all one could see was these captured bodies...not another soul in sight!!

Muskaan-What the hell is all this?

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PRECAP

Abhi-Damn!...abb kiske thumb impressions ki zarrort hogi....kaun aisa hoga boss...jiske thumb impressions se yeh darwazaa khul jayee...

Aalekh-Sir apun kuch boley ?

Abhi-Bolo cadet

Aalekh-- yeh kisi jail se kam toh nahi.....aur jail main jailor hi toh inspector ko saari information dega..toh koi mara hua soldier uthao aur uske thumb prints try karo......match hua toh khus jayengey ...nahi hua toh awaaz hogi ...aur woh khud bahar aa jayengey!! ...aur idhar apun sab hain na !!....

Aalekh smiled..

Abhi-Excellent cadet !!.....lets do it quick !!

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sorry guys dunt hv tym to chek it....forgive the mistakes...and hope u lyk dis part..aint too sure if its nice !!

tina!

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#746

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Abhi sahi soch raha hai that it is too easy!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Something is fishy for sure!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina found Aalekh and Yudi tied up in a room!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh and Yudi are worried for Raj and said they have to rescue him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔They are really devoted to Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yudi said ish mission mein koi bada secret hai jo cadets ko bataya nahi gaya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Abhi is right ke agar Raj yahan hai toh security double honi chahiye thi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

They thought there must be a secret chamber and started searching for it!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

In no time the found Tanvi and Sameera!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But Abhi is right ke Raj ko dhundhne mein bahut muskil hogi!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

I just hope they find Raj soon as well!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi finaly saved the day!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He found a room full of invisble rays and knew that the entrance to the secret chamber must be here!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He hacked the password to the computer operated entrance!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The underground chamber seems quite frightening!!!!!

I hope this is not some kind of a trap!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔All of them need to be careful!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#747

Good update.👏 👏 👏

Full of action n devotion for Raj.😃 😃 😃 Cadets n Abhi, Naina, Rahul, Muskaan itne saare logon k hote hue Raj ko chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai vo bach jaayega.😊 😊 😊

continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#748

Great update..

Abhi, naina and the others have rescued all the cadets.

I just hope that they find raj soon as well. Although the underground chamber seems quite frightening,

I hope that this is not some kind of a trap. All of them need to be careful.

You are doing a great job while writing about this mission. you write action just as well as you write about love and emotions. I don't think that you need to worry at all.

Please continue soon.

Edited by dazzling_glory - 16 years ago