~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Hey Tina hello how r u?😊😊

This is a nice start n all the best for ur this new n beautiful fic 👏👏.

Actually hum sab Raj aur Naina k baad sab ko second priority dete hain isliye baaki k logon ko baad me dekhte hain.😉😉

Rahul n Muskaan are also a nice pair.😃😃

Waiting for it's first part to be posted.😛😛

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
@riya
thnx...yes indeed its is r-n with a touch of r-m...(Rahul-Muskaan frm dmg)
@sam..
Thanku so much.......wow!...r-m is ur fav.....great....
@bhavini..
Thnx...i will!!
@mahak
I m doing gud..wat bout u??
thnx ya...i will post the next part now!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
PART-1
The Dreadful Truth!!..
She went down for breakfast...There was an unusual silence....She wondered why?..When she got down she understood...After years an army officer had come to their house.....completely dressed in his uniform...Looking extremely smashing he sat there.....silent and calm as always!!...He had come home before as well...but never in uniform.......not after the incident atleast....

She occupied a seat next to her mom on the sofa!!...All looked serious..

She--Hi Rajveer...Tum yahan??

Rajveer-Haan Naina....Tum kaise hoon??

Naina-I am doing good!!....Aur tum??

She picked up an apple and started munching

Rajveer-Hmm acha hoon

Naina looked around all serious faces..

SHe dropped the apple

Naina-Raj...Is it something about bhaiya's case?...Coz I knoe you wont come just like that....that too in full uniform.....akhir you dont care whether naina jeeye ya marey 😉

Naina laughed...Raj had a straight face..

Naina-Whats the matter??

Raj-I need to tell all of you something...

Naina-Go on...

Raj-...I couldnt make it earlier.....but now today I am free....I have a burden on my heart and I have to share it with you all...

Naina sat seriously....

Raj-Naina...I knoe you are always determined to prove Navin Innocent...I am sure you will...My best wishes are with you...Maybe after what I tell you you wouldnt ever see my face again....You wouldnt want too..But I promise I will still try to prove Navin inoocent!!

Naina-Raj just get to the bladi point!!😡...I hate all this..what exactly is the matter..Are you not gona support us anymore???...Ahh ya I knoe the army would have told you to stay away from The traitors family...and you have to follow the bladi commands.......good bye!!..

Naina got up and went 😡

Raj-I killed Navin!!

Naina frezedd....She fell right there....

Raj-With my own hands...I killed navin....my friend my evrythin...

Navin's mom and Dad were also there........his dad had anger in his eyes....while his mom started weeping!!...

Raj-Unclee woh

Baba-You killed him???😡

Raj-Uncle ek baat meri baat sun to leejeye...pleasee

Baba-Haan ya na..😡

Raj-Uncle

Baba-Haan ya na (very stern)😡😡

Raj-Haan..😭

Naina-kyun kiya tumne aisa?....why did you do that....

Baba-Koi zarorat nahi hian beti...humme philal iss bande se kuch nahi baat karni!!..

Raj put his head down....Navin's dad consoling his wife.......

Raj-Uncle aap meri baat ek baar sun lijiye..😕

Uncle-Iss waqt humein akela chodh doon...yeh tumharey liyee aasan hain par humarey liyee nahi!!...😡

Raj quietly left...Naina went behind him and insisted on knowing the whole thing...they drove to the beach in his jeep...

In the jeep..

Raj-Naina mujhe ek baat batogi

Naina-Hmm

Raj-Tumhare maa baba ne toh kuch bhi sunne se mana kar diya...unke liye sirf yehi saach tha ki maine navin ko mara...lekin tum phir be mere saath

Naina-Raj....kyunki mein janti hoon ki zarrori nahi ki jo bolte hain woh hamesha hota hain....tum kuch aur kehna chathe the...lekin tumhe kena ka mauka nahi mila...and thats injustice...akhir marte huyee aadmi ko bhi ek akhri ichha hoti hain..

Raj dint get the connection of the marta hua aadmi and his case....well Maybe it was simply because she was a doctor by proffesion....she was doing medicine specializing in psychology...perhaps they have patients medicines and death all the time on their mind...

A smile spread across his face..😛.Naina noticed it...and Raj saw Naina frown.. 😕

Raj-Mein smile isliye kar raha tha....ki uh...tumne kaha ki martey huye aadmi ko bhi ek iccha di jati hain na......bas yahii soch rahaa tha ki doctors ki dimag par har waqt patients medicine aur death hi hota hian....how they connect it....please galat mat samjhna!!😕

Naina(kinda convinced)-Hmm..

Raj smiled again.. 😛

Raj-Wah hamar aazad desh....dekh liya is desh ki azzadi.....muskuraney ke baad batana padta hain kyun muskura rahe the..😉

Naina smiled...It was his sad jokes which she liked...She had met Raj many number of times...when he came home with navin.....and she got to knoe him better....when navin died...he was the only person who stood by the family....and here was another truth..he killed navin...it kept eating naina from within....she wanted to know how when what why.....it was killin her but she preteneded to be fine!!

At the beach

Naina-Batao

Raj-Navin ko bahut sarrey troups dhundh rahe the...aur unmein se ek ka commanding officer tha Captain Rajveer Singh sHekhawat...aur mission ka opposite karney ke liye mere 2-3 trial hote vardi nikal jatti...main tayyar tha...my concern was navin..

Naina was shocked...Raj continued..

Raj-Navin mujhe jungle me mila...usne mere samne apne mauth ke bheekh mangi naina....mauth ki bheekh...woh thak chuka tha.....interogations mar-pet.....sabse thakh chuka tha mera dost!!...Meri zindagi ka sabsa dardanak pal woh tha jab mera dost mujhse keh raha tha ki "Raj please mujhe mar do".....Tum socho naina aggar tum uss jagah hoti toh kya karti..........duno taraf dard....kya karti tum...

Naina burst out crying...

Raj-Bas yehi thi meri kahani...ab faisla tumhara hain...Mein aaj bhi ussi personal mission par jeeta hoon nain...Navin ko begunah sabit karney ka...aur woh mein karke rahonga........aggar tum mera saath doogi toh it would be gud!!...

Naina-Kya aur koi rasta nahi tha raj??..

Raj-Nahi tha Naina...Navin ne mujhe humarey dosti ki kasam di.....aur kaha ki

Raj couldnt continue....He was crying too..

Silence..

Raj-Batao Naina mein kya karta??...Na chathe huye bhi maine..Navin ko...Navin ko marr diya!!..

Naina wiped her tears..

Naina-Please drop me home..

Raj knew she would take time....However right he was...Naina lost her brother....He understood..

They drove home silently..

Neither slept that night..Naina only thinking whether Raj was right or wrong......

And Raj thinking what Naina would be thinkin!..Somehow she was the most matured person he had ever met....Even thought\ uncle aunty refused to listen she wished too...

***********

Days passed...Raj was currently on a break....after a succesful mission he was told that he would be given an academy posting...he would teach at the academy!...He was waiting for his appointment letter!!

3 days later...when Raj reached his hotel...he collected his key from the reception.....and went into the lift..

When he reached th 7th floor...he had a visitor....and unexpected visitor....with bags and baggages!!

Raj was hell shocked

Raj-Tum?....aise

Naina-Shh!...darwaza kholo battati hoon

Raj quickly opened the door....and help her with the luggage...

Naina-Bhiaya ne batya tha...tum bade flirt hoon...aaj dekh bhi liya!!

Raj-Huh?...Bag uthan flirt hota hain??

Naina-Anyway whatever...ab meri baat suno

Raj-Bolo..

Naina-Maine maa baba ko sab bataney ki koshish ki...lekin maa baba tumse bahut naraz hain....they will shoot you if they see you..

Naina laughed ...Raj looked at her strangely..

Naina-Raj...Its ok...unhe bhul jao...i noe its tough....lekin trust me jab hum bhaiya ko innocent prove karengey tab woh humme maaf kar dengey ..

Raj-Hum?

Naina-Main ghar chodh kar aayi hoon

Raj-What?????????????

**********

Well that was part-1 for you all....hope u guys will like it..
A small thing...
We are well aware that it is very tough to find a fic here in the forum....so all of you would like to be intimated when i post the updates....
Thru PM its a little time consuming...the ones who acess their mail regularly can PM me their ID...And the ones who wish to get only Pm's let me knoe...!!......Let me know guys!!
Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Hi Tina
I read the 1 Part ..It was too gud ..I have read some stories on RN bit similar to dis 1 but yours was a bit different in the end👏..Naina has left her home to proove Navin innocent.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanx for informing
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Hey dear Tina gr8 update.....Naina is a doctor GR8..I like this part..Get in RM soon 😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
@suhana
Thnx...yes the strtin is a bit similar...but believe me the rest wont be so similar......
@sam
thnx yaar....r-m shd be there soon!!....jus a few uds away!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

hi

thks for the pm dear
intersecting part
RN together going to solve the case
update sooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
Edited by saridena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy darling
its amazing ur story didnt match wit ur intro
bt neways i luved it.............
keep me informed
bye
luv u
jags
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar
u know it very well how to twist a story
i love the story line
update soon long asap..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
wowwww i just loved it....emotional and yet has a comedy element in it......just a small request....plzzzzzzz ud regularly coz i feel that d feeling of d fic disappears if we read it after a long time and i dont want it to happen to dis fic coz i really loved "strange feeling" and i m sure dat we all gonna luv dis one tooooooooo

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