Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi Vertika

What should I comment on the update yaar. It was as usual awesome and mindblowing. But I still couldn't make out the story between Raj, Naina and Vaishali. Please yaar clear up the confusions as soon as possible. Keep up the good work.

With Lots of Love

Shree

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud👏.cont soon...........

Originally posted by: sharmi06

Frist of all thanks for the wonderfull story.... i know u just started .... i am sure it will be mindblooving .............

i think i got the story..

Thanks dear ki tum ko acchi lagi ye story.😛

Vaishali was Raj wife.. and somethink happend to her and she died .. than Raj meets Naina .. .........

Nahi ulta is ka.😆

Naina and Vaishali are look same.. thats way when Raj met Naina first time he become dreamey 😍(i might be worring ).............

nahi nothing like that darling.😉

i don't know why Raj and Naina got Married ... thats only you can tell us........ waiting for more............................. fabulous parts ,,,, can't wait to read more👏👏👏

Thanks a lot dear for wonderful reply dear aur haan sach kaha aap ne ki actual reason mai hi bata sakti hoon is ka.😃

Originally posted by: varshita

Baat kya hai ye thoda confusing hai,😕 pata nahi Naina se pyaar karte hue Raj ne shaadi Vishu se kyoun ki?

Agar aisa tha to kyoun tha?😕

Dekho ab mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe apni fic ka naam confusion rakhna tha na.😉

I hope aage k parts me ye confusion remove ho jaayega.😛

Haan sahi baat hai jaldi hi sab clear ho jaayega.😛

Naina se mil k Raj kho gaya vow g8!.😳

Haan mil bhi gaya aur clean bold bhi ho gaya.😳

Bechari Naina ki bus bhi choot gayi Raj ki help karne k chakkar me.😲

Aur kare samaj sewa.😆

Par ab Naina k saath Raj itna weired behave kyoun karta hai.😭

Kyounki vo jaanta hai ki vo galat tha.

Cont soon, nice update😊.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

confusion....confusion....confusion........matlab yaar....naina , raj, vaishali sab ko lekar confusion main hoon...

maine abhi kaha nahi ki mai soch rahi hoon ki is fic ka naam Confusion rakh doon.😛

sayad raj bhi meri hi tarah confusion main aakar vaishali se shadi kar liya hoga,,,,,, yeh soch kar k yahi naina hai......😆

Nahi vo jaanta tha ki vo Naina nahi hai.😭

bechra raj hamesha confused rahta hai....ab naina se shadi k baad bhi confused hai k kya kare.....!!!!!!!!

Haan kyounki is baar galti us ki hi hai.😕

i think in sab k piche bhi koi solid lafda hoga....koi baat nahin diwali tak confusion to dur ho hi jayegi.... itna bharosa to hai tum par........

Mujhe nahi lagta ki Deewali tak ye fic khatam ho paayega abhi thoda aur time lagega.😆

ab kya...yeh kahne k jarurat hai k ud kaisa tha!!!!! mindblowing.....kyoun k ek accha writer wohi hota hai jo apne reader ko bahat sare jhatke dene k baad bhi woh sab besabri se age k ud padhne k intezar main rahen...just like me......😊

Vow g8! logic yaar sahi kaha tune.😉

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

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THE UD WAS TOOOOOOOOOGOOOOOOOOD👏

INTESTING👏

MINDBLOWING👏

ROCKING👏

FANTASTIC👏

SACH U R AMAZING WRITER👏

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I LOVE U🤗

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Originally posted by: dreamer18

The update was FANTASTIC!!! Lekin 1 problem he... Mere confusions sulajh nahi gayi infact me abhi aur confoosd gu!!!!😕

mai ab is fic ka naam confusion rakhne waali hoon don't worry.😆

Vaishali n Naina are the same person.... 😕

Where is Vaishali now?? Even more important, who is she and what happened to her? I figured that she is Raj's 1st wife... Uske baad me kuch nahi samjhi!

Nahi dono twins hain,Vaishali is dead now😭. Vo Raj ki wife thi us k mar jaane k baad Naina se Raj ki shaadi ho gayi.😉

Confoosion clear karne ke liye, jaldi se ek aur update post kar!!! 😃

shure dear.😛

Waiting for more!!!

Loads of Love,

dreamer18

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!! Vertika!!!
The update was absolutely mind blowing....but it's needless to
say that I am as confused as others...
What's the real story behind these three dear???
Plzzzz solve the confusion...
Once again a rocking update.
Continue soon.
Take care.

Darling baat ye hai ki Raj pehle Naina se pyaar karta tha 😃par kuch confusions ki wajah se dono alag ho gaye, phir Raj ki shaadi Vaishali se ho gayi aur us k marne k baad Raj ki family waalon ne Naina se Raj ki shaadi kara di.😛


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Riya.

She took the lunch box with her n took out her car as well n started driving to his office. Raaste me Naina usi jagah se gujari jahan aaj se theen saal pehle us ki aur Raj ki mulakaat pehli baar hue thi , us ko yaad aane laga vo sab.

"Kya karoo mai ab?" Naina was unable to find out.

"Hey Naina kya hua tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?" someone called her from her back.

She turned n found Alekh here with his car. "Thank god Alekh tu sahi waqt par mil gaya accha hua.Pata nahi aaj ka din hi kharab hai''''." N she told everything to him.

"It's ok ruk mai dekhta hoon." He went towards Raj.

"Oye chikne kya hai be kahan hai tu ?" he asked Raj just shaking him badly.

Now Raj came into his senses. "Mai vo yahan''..mujhe to office jana tha mai yahan kya kar raha hoon?" he was surprised at him.

"Mai batai hoon aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?" Naina said. Naina ko dekh k Raj ko sab yaad aa gaya.

"I am sorry meri wajah se aap ki bus miss ho gayi aur meri bhi." He was ashamed of his behavior.

Naina didn't say a single word n gazed him.

"Par mai kya karoon kasoor bhi mera nahi hai aap hai hi itni khoobsurat ki koi bhi aap ko dekh kar fida ho jaaye." Raj said it flirtlously.

Alekh coughed n Naina was shocked, first time in her life some one said something like that to her, "What did u say?"

"I said ur the most beautiful gal I ever saw." Raj replied with a cute smile on his face.

Naina started thinking, "What a cute smile he has yaar?"

"Oye tu flirt kar raha hai?" Alekh roared.

"Sorry bhai sahib par ab mujhe lagta hai mujhe jaana chahiye yahan se, varna mujhe bahut joote padenge." Saying this he left almost running n he hired a cab.

Naina was smiling at his act n turned towards Alekh, "Ab chalein Appu wait kar rahi hogi."

Alekh nodded n both went towards the college.

"Are madam jara dekh k chalaya karo car." A young man said.

"Sorry bhaiya vo bus thoda'''." She said n left from there.

When she reached his office, it was almost two; "Good afternoon mam." A gal wished her.

"Good afternoon Maya, can u tell me where is Raj this time?" she asked Maya.

"Mam sir is in a meeting this time." Maya informed her.

"Ok, to mai yahan wait karti hoon." Saying this she was about to sit when Maya said, "No ama, aap yahan nahi sir k cabin me baithye. Vo bus 10 minutes me free ho jaayenge."

"Ok", Naina proceed towards Raj's cabin. When she reached there she found an awkward silence in the room. She didn't open the lights in his cabin n seated on the sofa; the peon placed the Tiffin on the table n left. She put on the table lamp n started turning over the pages. After sitting like this for 15 minutes, she got up n looked at all four sides of cabin. She knew that Raj never likes his things were touched by someone but all the files and a lot of other things were scattered here and there so she started arranging them properly.

When she was cleaning Raj's desk she found a diary from which a photograph fell on the ground. She picked it up, it was her picture three years back when she met Raj often. She smiled.

Pehli mulakaat k baad Raj ki aankhon k saamne se Naina ka chehra hi nahi hat raha tha , pata nahi pehli baar us k saath hua tha aisa ki jab koi ladki itna asar kar gayi thi us par, 'Damn Raj ho kya gaya hai tujhe? Kabhi pehle to aisa to nahi hua tujhe', he was lost in his thoughts .

Whereas Naina was lost in the words he said to her, "Par mai kya karoon kasoor bhi mera nahi hai aap hai hi itni khoobsurat ki koi bhi aap ko dekh kar fida ho jaaye." She was still thinking about Raj n his cute smile.

Next day Aparna was not with her that day because she was ill and have a high fever so after checking her Naina came to bus stop. Wen she reached at the bus stop, her eyes were still searching for him; but he was not there. She became disappointed n started waiting for her bus suddenly a car stopped in front of her. Naina didn't pay any attention to the car( ab us ko kya pata ki kaun hai car me?).

"Hello, excuse me," Naina turned n found Raj in front of her she surprised to see him, but in her heart she knew it's reason.

"Oh, hello aap yahan?" she asked.

"Kyoun mai nahi aa sakta kya yahan?" he asked.

"No, I didn't mean that'''''.. I just asked. If u have car than what was the need to some here by the way." Naina asked in the way to pull his leg.

"I came here just to meet u once again." He said.

"Oh, but y? Do v have any relation?" she asked again.

"Not yet but if u want than it may be." Raj replied.

Naina didn't reply she started thinking something, 'Ye to koi jaroorat se jyada hi bada flirt lagta hai' n replied, "No thanks n I never make relations with strangers." Saying this she was about to left when Raj said, "Excuse me, I didn't mean that." He said looking in her eyes straight.

"Naina tum yahan kab aayi?" Raj asked coming there.

"Bus I think''..ek ghante pehle." She replied.

"Nahi bus vo aaj tum apna lunch bhool gaye the na to maine socha mai hi de aati hoon tum ko." She indicated towards the lunch box.

"Oh, haan really I 4got it today." He said n came towards Naina n sat on the sofa opposite to him.

Naina served him food n he took a bite of it, he was eating peacefully n Naina was watching him silently. Raj realized Naina's gaze and said, "Tum bhi lo Naina."

"It's ok Raj tum khao mai baad me kha loongi." She said.

Raj again got busy in eating and Naina in thinking.

Raj ki engagement jab Vaishali se hue thi to Raj ko yei pata tha ki ye Vaishali hai us ki Naina nahi; par Raj ko ye nahi pata tha ki Vaishali aur Naina real sis hain .Pehli baar shaadi k pehle jab Naina se Raj ki mulakaat hue thi tab Raj bhi chauk gaya tha.

"Naina tum yahan?" he asked totally confused.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Rajveer Singh Shekhwat?" she asked irritated.

"Are Naina apne jeeja ji se nahi mile kya? Yahi to hain tere hone waale jeeja Rajveer." Her mom told him.

Naina k pairon k neeche se jameen hi nikal gayi. 'Ye kya ho gaya? Mai jis ladke se pyaar karti thi vo ab meri behan ki zindagi me nahi''''''..aisa nahi ho sakta hai' her eyes went teary n she left the place immediately.

Here Raj was still shocked. 'Ye ho kya raha hai mere saath? Maine to us ladki ki photo dekh kar haan kit hi mujhe laga tha vo Naina hi hai par ye sab''''..'.

Hua ye tha ki Rajveer ki maa ne Vaishali ko ek party me dekha tha aur un ko ye ladki apni bahoo k liye pasand aa gayi thi. Vaishali aur Naina bahut alag theen jaise east aur west. Vaishali jitni hi seedhe , simple aur sweet; Naina utni he tuff aur she had a lot of attitude in her. Par ek cheej thi jo dono sis me common thi vo tha un ka care aur pyaar, jis se dono jud jaati thi poore pyaar k saath aur us k liye apna sab kuch de sakti thin dono chahe vo un ki family ho ya phir koi aur.

Actually vo jis jagah party me gayi thi us jagah k log Shekhawat family aur Ahluwalia family k common frnds the. Us din Naina ne Vaishali ka apni tarah se sajaya tha to dekhne waalon ko laga ki vo Vaishali nahi Naina hai aur is party me aayi hai. Naina us din party me nahi aayi thi kyounki us ko Raj k saath kahin bahar jaana tha.

"Ye kin ki beti hai?" Mrs. Shekhawat asked Mrs. Rathod.

"Vo" pointing towards Vaishali.

"Haan vahi." She clarified.

"Vo Mr. Ahluwalia ki beti Naina hai." She told to Mrs. Shekhawat.

Bus aise hi rishte ki baat chali aur shaadi tay ho gayi vo to baad me pata chala ki vo Naina nahi Vaishali hai, kabhi Raj neb hi us ko call kar k baat nahi ki na'.nahi us ne kabhi Vaishali k naam par dhyan diya.

Raj came behind her, "Naina suno meri baat, ek baar to suno." He requested her.

"Ab bhi kuch kehna ya karna baaki hai kya Veer?" she said, "Tum ne socha Naina nahi to us ki behan hi sahi, kya fark padta hai na?" she was fuming n it was hard to control her now.

"Aisa kuch nahi hai Naina abhi 5 days pehle humari engagement hue hai na aur maine yahi socha tha ki tum maan gayi ho is shaadi k liye kyounki tum ne mujhe maaf kar diya us cheej k liye jis me meri na koi galti thi , na maine kuch kiya par tum nahi samjhi." He said disappointed now.

"Mujhe kuch nahi sunana hai Veer aur tumhare liye yahi accha hoga ki tum abhi yahan se chale jao , kyouki mai sab k saamne apna aur apne gharwaalon ka tamasha nahi karna chahti hoon." Saying this she banged the door on his face n closed it tightly.

Kisi hare hue gambler ki tarah Raj aankhon me ansoon bhar k chala aaya.

Tabhi Naina ka phone baja.Naina apne khayalon me se bahar aayi, "Hello haan bolo Moti kya hua?"

"Mem sahib achanak poore ghar me andhera ho gaya hai aur koi ghus aaya hai aap jaldi aa jaaiye yahan." He said terrified.

"Aap fauran aa jaaiye mem sahib, aahhhhhhhhhh". Naina heard a scream on her phone.

"Mujhe fauran jaana hoga. Hey bhagwaan sab theek rakhna." She prayed .She cut the phone quickly n started packing the tiffin again.