Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Hi Vertika
I read the update it was superb. Still some confusion is there but I think it will get cleared up soon. The flashbacks were very interesting as there is a big misunderstanding. Well I m really thinking about who the intruder was in the Raj and Naina's home. Do update soon dear and keep up the good work.
With Lots of Love
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Now its fine!!!
Sara ka sara confoosion gone!!!
The update was really good!! I have a feeling I know whats hapening at Naina's place!!!
BTW, what happened to Vaishali? Did Raj start loving her? (The previous update, there was a scene where he kisses her)
Anyways... Waiting for ur next update!!!
Loads of Love,
Dreamer18
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Hey
You have started writing another FF and that too a Diwali special...aur muje pata nahi.....
I just read all the three updates....
the story is fantastic...tooo good. Glad that you have included Alekh in the story.....
Hope that whatever the past might have been naina and raj will be able to work out their differences....
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Too good!!!!!!

Khud ko hi bus ke safar ke maaze lene hai aur khud hi irritate ho raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj toh Naina ko dekhte hi usmein kho gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aparna Naina ko tease karne lagi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ko dekhke sab clean bowled ho jaate hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj ko sambhalte huye bechari Naina ki bus miss ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina ko uske khayalo se nikala toh uski ankhon mein kho gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh aa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne expect kiya Raj usse dilayega lekin Raj ne kaha usse khud jaake le lene ke liye!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Very bad!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj toh do saal pehle ka karwa chauth yaad aa raha hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Vishu ko toh puri dukan khairdke deta tha!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Vaishali par toh bada pyaar aa raha tha aur usse necklace gift kar raha tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Vaishali ke saath toh shop mein hi romance shuru ho jata tha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ab bhi woh saari baatein yaad karke khush ho raha hai aur Naina ke saath yeh bartav!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina toh yaadon mein kho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Uske baad bhi Raj waise hi khada tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Yeh Raj toh dono beheno ke saath ishq lada raha hai aur shaadi bhi dono se ki hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Dono ke saath eda banke peda kha raha hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I hated this as well!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Nothing has changed in this update!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Vaishali was his wife!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡That makes it even worse!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
update was superb
to Raj pahele Naina se pyaar karta tha to us idiot ko ab kya ho gaya ab kyou use hurt karata rahta hain
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
update was superb
to Raj pahele Naina se pyaar karta tha to us idiot ko ab kya ho gaya ab kyou use hurt karata rahta hain
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

Good!!!!!

Naina phir se un yaadon mein kho gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Accha huya Aalekh mil gaya aur woh Raj ko hosh mein le aaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj toh Naina se flirt kar raha hai aur Naina ko bhi uski smile cute lagi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar phir Aalekh ko dekhke Raj khud hi bhaag gaya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ki diary mein Naina ki photograph teen saal pehle ki!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pehli mulakat ke baad dono hi ek dusre ke khalayon mein khoye huye hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina bus stop pe jaake hi usko dhundhne lagi magar nahi mila toh she was disappointed!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Ab jab Raj mila toh she was surprised but her heart knows the reason!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj toh usse flirt kar raha hai aur Naina bhi bhao kha rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kam se kam Raj ne offer toh kiya Naina ko khane ke liye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊How considerate of him!!!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱

Raj ko pata tha ke yeh Vaishali hai magar phir bhi usse engagement ki usne!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Bechari Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Yeh jankar ke Raj ki shaadi uski behen se ho rahi hai kitni shocked ho gayi thi!!!!!!

Raj ko samaj mein hi nahi aaya ki uski shaadi Naina se nahi balki Vaishali se ho rahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Magar ab toh samaj gaya naa!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ab toh kuch kar sakta tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina aur Raj ka jhagda ho gaya tha aur Raj ko laga ke Naina shaadi ke liye maan gayi hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Ghar mein kaun ghus gaya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕I think its a hoax!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj Naina se pyaar karta tha magar Vaishali se shaadi karli and lived a happy married life!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Wow!!!

I think this deserves an applause!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Akhir kya fark padhta hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I mean shakal ek jaisi hai aur zaroorat toh dono hi pura kar sakte hai naa!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Chandramukhi ho yaa Paro.ki fark painda hai yaro??😊 😊 😊 😊

Whatever reason you may give nothing can change the fact that Raj married Vaishali and lived a married life with her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aur ab jab Vaishali nahi hai toh back to Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Just wonderful!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
toooo good.............dis is getting really interesting..........

but yes finally all confusion is cleared!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!

Thanks Shaina.😛
Khud ko hi bus ke safar ke maaze lene hai aur khud hi irritate ho raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Kya kare Naina jo thi saamne.

Raj toh Naina ko dekhte hi usmein kho gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kya kare Naina jo thi saamne.😉
Aparna Naina ko tease karne lagi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ko dekhke sab clean bowled ho jaate hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj ko sambhalte huye bechari Naina ki bus miss ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aparna jaanti hai ki Naina k saath aisa aksar hota hai,😃 Poor Naina us ne socha ki Raj ki kuch help kar dein, par humare Raj ji to kisi aur hi duniya me mast the na.😳
Raj ne Naina ko uske khayalo se nikala toh uski ankhon mein kho gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh aa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Haan jaldi hi aayega vo aur tab aayega story me twist.😛
Naina ne expect kiya Raj usse dilayega lekin Raj ne kaha usse khud jaake le lene ke liye!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Very bad!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj toh do saal pehle ka karwa chauth yaad aa raha hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Vishu ko toh puri dukan khairdke deta tha!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

In sab cheejon ki wajah kuch aur hi thi, ye bhi jaldi hi pata chal jaayega tum ko.
Vaishali par toh bada pyaar aa raha tha aur usse necklace gift kar raha tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Vaishali ke saath toh shop mein hi romance shuru ho jata tha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ab bhi woh saari baatein yaad karke khush ho raha hai aur Naina ke saath yeh bartav!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Kyounki galat Raj hai is baar aur kuch nahi😡.Vaishali se pyaar nahi tha vo bus farz tha😕 jo vo nibha raha tha being a good hubby.🥱
Naina toh yaadon mein kho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Uske baad bhi Raj waise hi khada tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Yeh Raj toh dono beheno ke saath ishq lada raha hai aur shaadi bhi dono se ki hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Shaina ji shaadi kin haalat me hue kaise hue aur kya hua tha us waqt aap ye sab baatein abhi nahi jaanti hain; jab pata chalega to shyad aap ki soch badal jaaye.😲
Dono ke saath eda banke peda kha raha hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I hated this as well!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Nothing has changed in this update!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Vaishali was his wife!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡That makes it even worse!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
To kya biwi hai to thoda bhi positive attitude nahi hona chahiye us ka Vaishali k liye?😕

Thanks for reply Shaina.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Its Ok dear...So kuch kuch confusion door ho gaya hai....😊😊😊
But again dere is 1 Ha ha😆😆😆..Raj loves Naina but circumstances were such dat he got engaged to Vaishali but now he n Naina r married den why is he so aloof from her..n loves Vaishali instead...Its visa versa now ..Initially Naina was running away from him knowing that he got engaged to her sis but now Raj is doing the same..How can he love Vaishali..😕..n not Naina????????
Do update soon

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