Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshita

Waah waah darling kya baat haii new fic for us. 👏

Thanks dear .😛😛
Ye Deewali fic hai na, hope ki Deewali tak Naina k aur Raj k beech ki sab galat fehmi door ho jaaye.😛
Haan i hope too ki is baar dono hi Deewali mil jul kar khsuhi se manaye.😃😃😃
Vaishu kaun hai?😕
Dekhti jaa bus.😉😉
update soon.

Thanks for reply dear.😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here are the main casts of my story:-

Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

Naina Singh Ahluwalia/ Vaishali Singh Ahluwalia

Alekh Sharma

Aparna Gill

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here goes the second part guys
Aaj se kareeb theen saal pehle:-

Ek din subah Raj ko office k liye kafi late ho gaya tha . Genreally vo bus se nahi jaata tha par aaj car kharab thi to socha chalo aaj bus safar k maje lete hain. Car ko driver ko handover kar k aa gaya bus stop aur bus ki wait karne laga.'Pata nahi ye India ka stupid transport system kab sudhrega'. He was cursing himself for waiting bus today.

'Kya kar rahi hai Naina jaldi kar na warna bus miss ho jaayegi.' A gal called her.

'Haan bus aa rahi hoon yaar.' Naina said coming out of her room.

'Kya karti rehti hai yaar itna time lagta hai tujhe ready hone me.' Aparna asked.

'Haan yaar thoda time to lagega hi na, accha bus kar chal jaldi chalte hai varna late ho jaayenge.' Naina said n both left soon.

They reached their almost on perfect time the bus has just arrived.

'Kitni bheed hai yahan? Ab mera kya hoga?' he asked himself.

'Excuse me, kya mai pehle chad sakti hoon?' she asked him.

He turned after hearing a sweet feminine voice. He saw a pretty face in front of him n got stuck. Her eyes were like a deep ocean filled with love n naughtiness. Her lips were like rose petals n her cheeks were shining like a bright ray of rising sun. He was completely lost in her so he didn't realize that the bus is about to move now.

'Are aap ko jana nahi hai kya?' she asked looking him.

'Kahan?' he asked as if he was pulled by a strong magnetic power of her beauty.

'Are aap bus me chadne aaye hain na to jahir se baat hai ki aap ko kahin jaana hi hoga na?' she asked amused.

'Jahan le chalo.' He replied.

'Kya?' she was shocked.

'Ye bhi gaya lagta hai.' Aparna said.

'Kya bol rahi hai tu?' she asked Aparna.

'Vahi jo humesha hota hai tere saath, koi bhi tujhe pehli baar dekhta hai to clean bold ho jaata hai na.' Aparna teased her.

'Shut up Appu.Ye koi accha aadmi lagta hai ruk mai is ko hosh me laati hoon.' Saying this Naina turned in his direction.

He was still standing there and other ppl were entering in the bus. An old man said, 'Are beta agar tum ko bahar jaana hai to raasta to khali kar do kam se kam hum log to jaa sake na.'

Naina embarrassed n came down from the bus then she asked Raj , 'Are aap ko hua kya hai?'

'Pata na kya hua hai?' he said.

'Oh god mai kya karoon is aadmi ka.' She was really confused.

Suddnely she took his hand and started pulling it towards the bus but this attempt was late the bus has already left.

'Hey bhagwaan, ab kya karoon mai? Bus to chali gayi aaj to gaya mera college.' She shook her head in disbelief.

Raj was still in same position.

Her thoughts broke when Raj shook her, 'Naina , Naina'.. kahan khoyi hue ho?' he asked.

She looked at him, his hands were held her tightly n he was looking in her eyes . For a moment both of them have an eye lock. Raj ko laga pehle jaise aaj bhi vo Naina ki aanhkon me kho jaayega. Soon their eye contact broke by the ring of door bell.

Raj felt it odd n left her hands. Naina went to open the door, kaam waali aayi thi. Naina gave him some instructions n went straight to her room.

'Haan kuch keh rahe the tum?' she asked him.

'Haan vo ye batana tha ki maa ne kaha hai ki aaj Alekh aa raha hai, vo kuch din yahan rahega. Us k rehne ka arrangement kar lena aur vo Karwachauth bhi aa raha hai to''.' He started thinking some thing.

'To phir?' she asked still thinking that may be Raj will say anything . Shayad vo Naina ko saari ya jwellery dilane le jaaye.

'Vo tum jaa kar ek saari le lena apne liye.' He said n looked her.

Naina said, 'Nahi koi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe nayi saari ki . Abhi mere paas kaafi kapde hain mai in me se hi kuch pehan loongi.' Saying this she left.

Raj ko 2 saal pehle ka Karwachauth yaad aaya.

'Kya Raj poori dukaan khareedne hai kya?' Vishu asked.

'Nahi na dekho ye color accha lagega tum par.' Raj showed another saari to her.

'Nahi ab bahut ho gaya ab chalo na baaki ki cheejen bhi to leni hain na.' she said.

'Dekho bus ye last hai na le lo pls.' Raj requested.

'Oh ok , par last na shure'. She asked.

'Haan baba.' He smiled.

They both now turn towards the jwellery shop. Vaishali was searching for a ring n Raj was looking here and there. Suddnely us ki najar samne showcase me rakhe ek neckless par gayi.He took it in his hands and went towards Vaishali.

'Ye dekho kitna pretty hai.' He said tieing it into her neck.

'Vow really very pretty Raj.' She said going in front on mirror n smiling.

'But not more than u darling.' He winked her.

'Accha bus now stop flirting, chalo ab is ko pack kara lete hain.' She said n started going.

'Hey, stop,' he caught his hand from behind n pulled her to him.

'Ye kya hai?' she was amused by his such behaviour.'Ye kya kar rahe ho ye ghar nahi hai shop hai.'

'Wait only a minute.' He said n kissed her collar bone .

She closed her eyes, Raj bent towards her n took her lips in his mouth than suddenly an old lady entered' Hey bhagwaan' she shell shocked came outside.

Raj and Vaishali broke n came out feeling embarrsed.

'Kya jamana aa gaya hai logon ko jara bhi sharam nahi reh gayi hai kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hain.' The old lady said.

'I am sorry aunty vo'.' Vaishali couldn't continue.

'Are itni he besabri thi to seedhe ghar chale jaate, tum dono to shaadi shuda lagte ho na.' the old lady said it again.

'We are very sorry aunty', saying this Raj pulled Vaishali's hand n both came outside the mall n seated in the car.

'Kya Raj aaj tumahri wajah se mujhe kitni baate sunni padi.' Vishu said.

'Yaar mai kya karoon, mujh se control hi nahi ho raha tha?' he said making a cute face.

'Accha ab chalo bhi.' She said.

'Kahan ghar?' saying this he winked her.

'Nahi pass k doosre mall me,' she said giving him a sharp look. 'Aur haan wahan mujhe chain se shopping karne dena.'

'Maine to socha that um ghar chal kar pyaar karne ko kahogi.'he made a puppy face.

'Romance k alawa aur bhi kuch soojhta hai tumhe.' She said.

'Kya karoon yaar , itni sweet aur hot biwi ho jis ki us ko aur kya soojhega bhi.' Saying this they left for another mall.

Raj k hothon par ek cute se smile aa gayi thi ye saari baatein yaad kar k par tabhi us ka dhyan Naina ki ek awaz ne tod diya, 'Raj''..office nahi jaana hai kya late ho raha hai office k liye.'

Raj gave a look to his watch n found that he was late so almost he ran from there. When Naina came there she found him nowhere, 'Are kahan chala gaya itni jaldi?' and by the window of her room she found his car going out.

'Lo apna tiffin bhi nahi le gaye ab mai kya karoon?' she started thinking, par sochte sochte dimaag hi hai na kahin aur chala jaata hai.

'Aap yahan khade hain motionless style me aur aap ko pata hai ki aap ki wajah se meri bus choot gayi ab mai college kaise jaoongi.' She was fuming now.

But no reply from Raj.

'Offo, kya pagal aadmi hai ye, mujhe bhi kya padi thi samajseva karne ki ab jhelo.' She cursed herself. 'Ab mai kya karoon?'

Raj to abhi aise hi khada tha is baat se anjaan ki kuch hi palo me kya hone waala hai us k saath.

Hello friends mujhe lagta hai ki ab kaafi had tak aap sab ki kai saari confusions door ho gayi hongi.

So pls reply soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
I read the update..But to tell u the truth i didn't understand it properly...I mean Naina n Vishu were twins den how come Raj married Vishu when he was falling for Naina in the bus-stop...
If Vishu is no more dan why did Naina married Raj???????😕😕
Abt the update it was brilliant as usual...👏👏👏
Do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
thks for the pm
nice part
update sooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fabulous part.....................very nice1👏


also interesting1
Edited by fanatic 21 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Vertika
What should I comment on the update yaar. It was as usual awesome and mindblowing. But I still couldn't make out the story between Raj, Naina and Vaishali. Please yaar clear up the confusions as soon as possible. Keep up the good work.
With Lots of Love
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Frist of all thanks for the wonderfull story.... i know u just started .... i am sure it will be mindblooving .............
i think i got the story..
Vaishali was Raj wife.. and somethink happend to her and she died .. than Raj meets Naina .. .........
Naina and Vaishali are look same.. thats way when Raj met Naina first time he become dreamey 😍(i might be worring ).............
i don't know why Raj and Naina got Married ... thats only you can tell us........ waiting for more............................. fabulous parts ,,,, can't wait to read more👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi

I read the update..But to tell u the truth i didn't understand it properly...I mean Naina n Vishu were twins den how come Raj married Vishu when he was falling for Naina in the bus-stop...
If Vishu is no more dan why did Naina married Raj???????😕😕
Abt the update it was brilliant as usual...👏👏👏
Do update soon

Hello Suhana,😊😊
Haan mai jaanti hoon ki story ko le kar abhi kuch aur confusions hain 😕😕aur vo next part me khatam ho jaayengi😛😛. U r right ki Vishu aur Naina twins hain 😉😉par kab kaise Vishu ki shaadi hue Raj se ye aage pata chal jaayega. Naina se Raj pyaar karta tha ye bhi sahi hai.😃😃
Next part me sab clear ho jaayega.😊😊
Thanks for reply dear.

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