Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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Rituka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

update was fantastic
i loved it
update soon.............

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Update was brilliant👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼..how come u have such brilliant ideas cooking in your mind😛😛😛..The way this story is progressing i wish dis cud happen in the serial then Rajiv won't have left it in between..😍.. Now abt the update Rajveer is truely n madly in love with Naina n he is busy romancing her in the middle of the meeting😉😉😉..Naina is having a tough time in keeping Raj away from her n madam is busy kissing him..😉😉😉But how its not her fault..How can u ever stay from a hubby like Raj..i liked dat bet between Rajveer n Naina ..It was a big challenge for both of dem...😎

Orderly Jai was Rajveer my god he duisguised himself again..This guy is indeed a mastermind...🤗..Naina is fooling Major Nair n he is getting trapped..So all the final year cadets r in delhi along with those villains...

Naina's plan to celebrate Rajveer's birthday was too gud😆😆😆..She was helped by Sameera..Its gud to see dat Rajveer was surprised..

Alekh n Sameera r in love??????..I like Rajveer singong n dancing happily..

Do update soon😊😊

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arwa

@awaazilicious

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Thank you very much sweta2005 and rituka7 for your lovely comments.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Update was brilliant👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼..how come u have such brilliant ideas cooking in your mind😛😛😛..The way this story is progressing i wish dis cud happen in the serial then Rajiv won't have left it in between..😍.. Now abt the update Rajveer is truely n madly in love with Naina n he is busy romancing her in the middle of the meeting😉😉😉..Naina is having a tough time in keeping Raj away from her n madam is busy kissing him..😉😉😉But how its not her fault..How can u ever stay from a hubby like Raj..i liked dat bet between Rajveer n Naina ..It was a big challenge for both of dem...😎
Orderly Jai was Rajveer my god he duisguised himself again..This guy is indeed a mastermind...🤗..Naina is fooling Major Nair n he is getting trapped..So all the final year cadets r in delhi along with those villains...

Naina's plan to celebrate Rajveer's birthday was too gud😆😆😆..She was helped by Sameera..Its gud to see dat Rajveer was surprised..

Alekh n Sameera r in love??????..I like Rajveer singong n dancing happily..

Do update soon😊😊

hey thanks a lot.

I dont know how they come but as I go along they just pop up and I use it. Hmmm perhaps he wouldn't have had.

yep Rajveer is definitely lost in love and can't stay away from Naina. ANd vice versa as you're right no one would be able to keep away from Raj and here he is all hers.

Mastermind he certainly is and now there wil lbe more fun and cation coming up.

Make sure u catch the next part.

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388456

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hi......i am a new member but i have been following dis fanfic 4 quite sumtime😊........i must compliment u by saying that u have a amazing writing style......its like watching an episode on TV.......its just fantabulous......though i have not read dis fic 4rm(i guess u have been writing 4 a year) the starting since school work doesn't permit me to do that.....yet i have got a gist of it.....however i would request u to make a small precap summary so that it could become a little more clearer.........till that time i would move on wid ur updates and relish the experiance...........😛......and i would even like to make a few friends on the forum.......😛.......take care...

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-PoisonIvy-

@-PoisonIvy-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

excellent update!

will leave a comment in a while :D :D

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

wohooooooooooooo .... the update is simply superb....................

amazing one so beautifully depicted and i am really awestruck with your
writing skills....

I can imagine every line of it... so amazingly written that all the adjectives in the dictionary will not be sufficient to praise the update......

wowwwwwwww.... juss wow........... I mean I am not able express it in words properly.........

the way it started with naina rushing into bhargav....... tRajveer and naina small love gestures in the meeting .........beautiful love scene between raj and Naina when he is leaving.......and then orderly jai .. entrance...he being raj himself........

rajveer surrise birthday part.................
everything is so wonderful........................

u ROCK.

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee... do update soon... cant wait any longer or the next update..........................................

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aarthi

@aarsow

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

mind blowin n excelent,

i'm realy stuned with u'r update keepin my fingers crossed,

realy mind blowin,hats of 2 u,

Aarthi

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

just tooooo goood........romantic wid thrilling effect.......

d way u rn part wen raj was leaving n den dat bet n den him becoming jai........really hats off to u.....

also dos in btwn lines in hindi wer awesome.....

truely a wonderful part👏👏

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Riya

@Riya_16

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Hello!! Arwa!!
Once again a rocking update...I should say.....👏
Very interesting and romantic.....
Awesome!!! beautifully written dear...👍🏼
Loved the way Raj disguised himself....
Continue soon...
Take care.

love
Riya😊

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