Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 5

Thanks for informing me about the update.😊

Before commenting on this part I want to clear a doubt …you in the last update mentioned a name "Reporter Raju"…so who's this Raju as Raj mentioned in the last part during the conversation with his "daddy hot" ?

Now this part….what to say.. again a nice update…and all the updates of this month should be perfect..isn't it?😳😳

Nice welcome of father-in-law by Naina and moreover see the time ……she was totally occupied by thoughts of romantic moments and right then she bumped with her hot hot minded father-in-law.👏😆

Another doubt I have…what Naina was doing there in that meeting?? Why she was a part of that meeting? Moreover BC anymore has any power? If yes then why did bhargav say that I'm the boss and how he could talk to a officer (Raj) like this way.. "Awww don't worry sonny boy, daddy here has taken care of everything. i won't just let you go just like that. You're too precious for me." Bharghav continued ???😕

Now Raj..yaar shaadi ke baad toh yeh bigarh gaya…kya hai…meeting ke time pe bhi he continued romancing with her!!!! Ufff he has partially become R2 for sure😛

"Naina tumhaaree naina me, me kabhi bhi yeh aasoo nahi dekhna chahta."…..best dialogue 👏

Aww what a nice bet…n cute too …but I don't agree that Naina lost that bet it was Raj who lost it…he dragged her into the store room ….Naina why did u admit that u lost it…stupid.. 😊😉

Raj…how can one be so cute with excellent intelligence….he put Jai in his custody and disguised as Jai…awesome…👏👏⭐️

Surprise Birthday Party!! How sweet of Naina….really Raj is also very lucky..❤️😳😳

Wow Naina ko red dress mein dekhke Raj ke toh hosh hi urdh gaye….hahaha😆😆

"Let me show you." he pulled her closer to him and hence began their session of drugging kisses. He was simply Rajveer right then, no mask no dual identity. He wasn't R2 and definitely not Orderly Jai. …….lovely end of this part…welldone awra…⭐️

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Originally posted by: aarsow

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Aarthi

Originally posted by: diya7000

Thanks for informing me about the update.😊 - you're welcome dear

Before commenting on this part I want to clear a doubt 'you in the last update mentioned a name 'Reporter Raju''so who's this Raju as Raj mentioned in the last part during the conversation with his 'daddy hot' ? - heheeh this name is just used for people who know everything and always go and inform it. He was just being sarcastic here.

Now this part'.what to say.. again a nice update'and all the updates of this month should be perfect..isn't it?😳😳 - thanks and yeh i guess they should be

Nice welcome of father-in-law by Naina and moreover see the time ''she was totally occupied by thoughts of romantic moments and right then she bumped with her hot hot minded father-in-law.👏😆 - hehehe I like the way you've phrased it as it sounds much better then I've written it.

Another doubt I have'what Naina was doing there in that meeting?? Why she was a part of that meeting? Moreover BC anymore has any power? If yes then why did bhargav say that I'm the boss and how he could talk to a officer (Raj) like this way.. "Awww don't worry sonny boy, daddy here has taken care of everything. i won't just let you go just like that. You're too precious for me." Bharghav continued ???😕 - well Naina is also involved in their team now remember how she told Bharghav before how he needs her. In their gang Bharghav is the main guy and has overpowered BC. The ranks dont matter here. And to him Raj is R2 who isnt an officer and is a petty thief so Bharghav has power over him too. I hope that clears it for u.

Now Raj..yaar shaadi ke baad toh yeh bigarh gaya'kya hai'meeting ke time pe bhi he continued romancing with her!!!! Ufff he has partially become R2 for sure😛 - yeh he certainly has.

"Naina tumhaaree naina me, me kabhi bhi yeh aasoo nahi dekhna chahta."'..best dialogue 👏 - thank you. This was just a coincidental dialogue and i'm glad it clicked.

Aww what a nice bet'n cute too 'but I don't agree that Naina lost that bet it was Raj who lost it'he dragged her into the store room '.Naina why did u admit that u lost it'stupid.. 😊😉 - in a way both of them lost it as they both missed each other.

Raj'how can one be so cute with excellent intelligence'.he put Jai in his custody and disguised as Jai'awesome'👏👏⭐️ - he is just the best

Surprise Birthday Party!! How sweet of Naina'.really Raj is also very lucky..❤️😳😳 - he sure is

Wow Naina ko red dress mein dekhke Raj ke toh hosh hi urdh gaye'.hahaha😆😆 - he saw a new side of her thats why

"Let me show you." he pulled her closer to him and hence began their session of drugging kisses. He was simply Rajveer right then, no mask no dual identity. He wasn't R2 and definitely not Orderly Jai. ''.lovely end of this part'welldone awra'⭐️ - thanks alot for appreciating this part so much.

First of all i m soooooooo sorry for late reply....

excellent👏.cont soon......

Originally posted by: srojaleen

First of all i m soooooooo sorry for late reply....

LOST is one of my most fav.fic...& i wrote that.....

i read ur ud & was just toooooooo good that i don't have words to explain my feelings abt ud.

cont. soon & i'll try my best that i reply in time.