Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 2

Originally posted by: feedback

that was amazing!!! wow thank you so much for updating. will wait for the next part :)

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Thanx for informing dear....Update was mindblowing as usual..U r back with a bang,..👏.....

So the mystery behind the hidden camera is solved...Raj is very intelligent indeed..Huda was so correct...

I really loved this conversation between R2 n Maj. Bhargava..The way they talked with each other was too hilarious..

Naina is always angry on Raj but wat else she can do????????with such a cute hubby on your side u obviously want all his attention..n dis can b the best strategy (show your anger n he'll follow u😉)But Raj is no less he made Naina follow him..Good going..Alekhh's timing is really very bad but Raj is so open with Alekh ..I just cant believe dat he is same shy Rajveer who was so apprehensive in accepting dat he loved Naina n now he is loving her openly..😆 Just love dis side of his personality...I loved their romantic scenes...They were really intense...

I loved this scene where spider was approaching dem

"He turned around and got a fright too. "Aaaaaaaaah!" he stood up immediately followed by Naina. In front of them was a huge tarantula spider and it was freaking both of them out. they were army officers who fought big bad terrorists but here were afraid of a spider. "My God." he clung onto Naina like a small child.

"Do something, throw it away, or something." Naina was equally afraid and wanted Rajveer to do something. "Oh it's moving." Both of them stood there watching it and just when it began moving towards them they both shreiked, "Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!" and both ran away from there escaping the horrible animal as if they were being attacked. "Do something its following us!" Naina kept screaming as she ran forward not knowing where she was going. It wasn't important they just had to escape.

"What shall I do, it's going to come and eat me otherwise." Rajveer also had become hysterical and it just turned into a comical state. No one looking at them would think they were in the army but would see them as two innocent teenagers. "Naina, Naina bachao!" he could feel the spider had climbed up his leg now. this was horrendous and he tried kicking it off but it was climbing up slowly. He bumped into her and when she saw the spider she shreiked even louder. instead of helping him she ran away from it. "Naina! hey wait! throw this thing off! Help! somebody help!" he couldn't think of what to do and he acted as if he was going to die soon."Real fun

So now the real action start when Bhargav will b coming to the academy where he'll face a totally new side of Rajveer...👏

Do update soon 😛

Originally posted by: litika

that was a really good update....it was ful of everythin love, comedy everything....cant wait till the next part👍🏼

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey Arwa..... im completely loved the part!!!!

and waiitng for u to complete it...

Naina is behaving like a kid....... but i cant realli blame her... how many women can tolerate their man being smooched by sumone else..... and keep quiet about it... nd tht sonia.... i can even say anything about her... she is such a......beep beep beep.......

liked the sequence between rajveer huda and aalekh where raj tells huda that he understand naina...

bhargav cmin back... wonder what he'll tell them to do now.... tht ma n comes like a hurricane..... but i hope our raj finally wraps up his story!!!!!

loved Raj-Naina romance.... par yeh dil maange more.... the spider thing was so funny.... my mom too says things like... look at ur size and look at its size... the spider shld get scared of u... but its always the opposite.... continue soon... coz u rock!!!

Cheers,

Deeya

Originally posted by: aarsow

wooooow this is the best part,

RN were juz amazin,funny n lovely cute romantic couple,

u'r dialogues r rockin,hats of 2 u,

it was realy awesum,awesum,awesum n super,

waitn 4 the next part.

Arwa hip hip hurray,



Aarthi

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
update soon long asap..........

Originally posted by: diya7000

Thank you so much for notifying me about the update..vaise agar tum na bhi karti to main dhund hi leti iss new thread ko 😃 - yeh I know u wud have.

How do u do this everytime??You r just too good yaar...what an update this was....there was romance comedy ....means every masala!!!......I'm again out of adjectives to appreciate your work...👏⭐️ - thanks a lot but I only try to do my best and u make it a hit for me.

Ohh this huda...kitna besharam hai..ya okay even if Raj n Naina weren't doing anything like that! but still huda was not ready to move from there!!..gosh!!!🤣- besharam hee hai or budhhu bhi.

he made a sheepish sly look knowing how much he would have to pay later but right then he had no choice. .........bechara Raj...kitna darta hai Naina se 😛 - hehehehe one person he is afraid of as Aalekh had made the decision remember.

Haha Naina stomped on Raj's foot....!!.... - ouch he was out of line there so she was boudn to get angry.

Both Aalekh and Huda didn't know whether to find it amusing or shocking so didn't react at all. ....😃

Alekh he is soo smart...he understood that Raj wanted them to follow him and also the fact that there are hidden cameras in Raj's room...cool .. huda sikhoo kuch isse.... - he certainly is as he has been trained by the best. Huda needs to learn a lot.

"But how come it's safe in here?" Aalekh was confused. ....thx Alekh..ifact I was also confused...thx for raising the question😛

"Because mister genius here," Rajveer pointed to himself, "cut the wire. I needed one place atleast to myself." ....hmmmmmmmmm no one can be smarter than Raj😳 - no doubt in that.

Uff huda will be huda all d time...why doesn't he stop himself from commenting about Naina!!..anyways Raj made him speechless...good - somebody had to put him in line.

After hearing that Rajveer bit his tongue, "dekha, is Naina ke chakkar me sab kuch bhool gaya me. Have to keep her under control and disciplined." Both Aalekh and Huda couldn't help but laugh at his remark as they found it too new to hear him talking about Naina so personally. ...hahahaha wat joke...Raj Naina ko control karega....hehe...well Raj keep on trying.. - he has to try otherwise lots of things could be at stake.

The conversation of son n dad was awesome.....cool son hot daddy..😉....nice combination - thank you it certainly is a god combination

Soniaaaaaaa....argh I'll kill you...you...***** - hey dont worry Naina hai na oske liye.

Due to the rain it had become really muddy and many parts had become quite slippery but that was not going to stop her....Naina's foot slipped over the slippery muddy edge but she was luckily saved by a strong firm arm. ........awwww you know I was expecting exactly this...😳😳 - your wish got granted my dear

Rajveer stood there staring at her wet face with some of her hair tendrils falling on her cheeks. It gave her the sultry look which aroused him and if he wasn't standing on the grounds of KMA then he would have whisked her away right at that moment and would have shown her how much he loves her. She also stared back at him scooped down in his arms as if she couldn't look away. His wet locks were just playing a havoc on her emotions. Why did he have to always look so desirable? Then she remembered what happened yesterday and came back to her senses and then pushed him away. nainaaaaa kyuun itna gussa hoti ho yaar....😛 - ghussa hona oskee khundli me jo hai

Uff yeh dono jab jhagarte bhi hain tab bhi kitna cute lagte hain....😳😳 - the cutest couple ever

Really both Raj n Naina are really lucky ...very well said Alekh😊 - only he can make her understand just like he had done in the beginning

"Rajveer mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai."

"Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai." he struggled to talk as he clung onto a tree branch, barely holding both of them.

"Pehle mujhe kehne do."

"Nahi Naina, pehle mujhe kehne do." he pleaded as if it was a matter of life and death.

"Agar maine nahi kaha to phir dair hojaaehgee."

"agar maine abhi nahi kaha to phir hum dono kabhi kuch nahi kehpaaenge." she gave him a quizzical look as she didn't understand."What are you saying Rajveer?"

"Ha, jis pair se hum dono latke hai wo gaaaaaaaaayyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!" as he finished the branch broke and both of them fell down the land slide. It felt as if being in a rapid water slide with no end. ..................................coool conversation...haha - thank you once again

The water and the wet bodies were just setting the perfect mood and Rajveer had successfully reached her lips when Aalekh began shouting.

"Naina! Rajveer Sir! Naina!" He had reached the top of the hill after both of them fell and was trying to find them but he couldn't see below at the pool. "Rajveer sir! Naina!"

Rajveer grit his teeth together, "saale kee timing hamesha ghalat hoti hai."

"Rajveer!" she was surprised by his expression and he just gave her a 'what' look. ...................................................🤣.......................poor Raj.......sach mein Alekh bhi na!! timing iski hamesha galat hi hoti hai................. - ab isme kiska fault hai u decide

"We're fine Aalekh and I think the help cadet Singh here needs can only be provided by me." he smirked hoping Aalekh would get the hint. ...............hehe situation ne Raj ko bhi besharam bana diya...😳😃😆 - ab kya kare R2 ka kuch ziada hee asar hogaya hai

He also got lost in her seductive eyes and at that moment she was too tempting to resist and to let go. He carressed her face with his cold wet fingers which just made it even harder for her. She closed her eyes. He continued rubbing her lips with his thumbs and then he bent down lower and devoured her lips with his. At first he was gentle as usual but this time it was her who took the initiative and pulled him closer to her and deepened the kiss and dug deeper. she held onto his hair tight and continued kissing him, not letting him go as if she was afraid of loosing him. Was it love or possessiveness? she didn't care as at that moment she was drugged on his kisses.

He came apart and breathed heavily still staring at her. He could clearly see in her eyes that she wanted more and he was ready to give her more. He laid kisses on the side of her neck and bit lightly on her collar blade whilst his hands swiftly and naturally moved towards the buttons of her uniform and began unbuttoning them. .... ..................😳......................................................aham ahammmmmmmm..... - hehehe itna mat sharmao warna aage ka kese parogee

Naina was completely involved in the moment and her eyes were closed but she opened them up for a minute and they became wide with shock. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Rajveer stopped and quickly got off her to see what was the matter. "What? Did I bite too hard?" .....................kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....I was soooooooooooooooooo very much excited.................yaar....iss tarantula kooooo baygon spray karke marrooo......... - aaaww i know saaree umeedo pe paanio phirgaya

"What shall I do, it's going to come and eat me otherwise." ..................are they really army ppl!!! hahaha......ek spider se dar gaye dono......but it was really funny.🤣 - well they just got cuaght up in the moment and forgot who they were and became small kids.

I'm not saying it would have been wrong as making love to you would be the best thing ever in this world. that's why I want to make the world worthwhile for that experience." .....theek hai theek hai.........but tab kuch to karna chahyiye tha na.....me was soo excited even much more than them......hehe..main bhi kitna besharam ho gayi huunn.........but all fault is of their awesome chemistry...n of yours too coz you create such passionate scenes..........ke me expect more n more... - hmmm don't worry there will be more and nexttime u might not get disappointed. passionate scenes are not easy to write. 😉 they're only easier to see.

"Relax sweetheart, you're freaking out right now. Come on itne haseen moke ko yu hi khona chahtee ho." he tried pulling her closer to him and wanted to continue romancing with her but she was not in the mood anymore. .........jab kuch karna hota hai tab this is not d right time bolta hai.........now he doesn't want this moment to pass by!!! stupid....but yet sooo charming - he is a sweet budhu, Naina's buddhu

Pls pls update soonnn.......n pls don't get bore of such a long rly... - yeh I'll updt soon and no u dont bore me with long replies, i luv to read them and comemnt back on them

Originally posted by: fanatic21

FIRSTLY THNX FOR UPDATIN.......

SECONDLY IT WAS A ROCKING UPDATE.........

RN WER FABULOUS,CUTE YET ROMANTIC.......

CONVO BTWN BHARGAV N R2 WAS MINDBLOWING ....TOTALLY LOVED IT........😉

GOOD DIALOUGES AS WELL

IN ALL WAS A AWESOME UPDT....👏

Originally posted by: crackpots86

hey arwa thnx for informing me abt d update....it was wesome n it had everything wat is expected frm dis fic.....hope to get d next update soon....

Luv,

Dhara.

oooooh it was soooo romantic 😳 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: diya7000

Thank you so much for notifying me about the update..vaise agar tum na bhi karti to main dhund hi leti iss new thread ko 😃

How do u do this everytime??You r just too good yaar...what an update this was....there was romance comedy ....means every masala!!!......I'm again out of adjectives to appreciate your work...👏⭐️

Ohh this huda...kitna besharam hai..ya okay even if Raj n Naina weren't doing anything like that! but still huda was not ready to move from there!!..gosh!!!🤣

he made a sheepish sly look knowing how much he would have to pay later but right then he had no choice. .........bechara Raj...kitna darta hai Naina se 😛

Haha Naina stomped on Raj's foot....!!....

Both Aalekh and Huda didn't know whether to find it amusing or shocking so didn't react at all. ....😃

Alekh he is soo smart...he understood that Raj wanted them to follow him and also the fact that there are hidden cameras in Raj's room...cool .. huda sikhoo kuch isse....

"But how come it's safe in here?" Aalekh was confused. ....thx Alekh..ifact I was also confused...thx for raising the question😛

"Because mister genius here," Rajveer pointed to himself, "cut the wire. I needed one place atleast to myself." ....hmmmmmmmmm no one can be smarter than Raj😳

Uff huda will be huda all d time...why doesn't he stop himself from commenting about Naina!!..anyways Raj made him speechless...good

After hearing that Rajveer bit his tongue, "dekha, is Naina ke chakkar me sab kuch bhool gaya me. Have to keep her under control and disciplined." Both Aalekh and Huda couldn't help but laugh at his remark as they found it too new to hear him talking about Naina so personally. ...hahahaha wat joke...Raj Naina ko control karega....hehe...well Raj keep on trying..

The conversation of son n dad was awesome.....cool son hot daddy..😉....nice combination

Soniaaaaaaa....argh I'll kill you...you...*****

Due to the rain it had become really muddy and many parts had become quite slippery but that was not going to stop her....Naina's foot slipped over the slippery muddy edge but she was luckily saved by a strong firm arm. ........awwww you know I was expecting exactly this...😳😳

Rajveer stood there staring at her wet face with some of her hair tendrils falling on her cheeks. It gave her the sultry look which aroused him and if he wasn't standing on the grounds of KMA then he would have whisked her away right at that moment and would have shown her how much he loves her. She also stared back at him scooped down in his arms as if she couldn't look away. His wet locks were just playing a havoc on her emotions. Why did he have to always look so desirable? Then she remembered what happened yesterday and came back to her senses and then pushed him away. nainaaaaa kyuun itna gussa hoti ho yaar....😛

Uff yeh dono jab jhagarte bhi hain tab bhi kitna cute lagte hain....😳😳

Really both Raj n Naina are really lucky ...very well said Alekh😊

"Rajveer mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai."

"Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai." he struggled to talk as he clung onto a tree branch, barely holding both of them.

"Pehle mujhe kehne do."

"Nahi Naina, pehle mujhe kehne do." he pleaded as if it was a matter of life and death.

"Agar maine nahi kaha to phir dair hojaaehgee."

"agar maine abhi nahi kaha to phir hum dono kabhi kuch nahi kehpaaenge." she gave him a quizzical look as she didn't understand."What are you saying Rajveer?"

"Ha, jis pair se hum dono latke hai wo gaaaaaaaaayyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!" as he finished the branch broke and both of them fell down the land slide. It felt as if being in a rapid water slide with no end. ..................................coool conversation...haha

The water and the wet bodies were just setting the perfect mood and Rajveer had successfully reached her lips when Aalekh began shouting.

"Naina! Rajveer Sir! Naina!" He had reached the top of the hill after both of them fell and was trying to find them but he couldn't see below at the pool. "Rajveer sir! Naina!"

Rajveer grit his teeth together, "saale kee timing hamesha ghalat hoti hai."

"Rajveer!" she was surprised by his expression and he just gave her a 'what' look. ...................................................🤣.......................poor Raj.......sach mein Alekh bhi na!! timing iski hamesha galat hi hoti hai.................

"We're fine Aalekh and I think the help cadet Singh here needs can only be provided by me." he smirked hoping Aalekh would get the hint. ...............hehe situation ne Raj ko bhi besharam bana diya...😳😃😆

He also got lost in her seductive eyes and at that moment she was too tempting to resist and to let go. He carressed her face with his cold wet fingers which just made it even harder for her. She closed her eyes. He continued rubbing her lips with his thumbs and then he bent down lower and devoured her lips with his. At first he was gentle as usual but this time it was her who took the initiative and pulled him closer to her and deepened the kiss and dug deeper. she held onto his hair tight and continued kissing him, not letting him go as if she was afraid of loosing him. Was it love or possessiveness? she didn't care as at that moment she was drugged on his kisses.

He came apart and breathed heavily still staring at her. He could clearly see in her eyes that she wanted more and he was ready to give her more. He laid kisses on the side of her neck and bit lightly on her collar blade whilst his hands swiftly and naturally moved towards the buttons of her uniform and began unbuttoning them. .... ..................😳......................................................aham ahammmmmmmm.....

Naina was completely involved in the moment and her eyes were closed but she opened them up for a minute and they became wide with shock. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Rajveer stopped and quickly got off her to see what was the matter. "What? Did I bite too hard?" .....................kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....I was soooooooooooooooooo very much excited.................yaar....iss tarantula kooooo baygon spray karke marrooo.........

"What shall I do, it's going to come and eat me otherwise." ..................are they really army ppl!!! hahaha......ek spider se dar gaye dono......but it was really funny.🤣

I'm not saying it would have been wrong as making love to you would be the best thing ever in this world. that's why I want to make the world worthwhile for that experience." .....theek hai theek hai.........but tab kuch to karna chahyiye tha na.....me was soo excited even much more than them......hehe..main bhi kitna besharam ho gayi huunn.........but all fault is of their awesome chemistry...n of yours too coz you create such passionate scenes..........ke me expect more n more...

"Relax sweetheart, you're freaking out right now. Come on itne haseen moke ko yu hi khona chahtee ho." he tried pulling her closer to him and wanted to continue romancing with her but she was not in the mood anymore. .........jab kuch karna hota hai tab this is not d right time bolta hai.........now he doesn't want this moment to pass by!!! stupid....but yet sooo charming

Pls pls update soonnn.......n pls don't get bore of such a long rly...

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

oooooh it was soooo romantic 😳 😳 😳 😳 - thanks a lot

I loved Alekh and huda's reaction in the beginning. hilarious 😆 - im glad u found it so funny

the confession and apology thing bw RN was damn cute. Didnt the same happen in an Abh-Ash film, Kuch na kaho? - hmmm perhaps it was similar but not entirely like it.

the pond scene, cave scene, haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😳 😳 😳 - well romance was in the air

oh damn, why the hell is Raj so ethical 😡 😆 😆 - yeh he is a gnetleman thats why

stupid spider he ruined everything for them (and us) 😉 😆 - hehehe per maza to aaya na

just one thing- i really wish Naina tells off tht stupid woman Sonia, shes getting more n more on my nerves now! she shud punch her in her face now, its high time!!! - yeh she'll be taking care of her very soon.

please update soon, loved this part, will wait for the nxt one 😊