HUMTUM (a RagVir story)..FF..Pts 31,32..Uptd..Pg56

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Heyy... A new reader here!! I just ead all 13 parts in one time... i love your story so much i was smiling throughout it all... i really wish that some of this happened/happens in the show!!! ould u plzzz PM me when u update.....

Quote

Pratima A

@Soulink

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Hey I din't know that there were such great talented writers on this forum!!!👏

Wow!!Awesome!!!!What r u doing here?U shud be writing serial shows !!!Ekta Kapoor shud be firing her own show writers and get people like u to write down plays!!SUPER DUPER HIT!!!With such creative minds as urs & the others I've read too....there will be definitely series of commercial hits for indian shows!!I wish the producers & directors of serials wud think in the same lines!!

Actually ur story is way way better...tho' I still like the Bidaai kahani ab tak...But U rock!!!😉👏👏

Keep up the great work!!!I can't wait for the next part...u've got me hooked as the rest over here!!😆😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shagun

@sweet_shagun

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Awwww cho cute and beautiful loved it simply loved reading it!!

Luv,

Shagun

Quote

vasundhara

@dharaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

awwww it was sooo cute😳
hats off to ur imagnation👏...... well i think few writers like shud start a serial it wud b a gr8 hit n we will get 2 c all dese lovely moments...

waiting 4 ur nxt update...write soon

*~VASUNDHARA~*

Quote

**KANK**

@**KANK**

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

aawwwwww !!!!!

This is why i luv ur ff.....u keep away all the tears and show love.😉

Excellent part.👏

Quote

starz4me

@starz4me

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: alwayzBmine

you put great thought in the sweet moments between ragvir.
i hope our ragvir in the show also share some sweet moments like this with each other.
i'm too depressed after reading the thursday preview.
but ur ff atleast is kind of relaxing, and exciting.
loved this part.👏

thanks hun.

Even i'm sad after reading the preview for thurs......i was infact looking forward for some good RagVir scenes.....But i think this seperation period is gonna be longer than i thought.

Anyways lets hope for good.😊