The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
First of all a biggggggggg Sorryyyyyyyyy for the late reply but what can I do I was a bit busy. I read ur part just now and liked the part very much. Introduction of new character was good and a very naughty one indeed. I can clearly understand the mischief which is cooking in her mind. Loved the part seriously. Do update soon and keep up the good work.
With Lots of Wishes and Love
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
update was rocking
too good
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Vertika ji.......

Waah Kya update diya hai !!!👏👏👏 Naina toh jwellary shop ki dukan lagegi yaar 😉 but anyways un jevaron ki wajah se kam se kam hamare Raj ko thoda romance ka mauka toh mila kyun ! 😳
waise Neha madam bhi kuch kaam nahi hai....she's soo mischivious n i can very well guess what she gonna ask Raj😳

Laage raho Neha madam.....warna hamare Cute couple ka kuch nahi hone wala.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
I hues raj gona carry her...RN scenes are so cute...plz cont
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina was mesmerized by the beauty of the bungalow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Seems like she loves her new home already!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Naina's grihapravesh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Raj's room is very beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is worrying about the day Naina will know the truth and rightly too!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔He is missing Navin!!! Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina is right ke agar aaj Navin hota toh zaroor bahut khush hota!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj reassuring Naina was very sweet and when he placed his hand on hers it sent a current through their bodies!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Magar Raj ne realise kiya toh chhod diya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina jewellery try kar rahi thi toh Raj usse dekh raha tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳How cute!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

When Raj helped her to remove her necklace she shivered with his touch and Raj also realised it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ko bhi accha mauka mil gaya Naina ke saath romance karne ka!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I loved bhabhi-nanad talk!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Neha is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina toh bahut sharma rahi hai aur Neha usse tease kar rahi hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Neha zaroor kuch shaitani plan kar rahi hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Maybe she will ask Raj to carry Naina to his room!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey amazing it's so beautiful dear. 👏
Vaise mujhe Ekta k serial k caste kuch jyada acche nahi lagte par it's ur choice.
Dimple is just ok not so good.😕
Raj aur Naina k beech me sharmaane ka silsila jaari hai vow.😳
Neha Raj ki cousin hai good aur bahut shaitaan bhi i hope vo hi Raj aur Naina ko paas laane k liye karegi kuch.😉
Naina itni saari jwelery dekh kar pareshaan hai ki handel kaise karegi sab? Par Raj hai na us k saath.😆
Naina ko mehndi lag rahi hai so sweet.😛
Hath me lagi hi thi pair me bhi lag gayi.
Ab Naina ko Raj ko god me hi utha kar le jaana padega i hope.😉
well update asap.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIIIIIIII VARTIKA............
HOPE UR FINE DEAR............
THE UD WAS..............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME.................
SUPERB.............
ROCKING................
WONDERFUL.............
AMAZING..............
JUST TOO GOOD..............
TAKE CARE.............
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!!Vertika!!
I am very sorry for being late...aaj kal IF aane ka mauka hi nahi milta...
I am sorry.....
but the update was tooo dood....
Awesome....it's soo romantic....
loved it....
Neha is really sweet....
thanks for the rocking update....
continue soon..
take care.



love
Riya.


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Posted: 16 years ago

hey

sooooo sorry for the late reply.....

the update was great.....raj and naina have come home and raj's mom does their griha-pravesh.....in a traditional manner....naina surprised to see how big raj's home is....

Raj's mom keeps giving naina all the jewelry and she is overwhelmed by all this and wonders how she will all of these safe....loved the way in which raj reassured her that they will manage everything she should not worry about it...

And Neha is just very cute....he does not miss a chance to tease our couple.....

please update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Update was really gud..👏...So Naina 's parents r also shifting along with her..Vaise bhi no1 is dere for dem except Naina...

Haan aur akele Naina ab apne father ki dekh bhaal nahi kar paayegi na.
Wow kitna accha description tha jab Raj ki Mom Naina ka welcome karti hain..
thanks dear.😳😳😳
Raj n Naina r remembering Navin..They both loved him dearly..
Kuch cheejen aise hoti hain na jab apno ki yaad sab se jyada aati hai.😭😭😭
Raj n Naina ki reception party hai..n Raj's mom has given so much jewellary to Naina..Woh bechari to gold mein hi chhup jaegi..😆
wahi soch kar to Naina bhi pareshaan hai na.😛😛😛
Raj is helping Naina in removing her jewellary..Gud way of romancing with your newly wedded wife.
accha tareeka hai na abhi Captain sahab seekh rahe hain bus.😆😆😆
Neha is Raj's cousin..cool..
Why is Naina blushing so much?????????😉
obvious baat hai Raj us ka pati hai na to blush to karegi hi na.😉😉😉
Do update soon n pls do inform abt the update

yeah darling whenever i will update, i will inform u.😊😊😊

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