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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: pritib0
HIIIIIIII VARTIKA............
HOPE UR FINE DEAR............

THE UD WAS..............

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME.................

SUPERB.............

ROCKING................

WONDERFUL.............

AMAZING..............

JUST TOO GOOD..............

TAKE CARE.............

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

hello Preeti n thank u so much.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Hello!!Vertika!!
I am very sorry for being late...aaj kal IF aane ka mauka hi nahi milta...
Hello Riya 😊 😊 😊 n no probs dear jab mauka mile tabhi aa kar reply kar dena.😛😛😛

I am sorry.....
but the update was tooo dood....

no sorry n thanks .😉😉😉

Awesome....it's soo romantic....
loved it....
Neha is really sweet....

yeah naughty n nice.😃😃😃

thanks for the rocking update....

ur welcome.😉😉😉

continue soon..
take care.

love
Riya.

just going to update sweety.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey

Hello Nisha darling.😊😊😊

sooooo sorry for the late reply.....

no probs.😛😛😛

the update was great.....raj and naina have come home and raj's mom does their griha-pravesh.....in a traditional manner....naina surprised to see how big raj's home is....

yeah vo first time aayi hai na yahan. 😃😃😃

Raj's mom keeps giving naina all the jewelry and she is overwhelmed by all this and wonders how she will all of these safe....loved the way in which raj reassured her that they will manage everything she should not worry about it...

Raj to Raj hi hai na vo sab kar sakta hai Naina k liye.😉😉😉

And Neha is just very cute....he does not miss a chance to tease our couple.....

accha hai kam se kam dono imaginray romance to kar lete hain na according to Neha.😆😆😆

please update soon.

just updating dear.😃😃😃

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

"Bhabhi ne mehndi laga rakhi hai paron aur hathon me jaisa ki aap dekh rahein hain."Neha said.

"Haan vo to mujhe dikh hi raha hai, fir?" he asked placing his both hands across his chest.

"Haan to aap ko ek chota sa kaam karna hai." She paused after saying it. She looked Naina and Raj one by one and said, "Aap ko nahi lagta hai ki is tarah se bhabhi to chal paayengi nahi. To aap aisa kariye ki bhabhi ko god me utha kar apne kamre tak le jaaiye." She said winking her bro.

"Kya???????? Tum sach me pagal ho aaj mujhe yakeen ho gaya." Raj said with a shocked face.

"Accha mai pagal hoon, sab k saamne uthane me sharam aa rahi hai aur pata nahi akele me kya kya karte ho." She said it without thinking that what she should say.

Raj and Naina blushed hard this time( jab ki dono kuch bhi nahi karte akele me phir bhi pata nahi kyoun itna blush karte hain.)but Raj managed to say, "Kabhi soch samjh kar bhi bolna bhi seekh le."

"Sahi kaha maine, jara si help kya karne ko keh di bhabhi ki to aap se ye bhi nahi kiya jaata hai." She said with fake anger and turned towards Naina, "Theek hai bhabhi aap yahin raho aaj; koi jaroorat nahi hai in k room me jaane ki aaj."

Naina gave a helpless look to Raj to which Raj smiled, "Theek hai mai jaa raha hoon apne room me." He said n left.

"Are ajeeb aadmi hai bhaiya bhi, ye to sahi me chale gaye." Neha said with astonishment.

Naina smiled only at it n went in Neha's room straight with her. They both were chatting for a long. Soon after talking for a while both dozed off.

Raj udhar aaya kisi kaam se us ne dekha ki Neha aur Naina dono hi so chuke hain. He smiled seeing Neha's naughty and cute face and then saw Naina sleeping peacefully. She was looking like an angle. An angle that has a magic in her smile which made Raj happy. He was watching her unblinkly. Suddenly he moved in Neha's room and he picked Naina in her arms without realizing that what he was doing.

Neha was watching this scene from corner of her eyes, she couldn't resist smiling her self at Raj's such act. Raj was bringing Naina to their room. Suddenly Naina's eyes opened with sudden jerk, she found herself in Raj's arm who was watching her face constantly. He blushed deep, Raj noticed this n still watching her they both reached to their room and Raj laid her on bed.

"Hai kya jodi hai bilkul Shahrukh aur Simran lagte hain na dono." A gal came to Neha while looking the pair admiringly.

"E Pooja dekh najar mat laga mere bhaiya aur bhabhi ko." Neha warned her.

"Hai meri itni himmat ki mai inne sode handset aur sim k beech aao." She said trying to show that she is terrified by Neha's warning.

They hugged each other and Pooja asked her, "Par ye bata sodiye ki apne Shahrukh ko itna changa handset kab aur kaise mil gaya?"

"Ye to pata nahi Pooja par kaash aisa hi koi mujhe bhi.........." she said with dreamy tone.

"Oye hoiye tu chinta mat kar sondiye tera handset bhi apne sim matlab tere jaisa hi milega." She said with a big grin on her face.

"Aur bata kya chal raha hai aaj kal?" she asked Pooja.

"Are mai to batana hi bhool gayi ki mera admission KMA me ho gaya hai aur kal hi mai jaa rahi hoon training par." Pooja told happily.

Tabhi ek postman aata hai andar aur Raj ka naam bulata hai. "Ek minute Pooja mai abhi aayi." Neha says n left.

Baatein karte karte waqt nikal gaya aur shaam ki tayyiari bhi poori ho chuki thi. Neha ko jo letter mila tha vo Raj k liye tha par Pooja se baat karte vo bhool hi gayi letter k bare me aur letter chod kar nikal gayi Naina k paas.

Raj nahi tha vahan jab vahan aayi Pooja aur Neha, " Vaah bhabhi, aap k pyaar ne bhaiya ko bilkul deewana kar rakha hai . Jab mai so gayi tab aaye aap ko lene jis se mai dekh nahi paao, par un ko kya pata mai tab jaag rahi thi." She said winking.

Again Naina blushed phir baatein karne lage sab, kuch der baad Mrs. Shekhawat aayi aur boli, "Beta ab taiyaar ho jaa jaldi se. Ye saari laayi hoon mai tere liye mujhe lagta hai ki ye saari bahut acchi lagegi tujh par." Saying this she handed over a wrapped packet to her and some jewelry boxes.

Later in that evening all were got ready quickly except Raj only he was left because he was busy in preparations.

"Beta jaa tu bhi ready ho jaa ab." His mom said.

"Bus jaa raha hoon maa, thoda ye dekhna hai." He was checking some food stuff.

"Tu jaa ab mai kisi aur ko laga deti hoon." His mom said n forcefully sends him in.

When he came to his room, he found Naina nowhere, he thought in his mind, "Are ye Naina kahan reh gaye?"

"Aap jis ko dhoondh rahe hain un ko hum ne aap se chipa kar kahin rakha hai aur jab tak aap dono ready nahi ho jaate aap bhabhi ko nahi mil sakte." Neha ne apne dono haath kamar par rakhte hue kaha.

He turned and saw his sweet littlie sis. He was unable to believe his own eyes that his sweet tom boy sis has become a perfect gal now. She wore light purple lehnga with golden embroidery over all along with full make up and matching jewelry. First time his sis seems him a sweet gal but he thought of a mischief and said making a poor face, "Aap kaun?"

"Kya bhiaya aap bhi na." she said blushing.

"Nahi maine aap ko pehchana nahi darasal." He replied making a face as if he was trying his best to recall that face.

"Bus kariye na bhaiya." She said.

"Are aap meri kaun se behan hain ye to bataiye." he said but thinking something thinking again, "accha apna naam hi bataiye mai koshish karoonga yaad karne ki." He made an attempt again.

"Bhaiya natak mat kariye mujhe pata hai aap mujhe bana rahe hain mai aap ki Neha hi hoon." She said smiling.

"Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai, vo to poori tarah ladka dikhti hai bus hai thodi se ladki kyounki ladkiyon ki tarah gussa humesha naak par rehta hai us k aur roti bhi bahut hai . Yahi do symptoms hain jo batate hain ki vo ladki hai varna............." he said but tab tak Neha ka paara chad gaya tha.

"Bhaiya mai aaj aap ko choodongi nahi aap ne mujhe ronu aur short tempered kaha na ab dekhiye." She ran to catch him but he was quicker he ran fast out of the room and when she came out he ran into the room and closed the door behind her.

"Kar lo darwaja bund bahar aaoge na kabhi tab mai bataoongi tum ko." Saying this she went from there in anger.

Raj smiled at her childish behavior and started getting himself ready.

After an hour guests started coming; Mr. and Mrs. Shekhawat were attending them. Naina's mom was very happy to see Naina that day happy, his father was seated on a chair near stage. He was not in condition to respond but it was clear from his eyes that he is happy for his daughter too.

"Beta Naina aur Raj ko neeche le kar aao jaldi se." Mrs. Shekhawat said to Neha.

"Haan maa abhi lati hoon", saying this she was about to leave when someone caught her hand. "Ye kya badtameeji hai?" saying this she turned and found "Tum yahan kab aaye?"

Here Pooja and others gals brought to bring Naina and Rajveer. First Naina was brought and soon after that Raj came along with his friends; when he saw Naina he was speechless. She wore a pink n purple color saari with heavy embroidery (as purple was dress code of gals) and she made a bun with her hairs. Two strings of hair were left loose which were swinging at her face freely. Raj felt an urge to put both of them behind her ears. She wore simple an elegant jewelry with it which was making her more beautiful.

The music started playing around him

Tum ko paaya hai to jaise khoya hoon,

Kehna chahoon bhi to tum se kya kahoon;

Kisi jabaan me bhi vo lafz hi nahi'

Ki zin me tum ko kya tumhe bata sakoo..........

Mai agar kahoon tum sa hassi,

Kaynaat me nahi hai kahin''''

Tareef ye bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi''''..

He was mesmerized completely.

shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein,

chehre se jhalki hui hain
zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein,

shaan se dhalki hui hain
lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani,

roop ki chandani
main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi,

hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Her state was not different too when she saw Raj she was lost in his charm and in his cute face. He was really looking hot. 'Shayad meri kismet itne acchi hai ki mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki Raj mera hai'she thought. He was really looking superb in his black suit (it was guys dress code) with purple shirt. Koi bhi ladki jo pehle baar milte us se she would really fall for him aisa tha hi vo and specially when he smiles he looks so cute. When she saw him gazing constantly her'she blushed.

tum huye meherbaan, to hai yeh dastaan - 2
ab tumhara mera ek hai karwaan,

tum jahan main wahaan

Raj ko pata nahi dil me kitne ehsaas aa rahe hain vo bilkul khoya hai Naina me; pata nahi kitne din aur vo door reh bhi paayega, ya nahi Naina se.Naina ko bhi lag raha hai aisa koi force hai jo us ko Raj ki aur keech raha hai.

main agar kahoon humsafar meri apsara ho tum ya koi pari
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon
kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun
main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen,

kaynaat mein nai hai kahin
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi.........

Guys replies kam aa rahein hain so pls reply in huge number and if u r a silent reader than pls reply to let me know that if u like it or not.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

Hi Dear

seems dat i'm the first 1 to reply..Update was too gud n interesting..👏👏👏.

All of us were expecting dat Neha wud suggest dat Raj shud take Naina in his arms..n it happened too but in a different way..dat was really cute.😉

Raj is completely in love with Naina n so is she..Neha n Raj fight a lot in the same way as i fight with my brother..Dat is the beauty of this fiction..the emotions dat it potray is very real n close to real life.😊

Who is the 1 who pulled Neha??????❓

Wat was written in dat letter?????????The song u chose was too gud.perfect timing.I think Raj n Naina compliment each other ..❤️

Do update soon n please dont ever think dat your fiction is boring.😛

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Rituka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

awesome
too good
aur woh letter mein kya hai jo neha dena bhul gayi, hope nothing bad.
update soon..........

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

that was simply amazing

and what was in that letter

plz continue soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

Neha suggestion that raj should carry niana in his arms was perfect...par raj aur naina bhi na itna sharmate hai ki sharam bhi sharma jaye.....

Enjoyed all the teasing and leg pulling that neha did to raj and naina....

Raj is completely in love with naina.....he cannot wait till morning and so carries naina in his arms while she is sleeping....naina is also falling in love with raj....

pooja is joining KMA....and she is neha's friend....than i think that neha will also join the army...

What was in the letter that was delivered for raj???

Raj is stunned to see how beautiful naina was looking in her pink saree...

please update soon

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#179

updt was fantastic.......rn wer superb!!

liked neha n rajs convo.............

nice choice of song der.....

bas ab woh letter koi gadbad na create kare!!!!!!!

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#180

Ye Raj n Naina ka kuch nahi hone wala !😕 yaar y they blush so much
woh bhi bina wajah😆jab wajah milegi toh kya karenge 😉
waise update is nice....Neha ka plan kam kar gaya.Raj so cute 😳 n romantic..........but what is this letter about.........n u know what m going to say now! what else than UPDATE ASAP....